Elishavet Elroi

@nova21

I’m flattered. Anytime!

@precious-y

If you want reading suggestions, I know plenty of good books. Into whimsical humor? Percy Jackson and the Olympians. Historical growth and women’s rights? Little Women. (I don’t really know what you’re interested in other than fiction and historical, so forgive any blubbering on my part.)

Maybe you’d like Crown of Feathers by Nicki…[Read more]

@nova21

Maybe during the course of the series there could be a goal he’s striving to achieve. I know it’s getting home, but will the getting home stretch over the whole thing, or just one book? If it’s a single book, then maybe give him a larger goal, like to find the meaning of what it’s like to know you’re loved, but make it a development that…[Read more]

@precious-y

Hullo! Welcome! I’m Anatra, and I love writing fantasy and reading nearly everything fiction.

Random question, have you heard of or seen the Marvel Cinematic Universe? If you have, more randomly, which Spider-Man is your favorite? Tom Holland, Andrew Garfield, or Toby Maguire?

Your WIP sounds interesting, and I can’t wait to hear…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 Absolutely, anytime. Thanks for the read.

@scoutfinch180 if I may, I simply glanced at KP for a moment, but now after reading this, I want more of its kind.

I love this captivating little tale. Criticism I don’t have much of here, it was pretty compact, perhaps a little less scene description if you’re really trying to shave it down further. Maybe explore more of the curiosity that the…[Read more]

@hrothgar42 Welcome!

Happy you’re here. Pls tell me if you’ve seen of if you like the Lord of The Rings and if you cried like I (nearly)did.

@abigail-m Maybe A Warriors Heart or Goofhack the Blabber.

@daisy-torres Technically all socks have holes, if they didn’t you couldn’t get your feet in them (so perhaps hoping for everyone’s socks to be holeless isn’t as good an idea as first I thought. Or maybe it’s better! *evil snicker*)

@ariel-f If you would like to look into military b strategy you might want to look at The Art of War by Sun Tzu. If…[Read more]

@power

Oh my goodness, first, welcome, Power. Glad ur here. take some macaroons. enjoy.

second,

You justl isted like, THREE OF MY FAVORITE BOOK SERIES. WIngfeather Saga is incredible. Especially for Andrew Peterson’s first book series. I don’t even care the age demographic it was listed for. Narnia will always hold a very special place in my…[Read more]

@power

These are great! I love reading through them. Can’t wait to see if you have more.

Green Embers tho, like the book series? I just started those books again abt a month ago. They’re really good.

 

 @daisy-torres Yay, glad of that I could make y’all laugh!

Green Ember not Embers

Here’s some Green Embers poetry

Morbin

The big black bird

High in the sky

His sickle swings

And rabbits do cry

 

The fear of his talon

His mighty screech

His sharp beak

His far reach

 

All in Morbin

Just a bird

But for miles

His cry can be heard

 

So this is why

The rabbits fear

Because a hawk

Can destroy what’s dear

 

But I…[Read more]

   @hallie-jean Thanks for the kind words! I also only dabble in poetry, here and there, once a blue moon (I “might” have chosen my best ones for my grand entry 🙄(Have to make a good impression right!)).
   And no, I don’t think it’s bad that you relate to them. These poems in particular were written at times when I was feeling some of the emo…[Read more]