@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ahhh, Leon… and Riker and November and Mikkel. I’m enjoying this way too much. lol!
And for some reason this has taken longer than usual to write.
Viktor
Something was dreadfully wrong. Viktor watched in alarm as Leon slowly crumbled into himself. The man was leaning against the wall for support,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @koshka
All right, y’all…
I’ll get Alyona’s in after this one, hopefully.
Viktor
They were on their way now, a much larger group than before. Viktor walked near Riker and November, unwilling to be alone in the midst of strangers.
There aught to be a raven headed lass at his side, her eyes bright…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ahhhhh, I love it!
Look out, Sorren, that’s a King’s mariner and a couple marines. Bwahahaha!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Content Guide Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I don’t really have much input to add, except that first, I agree with everything suggested, (I like the list format very much) and thank you so much for writing this for your book! I would absolutely want to know about all that before heading into it. Especially about the immorality, graphic content, and domestic abuse.
I didn’t…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you! I’m thrilled that you like it.
We definitely agree on his expression. My sweet, thinking laddie…
(Thank you again! I’m not really a great artist either, but I try. 😉 This is what I’m good at drawing, but horses? Oh no. XD I’d enjoy your comments anytime. And so glad you like his cloak! I like drawing clothing like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Sorry, I had an RP written yesterday evening, but my phone died before I had it quite finished, and with it went my impetus to write another died too.
So, here I am, nearly a day late. XD
Oh, and Corvina is awesome; I’m so glad you redeem her.
I don’t know how characteristic this will be of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing out of chronological order? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 2 months ago
Hmmm…
I’m writing my WIPs out of order, but mostly because I just haven’t had time to sit down and write the scene that should come next… Or as it is with my second WIP, I despise every beginning I’ve written, so I just write other parts untill I can get a better idea for an opening.
However, I think the biggest reasons that…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
And Viktor had officially gone through the roof. XD
Also, y’all, I’m thinking of throwing in a side character, he wouldn’t really have a POV, but he might move the plot along. I’m thinking an Eirtanian servant at the castle that I’ll use to work on a vague idea I have for one of the refugees they meet in…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Okay, so I’m back!
These characters are both hilarious and so sad. I’m not sure if I should laugh at them or hug them. Lol!
By the way, I think I’ve almost got Viktor’s traumatic state figured out.
He does kinda have PTSD, but it’s not… Maybe not what you’d first think of. He has trauma…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Greetings friends! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
Oohh… lemme see… probably getting to make up stuff and deviate from history and explaining it as ‘it’s my world and I do what I want’ but being able to fall back on history if I don’t feel like making something up XD
Yes!! I love doing this. It’s so handy.
 How about you?
Welllllll…. Basically the same. XD I love incorporatin…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you! I’m really glad you like his hair; I like the front, but I had difficulties with the rest. I saw a picture of a young boy praying, and I had to draw Amichai like that: it’s so like him.
I’m glad you like it!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
I tagged you wrong, sorry.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@rose-everdeen @freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @sunny-421 @I’m-sorry-but-i-don’t-remember-your-tag @you-know-who-you-are
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic I have finally drawn Viktor!! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
So, for all of you that I promised to share this with, here it is! I’m honestly thrilled with how it turned out. (In fact, I was thrilled even better I started it, because I found some reference pics that were perfect! But still, I’m even more happy with this, because it’s him not someone who looks like him.)
Unfortunately, I didn’t have the best…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Blurb…and…some help brainstorming? Thoughts? in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Ah, I love this idea! So, I don’t read dystopian because it’s kinda dark, but this…
I love the mix of hope and danger and truth. Honestly, truth is one of my favorite themes, you could say.
Also, a story about persecution/strength in the darkness would be awesome in a dystopian world.
I’d love to read it, and if you need any…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing AUs of your own stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh y’all! This isn’t exactly an AU, or not in one way, but totally in another! Once I took my entire three kingdoms in Heir of Ashes and planted them into Middle Earth.
*Dies laughing*
Honestly though, it’s amazing what taking your setting and putting in a different world will do for world building. It highlights little details that you’d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
My poor dear. He’s usually not outwardly flustered and is able to adapt to the people around him… But he’s not quite himself, I’m afraid. His author had a humor fit.
It might make more sense, though, if someone else sorta says hi and his response in a reply.
Either way, his inward fumbles have momentarily caught him, but then, he’s only…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
Greetings and Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Elishavet around here, and mostly write realistic medieval fantasy with a little bit of randomness on the side. (And top, and bottom, and basically everywhere.)
Your WIP sounds incredibly fascinating! Is the flower good or bad? Or neither? Or should I not ask?
I have two…[Read more]
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