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Light replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Glad you’re enjoying it!! I really enjoyed writing it!
Yeah!! Great 😊!
The plot points are hard to pin down. That’s definitely something I’m going to tackle on the second draft. Thanks for pointing that out!
Yeah, I get that. My book that I completely flopped last year was so out of order😂😅. Your welcome! Thanks for tagging me&#x…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Glad you’re enjoying it!! I really enjoyed writing it!
The plot points are hard to pin down. That’s definitely something I’m going to tackle on the second draft. Thanks for pointing that out!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
The TARDIS is actually from a tv show called Dr Who that started in the ‘60s.
Oh okay!! Cool!
I won’t be able to be on KP this weekend. Just wanted to let you know.
Alright! See you later😊!
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Esther replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
@everybody
These verses help to remind me why I’m writing and what I should be writing:
“The Preacher sought to find words of delight, and uprightly he wrote words of truth.”
Ecclesiastes 12:10 “My heart overflows with a pleasing theme; I address my verses to the king; my tongue is like the pen of a ready scribe.”
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Esther replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
Great topic!
I’ve done fantasy before, but the thing that could be considered “magic” was each tribe having a supernatural ability gifted by their Creator. There weren’t any powers that they could harness on their own, (even though their gifts could be used wrongly). There is definitely a line when writing magic. I like wh…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I love this!! I’m sorry I’m just now responding. I tried to several times but it got deleted before I could post 😅.
I love Ev and Ami so much!! There nicknames for each other are so cute! And I love Lukas!!
And the pictures you have are all so good!! The pic for Fynn is the same one that I was going to use for my charrie, Matthew. I cha…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I can readily agree with you about the first book. Compared to the others, it wasn’t that good. The series was recommended to me by a friend and I knew my cousin had read it, so I tried it. I did the first book for a book report and actually found it to be one of the easiest book reports I’ve ever done.
I agree with @elishavet-pidyon ab…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Civil War Novel Idea in the forum Historical 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks!! I like my characters too!! Lol I think I’ll make the moodboards soon!!
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I need to add more Lukas!! There are times I forget to. 😅
Yay!!
Thanks so much for the tips!! And there are a lot of important moments sprinkles throughout the book.
And yes, you should keep reading. Nothing outside the Orb is creepy. 🙂 -
Koshka replied to the topic When is dark writing no longer writing for God? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
Interesting topic, and very important.
I don’t write or read anything I would call dark, or that feels off to me. (However, some of what I write could be done in a very sickening/graphic/dark way. I don’t want that, and I won’t read that, so I’ve thought about this quite a lot for many reasons.)
As humanity, there is a…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
I’m sorry, I just saw your moodboard. IT’s SO GOOD!!! I love it ❤️😀!! Great job.
So I was just reading through y’all’s conversation, and you talked so much about Sam and Frodo…
Ahhhh!!!! Those two are my absolute favorite favorite characters of LotR. Admittedly I’ve only read the books, but that means I have a closer…
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I love this!! Each chapter gets better and better! You did really good showing the sibling dynamic. That sounds like our house 😂. I love to draw, and my little brother is always drawing on my drawings 😅😆. I love Natalyia! Her name is really similar to mine! My real name is Natalie 😊.
I could feel the tension when Tato (is that their…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh! And I think you would be a Lore Wain.
- Throne Warden
- High King/Queen
- Song Maiden/Master
- and on are Lore Wain
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I like the first book, but I can see how someone could be annoyed with it. The whole world took me by storm.
In fact, for me the hardest part in the series to read was between Artham’s capture and the Fork! Factory!. But that could have been from reading that part in the car… Yeah.
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I felt a little awful after reading the last book, but I love the end, really. Not the first time I read it through, oh no, not till I’d reread the last two chapters a half dozen times. And then wrote the next chapter with my sister. It helped to know what happens next, even if we wrote it ourselves.
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Light replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s great ❤️ Keep it up, that’s how it should be! 😊
Yes!! Thank you, we will!! 🙂
Wow, yeah. Even if they aren’t perfect, siblings are precious. Why would you ever take a bully to the movies with you instead of your sibling????
IKR?! Yes, siblings are precious 😊❤️.
LOL 🤣
Yep 😂❤️!
Oh yes, @starofthenorth is definitely a writer. ὠ…
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
I believe Tolkien wrote Sam as the central protagonist in a book with many other MCs. Frodo and Sam are the two most important, and the hobbits are the focus characters. Other MCs are Pippin, Merry, Aragon, ect.
I actually wrote a research argument paper over this question for college. It was quite interesting to dig into.
Uh oh, I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
Yes! I love Men of Iron! The characters are so beautifully complex, the settingis very well researched–one of the best of it’s time–, and the writing itself is just a joy to read.
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Koshka replied to the topic Do your characters tend to be more extraverted or introverted? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
That is funny. I’m more of an introvert, but I am one of those who don’t mind people, and want one or two close friends. That bleeds over into my characters a lot. =|
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Koshka replied to the topic Do your characters tend to be more extraverted or introverted? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
Hmm. I have an interesting range.
Zlatan in an introvert of sorts. He’s a very intense character who needs time alone but is also a strong leader.
Vulkasin is a complete extrovert, who has a thousand acquaintances and only a few close friends. (Somewhat due to circumstances)
Wilkins is an I. He needs one or two close friends, and a little time…[Read more]
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