Jaybird

@loopylin

Yesss

I am probably looking more for scene ideas @whalekeeper tbh, lol. I’m kinda in the middle, where Leon/Riker are def plunging into the darkest before they finally come to the light, a darkness that will probably last for several chapters (although there WILL be good scenes happening too! <3).

Either way, Riker’s guilt/shame is about to worsen…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ty for the advice and resources!

@freed_and_redeemed

So glad y’all are safe!! Yes, God is so amazing!! 💕💕

@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol

who wants to read more Leon and Riker???

perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂

anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo

Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…

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Thank y’all for the prayers. My family and I are completely safe; the tornadoes we were expecting didn’t come to our area, thank the Lord, and we’re all safe and sound <3

in fact, a bit of praise, there was a tornado in one area that was confirmed to be on the ground, but right before it got to the town…it lifted back up into the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

Everyone pls pray for me, my family, and friends. Our area is in a 4/5 risk for tornadoes all day long and prayers would mean a lot 🙏

To anyone that sees this, please pray for my family and friends and everyone that could be in the storms today.

Where I live is at a risk of 4/5 for tornadoes and welllllll, this time marks 50 years since a massive tornadoes outbreak that completely ravaged my state.

Everyone is just pretty anxious, especially my Mom, so pls pray…it would…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

🤣

I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee

SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)

but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩

I’m currently on…[Read more]

@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol

Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!

The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @esther-c @whalekeeper @rae @loopylin @anyone-I’m-forgetting

Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! <3 They were very kind and helpful and it means a lot that y’all took some time to respond💕

and don’t worry, Riker/Leon will both be fine!!

Eventually

😏

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness hi Min!! <3 It has been awhile, I’m sorry I haven’t been very active lately 🙁 I was actually just thinking about getting on and chatting with you ❤🥰

Life is going good!! I’ve been like really happy lately and it’s great :)) Yesterday was such a great day, Easter is always so good. And I’ve gotten to spend a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Okay, I’m back to finish going through your scene.

What are your thoughts on Aaron/Joash? Do you feel bad for them at all, or do they just seem like villains?

I understand them and what they are doing. While they don’t seem like total villains to me (I see them in both a realistic and historical context), I hate what they are…[Read more]