Jaybird

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

I’m not sure what needs to happen, but I’m pretty sure neither Riker nor Zlatan would leave November, while Zlatan may order Vulka to lead the others away. What does November need to happen? I don’t like him getting hurt, and I don’t like that Shadow that was taking to him.

*Starts wondering where the protection squad is*

@lightoverdarkness6

I love this version a lot more than the first version!! I could feel the sibling dynamic even more and connected with Iris and Asher more easily. I can’t wait to read more if you ever share!!

@orielle21

Lol yeah. We thought about keeping it a secret at first and then we just couldn’t. 🤣

lol! XD

@booksandbeakers

I might have missed this, but how does Amidala’s dad feel about Ev’s dad? Do they get along well? Does Ami’s father ever talk to Ev’s father about the way he treats his kids?

Ooooh. Really great question, actually! 😅 I’m thinkin’ that may come up at some point in the second book, cuz the second book is going to be more focused on…[Read more]

@orielle21

I didn’t know that @felicity was your sister!!

@devestate-lasting

Hey!! I’m Esther! A volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, amatuer writer!!

I’ve been writing since forever, but my writing had become more serious in the past two years. Plus, KP has helped my writing tremendously!! My main WIP is a dystopian YA trilogy, but I have lots of other ideas for other boo…[Read more]

@gracie-j

*gasp*

EVEN BETTER!!!! I absolutely love it!!! Thank you so much for doing this!

@godlyfantasy12

Sorry that took so long to post.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Here’s a quick RP. Disregard it if it doesn’t fit, I won’t mind. =) My imagination just had to be satisfied.

The Twins

A feverish heat pulsed from the redhead now standing beside him. Fire flickered in the youth’s eyes. No…

Flames burst from Novembré’s hands, spreading rapidly up his arms. Vulkasin jerked…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Do you mind if I go? I have a minute right now, so I’ll probably RP.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @arien @felicity @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @loopylin @starofthenorth @princesachronicle22 @any-one-else-who-cares-XD

Okay!! Sorry this took so long. I revised the chapter, and added a little more. Freedom and Princesa, I don’t think y’all were on when I posted the before version. If you want to see the…[Read more]

My dear deer boi Illy 😌 Hopefully none of these are repeats

Ilwyn: Goodnight moon.
Ilwyn: Goodnight tree.
Ilwyn: Goodnight ghosts that only I can see.

Ilwyn: Physically, yes, I could fight a bird. But emotionally? Imagine the toll.

Ilwyn: I’m going to defeat you with the power of friendship! … And this knife I found.

Ilwyn: So apparently t…

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@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76

Next chapter y’all!! I know, I know… another plot point. XD I really need to slow it down. I believe that the second book will be a bit slower and probably more focused on the tension among the group. When I edit the first book, I may have to tak…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Lol

Someday! XD

@mineralizedwritings

It’s been awhile since I’ve read your wip so I forgot who he is 🤣

Oh, you mean Adoulphus?? That’s Leo (<3 <3) and his brother’s oldest stepbrother ;).

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH THOSE STORIES ARE SO GOOD!! UGHHHH!!!

@freedomwriter76

Omg!!! I kinda knew it was gonna be Adoulphus, but I was still surprised and so happy!!! That’s so sweet!! Dietrich and Adoulphus both get redemption arcs?! I love that <3 <3.

@godlyfantasy12

You have shattered my heart. Completely. I don’t…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76

I finally have a name for my trilogy!!

The Endoxos Trilogy. Book one is titled: The Insiders. I already love the title!! What do you all think?

“He said this, signifying by what kind of death he would glorify God. When He had said this, He said to him, “Follow Me.” Peter turned and saw following them the disciple whom Jesus loved, who also leaned against His bosom at the supper and had said, “Lord, who is it that is going to betray You?” When Peter saw him, he said to ­Jesus, “Lord, wha…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

oooooh. Bonifer Squoon, except like Scar. Scary villain

I love it!! XD

@booksandbeakers

Sorry I didn’t respond right away!! When I get the chance I will definitely read it!!