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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)
Inglor
Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.
Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce them? I gotta clean some lol! So I’ll be a bit sporadic.
also who all has charries that likes to read? I’m wondering because…Paxton likes to read, but he’s not allowed to freely roam libraries and such (btw the academy has a HUGE LIBRARY) and if he’s caught in a library, bookstore etc he’ll get punishe…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”Ok? He was far from ok…
But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon hey who do u want Reúven and them to meet?
they could meet November and Ara if u like, or Lyn and Grimm. Up to u.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ma poor Paxton….
Paxton
Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.
He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.
Thankfully, no one came.
He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ahhhhh I love them soooo much….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Soren
“You messed up, Edrich.”
Aramis mocked a gasp, placing a hand over his chest. “He speaks!” He raised his hands, gesturing at Soren. “Oh great one, please deliver your knowledge and wisdom to us!” At the end of his sentence, he rolled his eyes, plopping himself back onto the be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Go ahead!
I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!
“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w
Y’all’s character is are so…so…AHH!! You have to save them, the poor, dear, charies!
Anyway…
Almarrin
Whispers all this morning were stirring the quiet anger inside him.
“From the second story…”
“…heard he just tripped…”
Almarrin slung his backpack over his shoulder,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Arabella
“Oh! Hello, Hope…” Ara smiled, though she was sure it didn’t meet her eyes. She unclenched her fists. “Sorry…just…a bit tense. Everything’s a bit hectic right now.”
Hope nodded, “Yea…I-I’m sure…”
Ara folded her hands, “I suppose we never got formerly introduced, but…well, we already know each other’s names,” Ara laughed lig…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH ALWIN YOU ARE BREAKING MY HEART!!!
GASP!!
I just had a thought…
I want Alwin to meet Paxton….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Jocelyn
As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.
No wonder Dawson became so tense…
Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…
It was…just so wrong.
Like so many other things she’d seen…
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Erica started the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
Hello! I would like some ideas on this scene.
Background: Christopher and Briana used to like each other, but then they got captured and Briana blamed it on Christopher. She is trying to convince herself that she hates him, though she still likes him. Christopher loves her, but he hates her for hating him. (does that make sense lol?) Currently…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
Yes! Eowyn struggles with depression and fear, like you said, and she’s not a feminist either.
I know! Faramir’s the one who stands up to Eowyn and tells her to stop trying to die in battle. He’s the one who really heals Eowyn. And the part where Eowyn finally accepts everything and agrees to marry Faramir . . . gives me…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
So um…who’s turn is it?
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Arien replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
I haven’t seen the LOTR movies either, because I’m also sensitive and I agree with you about the characters! From what I know, they completely misunderstood Eowyn. And Faramir. And they gave Elves pointed ears! Tolkien never said Elves had pointed ears! *takes a deep breath* Sorry about that, LOL.
Ooh, Screwtape Letters is…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Ah, okay, makes sense about him. Poor guy! I hope someone shows him the truth soon!
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