Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Please have a window, a ledge, something bigger than an archers loop! Well, maybe it it was tall enough… But he’d never get his shoulders through one of those. No way. Neyht. Nol.

Victor smiled. “Yes, there’s a window.”

Joy! “How high?”

“About ten feet.”

“Ah.”…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon bruh Lyn would also have a grand time scaling to a tower window XD November…probs not cuz he be like “I’m gon fall…it’s gonna happen XD”

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka

November

November had latched onto one of his hobbies. “You write? Ara likes to read,” He smiled to himself, imagining all the times he’d watched her becom…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon y’all wanna initiate a convo? Idk XD

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Crosshair

The girl proceeded to explain. “No. Yes….but not in our country. But in Dorwain, they sometimes do it.”

Dorwain? He’d never heard of it.

“A captain will sometimes brand his own soldiers. Especially if they’re captives.” She shuddered.

He almost felt like shuddering too.…[Read more]

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon y’all wanna go? You can get us walking if ya want

@koshka @freedomwriter76

also, while we’re headed there why don’t converse with the charries? That way it’s not just us walking XD

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76

November

Alyona’s last comment had left a bitter taste in November’s mouth. He swallowed. Hard.

He tugged at his curls anxiously, his neck starting to sweat. Who would…purposely brand someone?

Then again…November had come to learn that the world around him wasn’t all peaches and…[Read more]

@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.

Crosshair

“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I love them all! Dang, you’re really good at interesting dialogue. That first one is both adorable and hilarious, and that last one is so sweet 🥰

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

I tried!

Zlatan

“You would do well to leave the bite out of your voice.” the lad was gripping the hilt at his side, but he didn’t draw.

Zlatan quietly replaced his own blade. He liked this boy.

Slowly, Victor released his grip. “We need to find a place to wait out the night. I know…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76

The Gang

Nyx’s hackles had immediately raised at Crosshair’s tone. His tired head lifted in a piercing gaze and his ears perked.

Viktor’s hand flew to his side but Lyn was too busy focusing on her companion to pay any mind to others around her.

Thankfully, Viktor eventually calmed the situa…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you, that’s an interesting thought. I think I shrugged it off too quickly in my story…

THank you all for your help

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen-of-alvastia I’d be a Throne Warden, cause I’m the oldest, which is kinda cool. And my brother would eventually be king….that would be weird.

And my mom was the middle child in her family! That means she’d be queen!

@elishavet-pidyon

That sounds amazing!! 😮😮

Yeah, it’s my biggest writing dream. Ever. Period. I started one at one point but the symbolism was what tripped me up most…

@whalekeeper

Yep, same as @elishavet-pidyon. I’m subscribed here, so I always read whatever everyone says.

So, since apparently, you’ve read the Wingfeather Saga, (at least I hope you have), who’s your favorite character?

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Crosshair

One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”

Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.

“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76

Arabella

All eyes turned to focus on their group. Ara frowned at the attention and reached for November’s hand. She allowed a piece of her hair to fall over one eye, hoping to hide some of the stares.

Her anxieties had gotten better since their recent adventure with Lyn and Nyx, but the t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 you wanna go next?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

I’m sorry y’all. For some reason I can’t seem to get anything written and sent in. Don’t wait for me if you can help it. I’ll try to jump back in as soon as possible.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on?

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.

Crosshair

“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.

Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted,…[Read more]