Elishavet Elroi

@wilder-w @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 (November!!!) @koshka @freedomwriter76

Reúven

Golden sunlight splashed across the crowd of students, staining everything in light. Reúven squinted at the brightness and shifted his eyes away.

Better to not burn spots into his vision.

Viktor walked beside him like a young soldier going to court martial. The b…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m just going through the forum, and what should meet my eyes?

THAT SCENE WAS AWESOME! And hilarious, and sooo sweet! I love the way Riker swaps from understanding friend to protective brother. It’s perfect!

@godlyfantasy12

I can! Should I hop in with my threesome?

@starofthenorth

Hmmm, that was really fun to read! I love the “Christopher is king” dynamic to pieces!

As for critiques, I would basically repeat everyone else. From what you asked, I don’t think you’re intending to make them feminist etc., so I would bring the emphasis off of the catch words and more on the characters. It’s Briana against…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76. @koshka. @wilder-w. @keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12.

Alwin

Another day.

Alwin shuffled wearily down the hall toward his classroom. The halls were crowded with students wrapped in conversation, exchanging schedules, rifling through backpacks, and heading to class. Bleary eyes blinked in dumbfoundment at the bright spirits of the…[Read more]

OH! And I can hardly believe I didn’t explain their set up.

Ok.

Viktor is now living with his uncle, Micha, and cousin, Reúven. A friend of Micha with unmentionable connections in government located Viktor and got Micha custody of him and his sisters Alyona and Nadían. Alyona is 13, and Nadían is 12, and they decided not to have Alyona come that early.

@freedomwriter76. @koshka. @wilder-w. @keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12.

I’m on for now!!

So, before I go for Alwin, I’ll introduce the rest of my charries.

Also, I think the invisible country this AU is in is involved in combat in a far off country. It’s not a war close to home, so nobody really notices it except for those involved. (And sorry, I…[Read more]

I haven’t seen the LOTR movies either, because I’m also sensitive and I agree with you about the characters. From what I know, they completely misunderstood Eowyn. And Faramir.

YES!!! Ugh. I’ve heard the same.

I mean, she was mistaken and proud at times, but on the inside she’s actually struggling with some real fears and insecurities. AND Far…[Read more]

@arien

Greetings and salutations! Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen. The community here is indeed great. We’re glad you’re here!

I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic medieval fantasy (so I can blend my two favorite genres: Clean, medieval fantasy and Historical fiction), with the occasional poem.

I have read LotR, but I’m…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h

Winifrith

The door was flung open, sending Winifrith three steps back, eyes wide. The draft wafted cold over her like sudden dread.

Her eyes met those of a tall man standing with his hands on the little shoulders of a young lass.

“Hello there,” he gave a gentle smile “No need to be afrai…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! I’ll get right to it. Sorry it hasn’t happened yet.

@keilah-h

I don’t mind you asking at all!

It is a little nasty, though. And complacated.

You see, as a result of his upbringing and several bad choices, he has multiple substance addictions. He knows it’s bad for him, but it’s the only coping mechanism he has.

But as most addictions are, this substance abuse is only the symptoms of the problem…[Read more]

By the way, he’s been addicted since he was nine.

@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @wilder-w @freedomwriter76

Alwin

In the year 451 of the second age, the men from Galdia rose up against the tyrannical rule of Corindale…

The teacher tapped her pointer against the map on a large yellowish colored country that sprawled across half the page. Alwin squinted at the map, then looked back down at his…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @wilder-w @freedomwriter76

I’m here! My family is road tripping, so as long as I have internet, I can hop on.

And Reúven Will definitely have to be here, since I’ve been working over a personality for his AU self, and it’s been so much fun! Of course, Viktor must needs be here too, and…

Liora.

I GET TO INTRODUCE A…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Aaahhhhhh! This is so exciting!

I just have one wee question: what is a cover reveal and how does it work?

Okay, maybe that was two. 😉

@godlyfantasy12

Aww, that means SO MUCH! I’m thrilled to pieces that you love them. ❤️

Viktor and Reúven may have to join this too. (I’m thinking Reúven would be a cadet in some National Guard Auxiliary… But we’ll see. XD)

As for Alwin …

Standing at about average height, Alwin is fifteen. A sweet boy that tries hard… And he’s never f…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @wilder-w @godlyfantasy12

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!! I love seeing all these characters interact like this.

*Whispers*

Can I join?

I mean, I’ve been lurking over here watching it unfold since the start… *Grins and tugs the hood of my cloak lower* (what else would you expect of me?)

If I did, I’d like to add Alwin.

But not Alwin…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, I believe so!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomweiter76 @keilah-h

Winifrith

Winifrith stood in the center of a wide hall, a hall larger and more grand to her eye than any she has seen before. Arching beams reached up to the ceiling into ornate carvings. Flowering scrolls curled around great war horses and men with weapons drawn.

Her right fingers played a…[Read more]