Jaybird

@freedomwriter76

I Want To Pummel Someone.

Hard.

Ooohhhh………..be glad I’m on the other side of the internet, buster.

And please, what happens next????

@freedomwriter76

You’re making me want to go make collages for all my various MCs, especially Mikkel and Wilkins.

Wait…you haven’t met Wilkins yet…I should definitely do one for him.

Anyway, as Elishavet said, I have marine family too, so Michael already had a special place in my heart. Also, is Asher a submarine captain?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Wowsers y’all. That was a lot more than I expected.

Sorry for not getting on. I try to stay off my phone on weekends.

OH, and @freedomwriter76 ? Michael and Mikkel definitely need to meet, both being marines (although Mikkel would be like ‘Sorry chap, I’m a King’s Mariner’).

@ava-blue

Oohhh yes. I love these 🙂

This is a (semi generic) development template I was sent a while back, and the primary one I use now.

I do wish some of the ones I use now had more into their personality, like MBTI questions and such.

Hope this helps!

@koshka thank you! Not even Grammarly caught that. There is more to the story, that snippet isn’t actually supposed to be the first scene. Bronwen is hunting rocky mountain elk in late autumn when she realizes she made a mistake whil navigating and she can’t find her way back; then the rest of the story is just an excuse to write about…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Exactly! The Bible shows many disturbing things, and that is exactly what they should be. Disturbing, NOT intriguing.

Our writing should show the darkness as what it is, both to give boldness because we know our enemy, and a warning to not be like it.

It matters where your focus is. Remember Lot’s wife? Although her feet were…[Read more]

@ava-blue

I’m randomly jumping in, but I did read it so…

For one, that’s a looong paragraph.

For two, there’s a typo in “If I only I could get a backdrop behind der verflixte Elche.”

Anyway, it sounds interesting! Is there more to the story?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…

He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.

Never lost control.

Zlatan closed his eyes.

Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.

Blink. Was that h…[Read more]

One paragraph along, over here! Here is the paragraph:

There’s Old Gimp. He’s straddling the skyline, bony antlers scraping winter-worn sod. A small harem of cows meander on the hillside below him, feeding on straggly grass. I just need him to come down from that saddle. The fallen leaves on which I’ve been lying prone for the last half hour are…

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@freedomwriter76 SO CUTE

I love the ice cream cone and the spongebob faces 😀 the picture of the little boy works perfectly for him!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.

He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.

“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”

The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

For a moment silence reigned.

Mikkel blinked.

“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

White hot fury.

Freezing passion.

Smell of blood.

The world went red.

.

.

He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.

“I’m sorry.”

He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.

Riker looker up his eyes wide.

“I’m sorry.”

@wilder-w
Let it shine
Let it shine
Let it shine!
Uh, =)

@godlyfantasy12

It’s fine! I like long ones, although I usually can’t write them.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

I KNOW!! He’s come so far…he has scars NO one knows about, besides the parents of the children those scars saved.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

If anyone else gets something in before me, ignore this please.

Zlatan

The man struck Riker.

Just like that.

This was not how a father should act.

This was like someone else Zlatan knew all to well.

He never felt himself moving. One moment he was standing behind Rikker. The next…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you.

Oh dear. Crosshair and Zlatan. That may not work out well. Which it totally fine. XD