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How is everybody else’s writing been going today? Smooth sailing? I just (sort of) finished Newton’s chapter, but it needs some editing lol. I’ve been wanting to remake some more collages but I’ve been feeling 0% inspired *sigh*

@godlyfantasy12

Girl, I am SO SORRY I never responded to your message, but I just wanted to say that’s such amazing progress! You go, girl!!! 🙂 And I’m so happy that you submitted your short story! (I saw it whenever you posted it, but I must’ve forgotten to reply) Anyways, I’m excited for you and honestly think your story/characters are so cool! 😀

@daisy-torres

I just finished reading the prologue. I actually don’t have any critiques for it; it was amazing:D

@Abigail-m

Thanks!! 🙂

@libby

Those sound like great characters! 🙂

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Those are awesome characters, I especially like Faye:)

@Kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @nova21 @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @writerlexi1216 @scoutfinch180 @wyn-rose @gracie-j

Everyone has such awesome characters! 😀

@gracie-j

Thank you! 🙂 💗 You too!

@gracie-j

Yup!! She lives in a rural, earthy village named Gressan, which sort of reminds me of a Scottish countryside. And they have a lot of reindeer there (not, like, the flying ones or anything lol) #coolestjobever

@devastate-lasting

Hey, that’s really neat! Love the depth/shading! 🙂

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Whoa! That’s so cool! Y’know, I thought about trying to draw some manga before 😀

@gracie-j

Lol, thanks, girl!! 🙂 Quotes are one of my favorite things to write!

@lewilliams

Haha, thank you!! I love Caira and Alana because they’re total opposites, and yet they’re best friends. It’s fun to write their dialogue/interactions 🙂 And Deek and Newton are great, too <33333333

Thanks! I need to polish it a little more… but she has some powerful (and quite humorous) quotes 😀

@lewilliams

Of COURSE!!!  🙂 Yayayayay!! I’m looking forward to more (hint hint)!!! ^o^

@lewilliams

Thank you so much, Elizabeth!!!!! <33333 I started smiling sooooo big when I read that!!! I’m super happy you were hooked (and thanks for taking the time to read it; I know my chapters are quite lengthy)!!! Oh, you’re not the only one *cries on the inside and wishes I could have an owl*

Thank you so much! I try to put in extra effort…[Read more]

So here’s some more lines that I enjoy! 🙂

Here’s a sweet/sad one…

<p style=”text-align: left;”>Newton to Caira : I can’t lose you, Caira, because if I did, I’d lose the only person I’ve ever believed in.</p>

<p style=”text-align: left;”>Here’s another one that I like…</p>

Caira : True power doesn’t come from a throne, coronation, or b…

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@kathleenramm

Same, girl, same… None of my characters have ‘happy’ lives at the moment lol.

I would most likely choose my MC’s best friend, Alana. She lives with her tribe in a rural village on the outskirts of the kingdom, with her grandmother. Alana is a reindeer shepherdess, and is very tomboyish and retains a positive outlook on just a…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, fun idea!!  Let’s see…  None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow.  I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude.  And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]

@lewilliams

OH MY WORD I love those!! I love the second-to-last one so much because that sounds exactly like something Caira would say (not that she’s a water mage). I absolutely love the “Horace, we’re out of milk” line 😀 (By the way, Horace is an excellent name!)

@graice-j

IKR?? I thought the name ‘Maverick’ fitted him, but I fell in love with ‘Deek’ more XD If you wanna hear his first-ever name… *gulps* … it was Gabriel, which does not fit him at all lol. I only went with Gabriel because he belonged to an entirely different series which I completely scrapped about a year ago.

Some of Caira’s…[Read more]

@nova21

Awwww, girl THANK YOU!! Your feedback is super helpful (and encouraging, as always 🙂 ) Thank you for taking the time to read it (because I know my chapters can be looooong)!!!! Just a million thank yous for this AMAZING feedback!!! 🙂 <33333333