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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76
The Gang
”Could you tell the type of song?”
”Type? What? It’s a song, idiot, how much more do ya need to know?”
November squinted, his face flushing; he was thankful no one else could hear his friend’s snarky replies.
Arabella placed a hand over her mouth, also paling. She shut her eyes and released…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be interesting! Or instead of getting caught maybe they just get seperated, that way we don’t have a “timeline” on when we have to find her, but the pressure is still on because they’re separated due to being chased by guards or something so he doesn’t know what’s happened to her (same with everyone else who was sep…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
The Gang
Corvina…
The name made Ara and November’s blood run cold. They’d forgotten about her in all of the chaos, but now…they remembered. She was here too.
Looking for them.
Even Lyn went silent, her eyes getting a far-off look, and Nyx’s fur bristled.
The moment faded however, when Nyx’s ears…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review what we know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon sounds good to me! As for a lot of charries, it is but ya know what it’ll be fine. We all end up going for a while without RPing anyway sometimes so I think it’ll be fine if we stay as a group (but maybe during the adventure one at point we get separated with different characters (like not with our own…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Lyn & Nyx
“Thanks!” Lyn smiled, bounding off to where he’d pointed.
No clue what a cistern is…but…whatever!
Eventually, after a few minutes of scrounging around, Nyx was able to figure it out, and she was able to get out some water for herself and her fox.
Nyx quickly lapped it up, splashing it on his whiskers.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon btw, do you want Ocran to meet Corvina??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka can I just say I am literally LOVING the interactions between all these different SOLDIERS?!?! LIKE BRUUUUUHHHH
The part when Mikkel goes after Ezra and talks to him like a soldier is like pure GOLD FOR MY HEART!!
anywhoodle
@elishavet-pidyon u can go next btw
and hey y’all, would y’all wanna meet up bef…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Lyn & Nyx
“Slowpoke,” Lyn trilled, sliding to a stop near a tree.
”I beat you by a mile!” Nyx hissed playfully.
”Mm, sure.” Lyn grinned, looking back. She waved when she saw Alyona, sitting at the foot of a tree a few feet away. She knew the girl had followed her, and had welcome the game of chase initiated by…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon HERE!! And I’m gonna have to go thru and read the new RPs and new characters! And add them to my notes!
Arabella
I sucked in a breath of crisp, fresh air, allowing the cool breeze to blow strands of my hair back.
The garden was nothing like the one at home, which was to be expected. Nothing could top A’Grend after all…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
I only got to see the video recording of Jesus, too. We have friends who saw the show in theater, and they RAVED about it! Alas, I didn’t even know that the Theater existed when that show was playing!
I agree. All of the songs are amazing! The crew at S&S is so talented at choosing just the right words, melodies, instruments,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.
Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.
Vulkasin
A cool breeze welcomed them to the outdoors. Glorious, wonderful free air. No low ceilings or hanging rafters to bash out ones head off. The lady shone in the heavens,…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Yes, we did!!! I won’t torture you with a rant about it. 😉 All I’ll say is that it’s my favorite show they’ve done yet. It even beat Jesus, which I assumed was impossible! Plus, we met the actor who plays John (in Jesus) and Joab (in David); that was pretty cool. XD
Do you have a favorite song from the soundtrack? I think…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Packing Punches! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH yes, I definitely agree with you there! I love the artistic tidbits found in the Bible, and how it has some of the best imagery and patterns for writing. I mean take the book of Psalms, how much more BEAUTIFUL poetry can you get than that?!
Sweet!
Oh I love that! The paragraph is very short and concise so the use of the…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Hmm I do see what you mean there. Since I finished this piece, I kept getting the feeling that there was *something* not quite right; maybe this is it! Tysm for the feedback!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?
By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?
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Koshka replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Aahhhhhhh!!!!!!! Alwin, my dear lad…*sigh* That sounds awesome for a first chapter; definitely something I could get hooked on.
Honestly I’ve always envisioned your books to be more YA than middle grade, so don’t worry about that. Your themes will be more powerful to an older age group anyway.
Yes, it’s Mikkel! Thank you,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.
Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon yes! They’re there!
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