Jaybird

@freedomwriter76

Wow. You just wrote that today? This is first draft? I am…

*Groan*

You painted a vivid picture of this character in my head, and when he screamed I heard him. I have a definite love/hate relationship with this type of character. They wring my heart.

Because they’re real.

They’re all around us.

Their we go! It’s now loaded up top. Here’s also a little pic I drew of Slate 

 

Here’s a mood board I did of Slate Protector

@freedomwriter76

Awesome!

Yeah, the only good series I’ve found is Promise of Zion, by Robert Elmer.

Weird random question; are your Jewish MCs Messianic, Orthodox, or something in between? (I’m supposing they’re not just by heritage, but they could be, I suppose.)

@freedomwriter76

Thank you!

*Having snooped through all the rest of this board*

I love that you’re writing stories during the healing period after WWII! I haven’t found many good books set in that time (well, besides a couple nonfiction stuff, but anyhoo).

Here’s a collage for a novella I haven’t even hinted at on here, (So conniving) mostly as it has not a working title.

Or character names. For anyone. (I’ve written most of the first chapter without even an idea yet. And I plot. Not pants.)

Anyway, here’s my MC!

@godlyfantasy12

Aaaggghhhh! All I want to do now is somehow drag your published work out of the future, curl up in an invisible corner, and trade this world for A’Grend.

*Sigh*

The impossible wishes of an imagination.

@samuel-p-robbins Could you allow comments in the doc? You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but it makes it easier to leave more specific feedback.

*A catlike figure, draped in a dark cloak, slips noiselessly into the Kingdom Pen Hall. It slides up to a table and drops a parchment next to a miniature castle. Many apologies, it whispers, then vanishes into the shadows.*

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

 

Vulkasin

The air in this corridor felt heavy, Vulkasin almost had to focus…[Read more]

@wilder-w here’s a “love” poem

Dear Fallen Friend

my Heart is Torn

and Eyes do Burn

till the End

you were Loyal

 

such Sacrifice

Beautiful Blood

Mixed in brown Mud

Thanks for your Life

my Protector

 

you Rose to Fall

oh, Selfless Rose

how Much we Owe

to Guard us all

the Mighty Fell

 

Now we Must Fly

though my Breath catch

I…[Read more]

Look up S. D. Smith (The author of the Green Ember series), and scroll through his social media platforms (Try to go back a couple years) and website. He promotes his stuff through giveaways (Yes, bribes work), goals, and awesome quotes. I have watched his marketing over the past 5-8 year, and he has done very well.

p.s. Even though you might not…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

For my current WIP it would either be the themes or characters, as they are heavily intertwined. It’s the first project I was able to pin down a point of focus before starting the book.

(I don’t pants, however I’m not sure if what I do counts as plotting. I have nearly the entire storyline in my head, but only a few scenes figured,…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Totally!!! Of course there are those times they aren’t completely Biblicaly accurate, but I love them anyway. 😉

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to get something more submitted tonight, but if I can it will be way late so don’t wait for me. In fact I don’t know if I’ll have much free time for a bit; this week is already cramped.

*Sigh*

Vulkasin

Just at the name Viktor’s face blanched, jaw clenched. His hand trembled…[Read more]

@keilah-h @hallie-jean @e-m-trepke

Kent
Kent had been staying in the background. Making sure that none of the other three got behind him or out of sight.
The oddly dressed ape-thing named Feathers was pointing out a door. “I think this is it.  Hesh, Dark Player, can either of you get it open?”
Now this would be interesting to watch. The door wa…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Zlatan and Vulkasin

“She?” once again the conversation had shifted to that silent third person. Nyx.

Apparently the fox answered, because Ara turned to Victor and Alyona. “Any idea who she is?”

The siblings glanced at each other. “Ah.” Victor slipped something glinting into his belt. His mantle was…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry y’all. I just found time to actually sit down and write.

Vulkasin

Apparently Lyn had as much a desire to kill them all as his Endurance  Instuktor. The older Vulk’s voice kept calling back to him, Run till you drop, and v’en you do remember, I’m be’ind you. So keep going.

But Lyn was ahead…[Read more]

So this is weird and random, but could I introduce another character? Zlatan and Vulkasin will most likely be disappearing soon (I’m not sure when, but I’m ready for a change), and I’d like it to be seamless. He’s a fox, and I think I’d leave him that way.

@emilysf

Wowsers. =)