Jaybird

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

*Waves*Hi!! Want some?

*Holds out a box of Aplets and Cotlets*

@felicity

I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.

And what draft is this?

@felicity

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!

And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Eira

The sidewalk was hard and my feet yearned for the soft dirt around the orphanage. Still, I kept up a vigorous pace. I’d be late if I didn’t hustle. My backpack kept shifting with each step, numbly jarring my back, but I had a rythum, and it worked. In a few more seconds I was within sight…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Your tag didn’t work 🙂

freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity

Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.

Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…

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@freedomwriter76

I get that!!! 😉

Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.

Maybe so. 🙂

Yeah!

Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD

🙂 XDD

Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉

Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6,  at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YESSSSS!!!! Tell it, sister!!! XDXDXDXD

YESSSS!!!! Hans is my least favorite. I think. It’s hard to choose between Adoulphus, Diethrich, and Has. THEY ARE ALL GOING DOWN!!!

You are sooo welcome!!! 😀 <3333

I’m feeling better already :)!!

Also, I just read your newest chapter, and it is SOOO GOOD!!!! LOVE IT!!

@freedomwriter76

Great chapter!

Um, here’s a thought from another side of things. Maybe don’t use it here, but it could be useful later? I don’t know.

There are other perfectly accurate ways to cover what Ruler has done, one of which I believe would work quite well. Instead of trying to hide it, have him say something like, “there are many ways…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

UGHHH RIKER!!!! PRECIOUS RIKER!! I LOVE HIM!!!

OH, and GREAT cliffhanger ;). I’m dying to know what happens!!

@felicity

Thank you sister! Sending a prayer up for you!!!

You’re so welcome!! Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3

Yeah I did, just one chapter…but somebody said they wanted more…I forget who…so I’ll probably put some more on here soon.

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I am so sorry I’m just now responding!! Thank you for tagging me :). I LOVE IT!!! OMG sweet Tauren and Lesli!!

And Keiryn!! I feel myself wanting to like him, but also, not. XDD But i’m starting to get a feel for him :).

That’s cool that they live underground! Unless it’s like a spoiler that you don’t want to share yet, you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! I’m good with that! @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings Thoughts??

@godlyfantasy12

NOOOO!!!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, I’ve been a bit worried for our little lad. As long as Ara can keep with him he’ll be fine. (I really love those two)

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH! I love it!

So, the normal human being part of me is horrified, but the history nerd author? She grinned through most of those chapters whispering “she got it right. She got it right!”

Although I am still a tad bit confused over their whole ‘still living in the same house as their father even though their Jews…’. this…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

I’ve been waiting for his elven flame since I first learned about it!!!! It was AWESOME!

Okay, so maybe I’m being a tad dramatic, but I did say I’ve been waiting a long time.

I can try to RP, only I don’t really know what to have anyone say or do, so I a little lost.

@freedomwriter76

Well then, Erich, Almarrin, maybe you two should run into each other. Although, is Erich going to the club? If so Almarrin can wait, but if not…who’s going to keep the ‘winged brats’ distracted enough not to notice their brother’s gone?

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Matthew

I leaned against the wall, fiddling with a string on my shirt. Then I heard footsteps. And voices. Me and the rest of the group stiffened, waiting for something to happen.

The heavy wooden door opened, and a group of people was revealed.

There was Kaine, another young man, and…[Read more]

We could have them run into a villian? IDk. Maybe?