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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?
also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae oh ok! All the ideas you’ve told us so far are really interesting though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
How does your alien manage to be socially appealing and completely clueless at the same time? XD
lol I think this is the first time Dante has even set foot inside a school so he is very clueless about certain things. I considered making him illiterate one time but decided his sister probably wouldn’t allow that
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
And once again Whaley shows off her amazing psychic powers! ✨
XD You read my mind again. I already had a bit written where he gave them all cleaning and kitchen duty and made some of them miss the dance, but I like how you wrote it more.
And you’re totally fine writing Gregory. He’s just a side character I don’t care too much…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh dear! Well, if you want to, you can send me your email, and I can share the Google Docs file with you. That’s totally up to you, though.
Sorry that the link isn’t working! I hope it’s not like this for everyone.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Lol that’s not working for me either! Maybe my computer just doesn’t like the link.
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, no! Sorry, just forget what I posted above. That’s not what worked!! I don’t know why the new link doesn’t open with you just clicking it. However, this is how I got it to work. I highlighted it by lightly clicking it, not so it would open, but just so it would highlight the entire line by itself. Then, I copied it (using…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hmm. I tried that, but even with the new tab, it was giving me the same message. It’s a similar message to the one it gives me when the internet disconnects, but I checked and my internet connection is fine right now, so that shouldn’t be the issue.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Also sorry about this, I’m treating Gregory as an NPC right now… is that okay?
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, I clicked the new link and it says there’s an error, but if you click and hold with two fingers, the option should appear “Open Link in New Tab.” If you click that, it should open. Of course, I’m using a mac. I think it’s a right-click on a PC to get the options panel.
Let me know if this works!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
How does your alien manage to be socially appealing and completely clueless at the same time? XD
Hi! :] Yes, Navin. There is always a possibility they bite XD
Sebastian
“I still carry illegal firearms,” Seb muttered.
”What was that?”
“I think we can all agree, I started it. So I take full responsibility sir,” t…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
No, it just gives me a message that “this site cannot be reached”. I hit the reload button but it didn’t make a difference.
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html
Okay, I’ve posted it here again but made it clickable. Does this work?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m using my laptop.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Ooh, you like photography? That’s awesome!
Yeah it sort of runs in the family, lol. My dad and my grandpa are both into photography, too, and my one cousin has done some professional photography.
There’s so many ice cream flavors to choose from, but I guess I would have to say chocolate fudge or cookies and cream are two contenders for…
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Hi! I’m so sorry I took a billion years to reply. For some reason, I’m having a difficult time writing right now on here. And I’m good with our characters finding others!
Navin
He nodded in reply, studying the door and giving it a mean look like it were an enemy.
The people in there probably don’t bite… actually, no, there’s always…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Are you using an iPhone or a computer? On my computer, it works fine. If it’s not working on your computer, I’ll have to find a different way to post it.
Hey, Esther, is it working for you?
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness… Say Love by JoJo is such a perfect song for my character Belle (to her husband Walt)…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
I tried to copy the whole line, but I think it was so long it disappeared off the page and wouldn’t let me get all of it.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Janessa, aka Trailblazer- because I love mountains and hiking. I also do photography as a hobby, and I enjoy reading, too. I write mainly historical and contemporary fiction, but I’ve done some mystery and a bit of journalism too.
Hmmm… all the questions I usually ask have already been asked, lol! Let’s try some…[Read more]
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