Elishavet Elroi

Okay, here’s the entry. Y’all’s characters sound like such fun!

Because of my Squiggle Things small size, the normal/slightly choppy conditions write like Euroclydon. XD

Tripkin

“High side!” The words tore from his throat in two rough syllables. His dark furred friend flung himself up the tipping slope to join Tripkin.

Their raft evened out.…[Read more]

Dalton

Treeknife. It’s what he is and what he will be as far down the road as he can see. It was a Treeknife that found him as a tiny kit, and it was a Treeknife who raised him up to be the squirrel he is. Oakorn was everything – a father, a mentor, and a friend. Little does Dalton realize, he was everything to that old Treeknife in return: a…[Read more]

@koshka

Ahoy! Count me in.

*Is subscribing*

@grcr

Realistic is great! I like to stick to that route per usual. I am intrigued by these uniforms though; how are they powerful? in what ways? What do they look like?

Lol, yes!! I need a cloak too! My siblings and I always try to make medieval clothes but we have never succeeded.

Medieval clothing is beautimous. It’s very simple too (or at…[Read more]

@grcr

Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write medieval fantasy too, as well as the random poem, flash fiction, and well, randomness.

So how fantastic is your book world? I have two main WIPs which are neither of them magical – although one does have some fantastic elements like fire captured in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thanks for the notes, it helps.

But as for your excerpt, WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO THE BABY?

I mean, I guess he assumes silence and thus saves the lives of those he can. Or at least I hope he is able to because something tells me the guilt associated with “betraying” someone else would be the worst kind of torment to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Narnia? O.O My native land!!!

Peter and Lucy were always my favorites, but I love all the Pevensie siblings. And a whole bunch of other characters like Caspian the Tenth, Puddleglum, Aravis, Shasta, Rilian, Glimfeather, Reepicheep, Digory, Emeth, Jewel, Trumpkin…..(is it really possible to name them all?)

Nevertheless, my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank You!!! It’s an experiment. 😉

Is there anything you liked/thoughts/suggestions?

And yes, I think she is turning to kidnapping. XD

@koshka

Awww, thank you! For reading! My crazy opening! And liking it!

I’m glad you think so. Although I think there are some snotty Alwin chapters ahead. *Wry laugh*

Yes of course. That dreaded next chapter. Don’t worry, it will get worse. 😁😅

@hybridlore

Thank you! That means so much. I’m still trying to figure out my writing voice – or at…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium (your were)

Thanks!! This is my second (third?) Try at the opening.

@koshka @sunny421 @freedomwriter @godlyfanrasy @joycalle …iforgotyourtag @Idon’tknowwhototag

Hi everyone! I know I’ve been floating about in shadowy silence, so I’m sorry if I haven’t commented on some of y’all’s excellent work. Maybe I’ll be able to go back and give some thoughts as I’ve really enjoyed reading them.

Anyway, now that long and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love the idea that “bad magic” is essentially rebellion against the Light, manipulating what was originally made to be a beautiful thing into a dark and twisted thing. It’s very good. If you’ve ever read Jack Zulu and the Waylander’s Key, you will have read one of my recent favorite books that addresses this in it’s themes. At…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Wow.

I love underground church stories, and that was with your beloved characters! A little quick of a turning, but still,

Wow.

I like this Peter. Thank you for sharing!

@light-warrior-pen

Pet peeves? On romance? Neveeerrrrrr.

Actually, what @whalekeeper and @esther-c said. XD

Also, it’s probably connected, but when she is so determined to “stick with him” that she puts everyone in danger. Like when he gives her instructions to stay safe and she blatantly disregards them just to “be brave”. It just comes across…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Leon trimmed his beard? With A RAZOR BLADE? *Gasps*

Don’t you know what the Sanhedrin would say? *Is scandalized*

Just kidding. 😂😂Sorry, little Talmud/Biblical culture nerd over here. 😂😂😂😅 It just tickled me when I read the beginning. (Which is good. I needed a laugh.) (Yes, I get this is the twentieth century, not the…[Read more]

@acancello

Hi! I-have-no-idea-if-we’ve-met-or-not-although-I-think-we-have-but-maybe-I-just-saw-you-around.

I’m Elishavet around here! (Obviously) I’m flattered to hear you love my little darlings. As were they when I told them.

Yeah, I enjoy romantic subplots when they fit. Mostly I write adventurous tales disturbingly inspired from reality…[Read more]

Ok y’all. The scribe has returned!

I don’t know who to tag, or who is still interested, but here you go!

*Stokes the fire*

The skies once so blue and so beautiful…

Several years prior…

Gentle rain tapped against the window panes, a rare thing here. I traced the drops down the glass in fascination. They slid and bumped together in their sil…[Read more]

Hiiii…..

*Materializes from the shadows*

(Wow, it’s been awhile since I’ve been on here officially.)

This looks like a lot of fun. I probably will be lurking around here to check up on my favorites. (Like usual)

I don’t write romances, but as romance is a part of life, it happens in my books. It even gets to be a subplot! *Gasp*

Anyway, I…[Read more]