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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Someone was coming. Mikkel switched off the safety, his mind switching with it.
A sword drew beside him, another in behind, one pistol was out.
Rikker hadn’t drawn his weapon, though his fingers wrapped around it, knuckles white.
Strange.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 yea I think we’ll finalize it once we get to that point. But for sure Viktor, November and Riker, and Zlatan, Nyx and maybe Eva?
thats 2 groups.
Anyone wanna RP?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan totally needs to get separated from his brother, and maybe Vulkasin needs it too.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon BAHAHAHA THE WAY YOU PUT THE OR TRIED TO KILL EACH OTBER CRACKED ME UP cuz that is legiiiiiit I feel they would totally be like that.
Cuz Corvina would get totally fed up with his pompous attitude and be like
“Bruh….”
XD I luv her.
and he’d be like “HOW DARE YOU XD”
OOH OOH!!! Viktor should be with November! Idk I just thin…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH NARRRRRRRRRR
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon PREPARE FOR TROUBLE
(and make it double) #teamrocketreference XD
ALSO OH MY WORD THE PROPOSAL SRSLY SOUNDS LIKE NOVEMBER!!!!! Like…his proposal would srsly be like that and I have a feeling Ara would just laugh and be like “A thousand times yes!” Before he even gets the q…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Please have a window, a ledge, something bigger than an archers loop! Well, maybe it it was tall enough… But he’d never get his shoulders through one of those. No way. Neyht. Nol.
Victor smiled. “Yes, there’s a window.”
Joy! “How high?”
“About ten feet.”
“Ah.”…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon bruh Lyn would also have a grand time scaling to a tower window XD November…probs not cuz he be like “I’m gon fall…it’s gonna happen XD”
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka
November
November had latched onto one of his hobbies. “You write? Ara likes to read,” He smiled to himself, imagining all the times he’d watched her becom…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon y’all wanna initiate a convo? Idk XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Crosshair
The girl proceeded to explain. “No. Yes….but not in our country. But in Dorwain, they sometimes do it.”
Dorwain? He’d never heard of it.
“A captain will sometimes brand his own soldiers. Especially if they’re captives.” She shuddered.
He almost felt like shuddering too.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon y’all wanna go? You can get us walking if ya want
also, while we’re headed there why don’t converse with the charries? That way it’s not just us walking XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Alyona’s last comment had left a bitter taste in November’s mouth. He swallowed. Hard.
He tugged at his curls anxiously, his neck starting to sweat. Who would…purposely brand someone?
Then again…November had come to learn that the world around him wasn’t all peaches and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.
Crosshair
“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love them all! Dang, you’re really good at interesting dialogue. That first one is both adorable and hilarious, and that last one is so sweet 🥰
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I tried!
Zlatan
“You would do well to leave the bite out of your voice.” the lad was gripping the hilt at his side, but he didn’t draw.
Zlatan quietly replaced his own blade. He liked this boy.
Slowly, Victor released his grip. “We need to find a place to wait out the night. I know…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
The Gang
Nyx’s hackles had immediately raised at Crosshair’s tone. His tired head lifted in a piercing gaze and his ears perked.
Viktor’s hand flew to his side but Lyn was too busy focusing on her companion to pay any mind to others around her.
Thankfully, Viktor eventually calmed the situa…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic Please Help: I need a character to fall off a roof and survive but be realistic in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
Thank you, that’s an interesting thought. I think I shrugged it off too quickly in my story…
THank you all for your help
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen-of-alvastia I’d be a Throne Warden, cause I’m the oldest, which is kinda cool. And my brother would eventually be king….that would be weird.
And my mom was the middle child in her family! That means she’d be queen!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
That sounds amazing!! 😮😮
Yeah, it’s my biggest writing dream. Ever. Period. I started one at one point but the symbolism was what tripped me up most…
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years ago
Yep, same as @elishavet-pidyon. I’m subscribed here, so I always read whatever everyone says.
So, since apparently, you’ve read the Wingfeather Saga, (at least I hope you have), who’s your favorite character?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”
Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.
“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]
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