@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh boy…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Arabella
Wolf…Fox…
“Grimm and Nyx! You’ve seen them!” Luna cried, eyes sparkling. “Oh, then they are here!” A small smile lit her lips, her mind obviously not grasping the man’s sadistic grin…
The words he’d been implying before…
He’d met them…along with some others.
A blonde boy…<…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Thank you, that helps a lot!
I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features in my mind.
Thank you! I enjoy describing how I see the characters in my mind, but I didn’t want t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon anyone here?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Okay y’all!
Zlatan
The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.
Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.
There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h can we get started back here again?? K rlly wanna continue it!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Jocelyn
“Oh sure! This is my second year!”
“That’s really not that long…”
“Feels like it! Well…it’s my second year of high school. We came here for middle grade too. Well, our final years of middle grade anyway.” Lyn smiled, shoving the box of multi-colored pencils into her bright red and gold bag.
“By the by…” Lyn pursed h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”
Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”
“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”
“I bowe…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper
Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.
“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ahh Erich, I luv u lol!! But don’t go getting into trouble!! Tho…I feel like that’s where we’re heading!!
@elishavet-pidyon u on and want to RP with Reúven and them meeting Lyn and Grimm?
I’m finally on for a while!
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)
Inglor
Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.
Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce them? I gotta clean some lol! So I’ll be a bit sporadic.
also who all has charries that likes to read? I’m wondering because…Paxton likes to read, but he’s not allowed to freely roam libraries and such (btw the academy has a HUGE LIBRARY) and if he’s caught in a library, bookstore etc he’ll get punishe…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”Ok? He was far from ok…
But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon hey who do u want Reúven and them to meet?
they could meet November and Ara if u like, or Lyn and Grimm. Up to u.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ma poor Paxton….
Paxton
Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.
He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.
Thankfully, no one came.
He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ahhhhh I love them soooo much….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Soren
“You messed up, Edrich.”
Aramis mocked a gasp, placing a hand over his chest. “He speaks!” He raised his hands, gesturing at Soren. “Oh great one, please deliver your knowledge and wisdom to us!” At the end of his sentence, he rolled his eyes, plopping himself back onto the be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Go ahead!
I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!
“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?
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