@jenwriter17
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ella changed their profile picture 3 years, 3 months ago
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ella replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
i’m so sorry, but i’m really busy with my job. I wish I could, and your story sounds fun! i love fantasy. wish you the best of luck. you might be able to find more beta readers on Story Embers, or you can search for the “ultimate beta reader list” on Recent Topics. I can’t remember the tags off hand. good luck! <33
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Kathleen started the topic Have you ever pantsed a novel? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 3 months ago
After reading Grace’s most recent article on pantsing, it got me curious about how many on here are pantsers. And of those who are, if you have any techniques or tips you use to keep your story in order and not coming out as a complete mess haha. XD
I’m more of a meticulous planner, but I’m considering pantsing a short story so I’m looking for…[Read more]
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ella changed their profile picture 3 years, 3 months ago
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ella replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
hahaha whales can be pretty intimidating.
I love board games!  My little bro and me have a Memory rivalry (which isn’t rlly a board game).
ooo Gollum impersonation sounds like my sister!🤣🤣 that’s her favorite pastime.
archery sounds awesome!  I bet you’ll be amazing!  My BFF is super good at archery PLUS she is basically Jennifer…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline Sounds good! I’m just working on my novel and studying. I have no idea if you’re still around currently, or what time it is in America rn…
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
@lewilliams I just looked up the Keeper of the Lost Cities series and it sounds really interesting. How are the characters? (I’m seriously considering ordering yet another book from the library lol)
That’s been happening a lot lately to me too recently. I used to stick up my nose to classics because I thought they were dull and…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline Hello! How are you doing? What are you working on?
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
That’s interesting. It would be cool to look back through the book to find what exactly it was missing that made you unable to connect. That’s what I love to do when I read a book I don’t like. Pinpoint everything little thing that made me dislike it. It really helps me out with my writing.
Ooo, what book was the best book you’ve read…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline this is right up my alley, girl! I LOVE parallel characters with different arcs!!!!!!! ❤ Keziah sounds AH-MAZE-ING! I just *internally squeals* love her already.
Like @godlyfantasy12 said, I mentioned some things corresponding to this on her “Making my antagonist likeable/believable” topic. To echo that, I’ll just cut and pas…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Hello! Is anyone around? I’m currently studying, plus writing, plus reading over an old story so I can decide how to rewrite it. Anyone wish to join a lonely Australian?
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ella posted an update 3 years, 3 months ago
@imwritehere1920 your website is adorable! SOOO cute! And of course, so is your bunny XD
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Hi Ella! Thanks so much visiting! Glad you like it.
Aww, thanks! We have wild bunnies in our backyard and we feed them during the summer. Sometimes, if you hold really still, and squat down low, they’ll come close enough to take their picture! 🙂 Do you have any wildlife around your house?-
That’s awesome! I love trying to take pics of wildlife (but it can be pretty frustrating bc most animals don’t appreciate it 😉) I live in the south so we get a lot of reptilian things… XD Snakes, lizards, even scorpions! Not as cute as bunnies, but still pretty interesting. XD In the mornings on my way to school I often see deer too. And…[Read more]
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Haha! My mom got a camera awhile back and has been trying to take pictures of our hummingbirds. Yeah, if only wildlife would cooperate!
We live out in the country, so we see snakes and lizards too. One four foot gopher snake just slithered by like nobody’s business, and weirdly, two quail were marching behind him …. why? Not sure 🤷…[Read more]
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That’s so cool! That’s hilarious, quail marching behind him? LOL! I know, scorpions are just… freaky. I found a dead one in our pool and I didn’t go in for about a week! XD I don’t think I’ve been able to get a pic of deer bc it’s basically “ooo, look, a deer!” and everyone’s like “where?” then I’m like “nevermind, it’s gone.” XD I will…[Read more]
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Yikes! I know, right? One time, I went to our bedroom closet, turned, and BOOM! One was sitting there on the wall! I heard a pastor refer to scorpions as sneaky. Yep. Definitely sneaky!
Haha! Yeah, it’s like that in our family. We’ll be driving along, someone sees a deer, and by then it’s gone. I hope you get that picture someday!
Cool!…[Read more]
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Oh that’s terrifying! Thanks 😉
Awesome! My favorite subject last year was geometry and this year I’m really looking forward to biology. I didn’t have a great experience in my literature class but I think this year will be great.
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ella replied to the topic I am will starke. i do indeed be him! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
@will_starke Those shades are dope if anything is.
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ella replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey @akbaer ! Sorry I’m late… Welcome to KP! I am Ella and I love writing dystopian fiction, drinking tea, playing sports, and drawing flowers. And I have an irrational fear of falling into the murky river near our house. *cough* *smiles, wondering if we can still be besties* XD
Excuse me if these questions have already been asked, bu…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
Haha 😛 I’m a qualified dog trainer and trained dogs professionally before the pandemic and I’d like to get back into it in a few years, I mostly read animal behaviour books to deepen my knowledge. But I do also like reading them for curiosity’s sake.
Hmm… personally I’m not sure what I would have done different. It seemed to me…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
Ooo, that sounds really cool. The vibe sounds like something I’d definitely be into.
Did you have any favorite characters in the book?
Animal behaviour books? Is there a reason, or do you just like to learn about animals? I’m intrigued haha. XD
Oof. Yeah, pretty much every story hinges on the characters. If I don’t…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
There are some surprisingly good Star Wars books out there. Like better than the movies good.
A negative character arc? Man, I now have to order it from the library now. XD
Have you read any other Star Wars books or was Lost Stars your first?
My brother has been telling me to read Children of Hurin and the Silmarill…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
This guy sounds fascinating! His backstory is awesome, and he sounds like a genuine character. For likeability, you could:
1)Â Give the MC and Ridley something in common (a hobby, a genre of music, a favorite food, etc)
2) like @elfwing said, moments of vulnerability. That would make the reader open up to him really fast…[Read more]
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