Liberty

Oh I thought I had subscribed but I actually didn’t!! 😭 Sorry y’all. Anyway…

@rae

I’ll be praying for you too! ❤️ If you need some encouragement or just someone to talk to, I’ll be here. 💖 God sees you. I know He does. You can take comfort in Him and His Word. I know I have and when you trust Him and are fully devoted to Him, it changes y…[Read more]

@beth-torres

That’s great that they don’t bother him too much! It took my brother some time to get used to, because he’s more sensitive to needles. I still can’t imagine being a three-year-old though and trying to understand what’s going on.

@jonas

Jeptune? 🙄 I have no idea where she is rn. Jeptune is an odd slyiad, sometimes she acts insane, other times like a strict school teacher (she actually is Chase Duke’s school teacher, and since slyiads are the natural rivals of shyiads, things go very badly for Chase since he can’t control his powers yet.) Actually, rn she could be anything…[Read more]

@beth-torres

That’s good! Does he do okay with needles?

@rae @whalekeeper

I have a girl character that I’m working on. Just started creating her the other day for a WIP floating around in my head. (Actually, all I have are the character ideas, not the idea for the WIP they’re in XD) Anywho, I’d like to develop her more if y’all want one of you charries to have a date. She’d love that. XD I don’t exa…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Looks like she struck again XD

@traiblazer

@savannah_grace2009

Lol, looks like Wyoh was toying with your post XD

@whalekeeper

I know a girl I could add at last resort for him…her name is Narray Nayhelm, but everyone calls her Nar. Afraid of nothing, (especially blood) and also really nice with sometimes a motherly quality with her patients. She’s a doctor, but at the age I would add her to the RP (age fifteen) she’d be considered by the Realn an…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, sorry, now I get it.

Burning tears in silence fall
Mingling with the shattered glass.
Still I watch the moonlight pale
As shadows flicker, while He walks past
Idt that’s any better either, but it’s all I really can think of. Your style is very different from mine, but I like it a lot 🙂

With skillful fingers, it is He who selects
A piece of glass now darkly stained
And edged in silver carefully sets
It in my empty window frame.

Idk if that’s any better.

Shard by shard He slowly builds
Varied hues where once was clear,
Shaped and cut – my window fills
From brokenness to beauty.

@koshka

I dabble a little in poetry and honestly have no talent for it, but my favourite verses are the two last. Why? Because it feels right somehow. I would help you out more, but I’m afraid I don’t reckonize your style well. I apologize for how little help I can offer.

Problem is, before the dance, I need to find him a date. Either someone super nice or someone who can relate to him like no other…someone who’s super nice would be better, since he really needs a pick-me-up most the time.

Ugh! I gel like someone who sets their brother or son up with a blind date!

Chase Duke

Chase dropped his head into his folded arms, waiting for the dance lessons to begin. At this point he wanted it over and done with.

I imagine Chase as a good dancer since he is actually very aware of how his body moves. He also has a gentlemanly undertone if you can pierce the blackness.

@scoutfinch180

Oh dear…I think I have failed as a writer.

It’s currently around twenty two o’clock for me, so I can’t fully reply rn (and dont have much energy or will either) but I will say that a few of your edits are mistaken…and it’s totally my fault!

I can’t believe I really liked this chapter!

@overcomer

Here’s the poem I’ve been struggling with. The first and fourth stanzas irritate me the most.

I also have no idea who to tag for this anymore (the last thing I submitted for critiques was some time ago) but feel free to tag anyone.