Felicity

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, cool chapter! Love it!! And of course, love Marcurious. 😁

You wanted to critique my writing too, I think? If you want you can use the same link, or I can make you a new doc. Whichever you prefer (:

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh… that’s very interesting. it seems like quiet a parallel… I guess it’s a conclusion anyone in their right mind might come too when working in such a awful place. I had no idea Fin had such a similar backstory! Fin becomes one of the good guys, right?

@jonas

I guess it would probably make the most sense to have all the powers be something similar, where the user redistributes a property of their body to other parts. That could be pretty cool, I guess. I could do this as sort of Feruchemy, but you just redistribute attributes across your body instead of storing them away (where you lose some of…

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@jonas

Yeah, that’s pretty much what I’ve been thinking. I’m definitely going to keep working on this one.

Sounds good!

That is what I was trying to say too. I guess I was being too concise to properly get across what I was trying to say. The reason I don’t like that is because light and darkness are both real, while voidflames are not. I would p…

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@jonas

Really? Huh. I didn’t know that. I feel like I’ve been aware of those terms for a super long time, but I didn’t read any of his books until last summer.

Oh, yeah lol! It came from him!

@a-r-kuhn @jonas

(KP just ate my post, so it may or may not randomly pop up in the following few days)

It’s too true! Unfortunately I end up nodding too much if I’m reading anytime past one. I can stay up for other things, but I can’t be sitting down. Sanderson is worth it though!

@rae

I officially label myself an idiot who can’t explain anything right!

 

Ugh! I’ll reply once I cool off…

Don’t label yourself an idiot:(

I look forward to your reply!

@a-r-kuhn

Hmm, I’ve never really thought of it in these terms… Let’s put it this way: There’s rules, but I might be the only one who knows them right now. Really depends on the world. I have one world with a complicated system of magic, and a different world where there’s not really any true magic, just people with native abilities. In the magic…

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@jonas

I don’t really have answers to any of those questions XD. I liked the idea of having a weird sort of fire like that, but yeah, it’s not very interesting yet. The magic system as a whole is not to far developed, so maybe when I have more details I can differentiate the two flames. Otherwise, I probably will get rid of it.

That’s fair! I thi…[Read more]

@rae

Proper amount of sleep? My amount of sleep is apparently four to six hours… Whatever.

🙃

I’m not sure exactly what you’re saying but what I was trying to say is, if the Universe knew no god who had all the Omni’s, then we… Idk how to say this… Would know no greater thing, so that would be the ultimate god. If that makes sense.

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@walkbyfaith

A little late, but I resolved to be more focused in general. Particularly with my relationship with the Lord. I have a relationship, and it’s constantly growing, but I want it in mind in every moment.

@a-r-kuhn

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom. I like math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and currently am working on a universe with my sister we call the Septrum.

Questions:

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the reader to f…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, so cinderblazing sounds interesting. What I want to know is what makes the voidflame different? Is it inherently evil, or is it simply the anti particle of cinderflame, and if so, in what ways does it have opposite behaviors?

I’m really intrigued by Shadowmancy. The way you describe the shadow realm makes me think of it as essentially…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! I started a few years ago with my Dad. When he had back problems he stopped eating it and things like chips and other junk foods. It helped him a lot and I decided that I would do the same to improve my overall health because I’m super active. I felt better after I stopped. But thats just my personal opinion, its…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have enough sugar….lol

Yeah, I used to do that too. Though after I stopped eatin…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!! Yeah, I will!

So, it’s realistic. I almost said contemporary, but I think I’m going to have it take place in the 90s. Because my dad lived in New Mexico for a few years, and I believe it was during that time. So I’m going to pick his brain and try to make it as realistic as possible. I won’t put it in the same town but I m…[Read more]

@a-r-kuhn

Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, gaming, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! Alright, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not a…[Read more]

@anyone

If anyones interested, I eat really healthy and have a whole bunch of recipes on my blog (Most of them are, I did make a few for my brother)

acancello.blogspot.com

And if you are interested, I can post more 🙂