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				<title>Lydia S. posted an update: Hey, friends! Hope you all are doing well. &#x1f60a;

One of my [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 01 Aug 2023 21:11:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, friends! Hope you all are doing well. &#x1f60a;</p>
<p>One of my friends from The Author Conservatory is doing a fundraiser for Rapha International, and I wanted to share it with you all. </p>
<p>Rapha International provides healing, hope, and freedom to girls rescued from trafficking. From today until the 5th, my friend will be donating all of the proceeds from&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-148062"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/148062/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Lydia S. started the topic Just for fun: charrie edition in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Dec 2022 18:06:26 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, friends!</p>
<p>I have not been particularly active lately what with #adulting and all that, so I wanted to pop in and hang out with you all for a little bit. &lt;3333</p>
<p>This is a modified blog tag that I’m borrowing from the lovely Sarah Baran at TheSarcasticElf.com (seriously, if you don’t follow her blog, go do that right now; it’s full of wit,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-121836"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/just-for-fun-charrie-edition/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/need-some-advice-with-an-injury-scene/#post-116602</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 20:08:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> thank u for the all that info!!!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> so <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> actually did a really great job in summing it up/figuring out what it was like and helped me figure out how to describe it and such if u want to see how she answered my question about it.</p>
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				<title>Lydia S. started the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2022 22:10:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, ya&#8217;ll!</p>
<p>Lydia, here. 🙂 So, I thought it&#8217;d be fun to start an inspiration exchange thread!</p>
<p>This is a place where we can all dump interesting photos or dialog prompts we happen to find or come up with, and it&#8217;s also somewhere where we can resort to if we need inspiration! Post as many prompts/pictures as you&#8217;d like, but please make sure they&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-112714"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/inspo-exchange/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 30 Aug 2022 21:45:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HEYO!!! Wasn&#8217;t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I&#8217;m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)</p>
<p>SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella&#8217;s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-112713"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/need-some-advice-with-an-injury-scene/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daisy Torres replied to the topic Self publish... HEEEELP in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/self-publish-heeeelp/#post-116223</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 27 Aug 2022 15:29:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> Good luck!! There&#8217;s not much that I know that I haven&#8217;t told you already, but I hope you find something that works XD</p>
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				<title>Starden03 replied to the topic Teary Scenes in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 30 Jun 2022 02:15:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a></p>
<p>One thing that I think might be helpful is a combination of unusual phrasing and metaphor, for the reason that the complexity of the writing draws attention away from the all-absorbing sorrows of the characters, putting them into perspective but somehow also making them more poignant. I know you said you&#8217;re tired of cliché phrases to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-110228"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/teary-scenes/page/3/#post-111994" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:22:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey everyone!! So, I know I’m still on the first draft of my first book of this series, buuuuut I already am thinking ahead a tooon and, well, im sure some of y’all have heard of my anatabonist (who I love) Corvina.</p>
<p>This post was actually made because I could use a little bit of help with something about her, and it also kinda includes ano&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-110213"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-antagonist-corvina-and-her-problem/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 25 Jun 2022 16:59:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I DID IT!! I FINALLY MADE IT!!</p>
<p>*regrets immediately*</p>
<p>JK. Anyway, I had this idea a while back to make this post where we could come here and talk about our WIPs and MAJOR SPOILERS AND PLOT TWISTS THAT WE ARE SOO EXCITED ABOUT AND HATE HAVING TO KEEP SECRET FROM FRIENDS AND FAMILY WITHOUT HAVING TO DISCLAIMER IN THE POST!!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Thus this forum was&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-110063"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/major-wip-spoiler-forum/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile started the topic Choosing a Writing Platform?? in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 05 Jun 2022 05:19:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, my friends! It&#8217;s been a minute since I was last on here. I&#8217;ve missed you all!</p>
<p>I have a question for any of you who have tried writing platforms similar to Wattpad, for context. I recently finished co-writing a book with my sister and we&#8217;re not sure what we want to do with it yet, so we&#8217;ve decided to try uploading it to a writing site over&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109696"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/choosing-a-writing-platform/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Katherine replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-i-am-a-jesus-follower/page/3/#post-111075</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2022 23:47:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/unsung/' rel="nofollow ugc">@unsung</a> Hi!! It&#8217;s nice to meet you!! Welcome to the Kingdom!!! I&#8217;m glad <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> and <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elanor/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elanor</a> got you to join!!! 😉</p>
<p>*high-fives for being a fellow Jesus-follower* I love Jesus and fantasy as well!!! I read your inspiration behind your username and may I just say that I love that reasoning!! 😀 It&#8217;s awesome!!!</p>
<p>What&#8217;s your favorite song? Favorite&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109613"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-i-am-a-jesus-follower/page/3/#post-111075" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Madelyn started the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2022 20:29:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey y&#8217;all!</p>
<p>So, I&#8217;m dipping my toes into allegories&#8230;</p>
<p>Who am I kidding, I&#8217;m diving right in!!</p>
<p>I would love all y&#8217;all&#8217;s input on this subject! Namely,<span> what are some of your favorite Christian allegorical stories and what made them impactful</span>? What parts drove to your heart? Narnia is definitely on the top of my list of Christian allegories, so i&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109605"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/page/6/#post-110876</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 11 May 2022 19:19:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/denali-christianson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@denali-christianson</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/emilysf/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emilysf</a> @e-m-tempke <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/issawriter7/' rel="nofollow ugc">@issawriter7</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/gracie-j/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gracie-j</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/abigail-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@abigail-m</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jodi-maile/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jodi-maile</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> @libby@lydia-s <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mkfairygirl/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mkfairygirl</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/seekerofthetruth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekerofthetruth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/nanisnook/' rel="nofollow ugc">@nanisnook</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/maryg3/' rel="nofollow ugc">@maryg3&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109444"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/page/6/#post-110876" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic NEW BLOG POST!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 07 May 2022 18:54:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HEY YALL! Its been a hot minute since I did a new blog post and I am SUPER excited about this one! I think it&#8217;ll help some people! Or at least I hope so!</p>
<p>Tags!!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/gracie-j/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gracie-j</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/abigail-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@abigail-m</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jodi-maile/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jodi-maile</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a>  <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/libby/' rel="nofollow ugc">@libby</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a>&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109376"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-blog-post/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Faith Q. started the topic Y&#039;all help me storm my brain!!!! in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 07 May 2022 04:18:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, y&#8217;all, I need a brainstorming partner&#8230; or two&#8230; or as many as I can find, haha&#8230;</p>
<p>It&#8217;ll actually be for two separate projects. One is a middle-grade contemporary novel, and the other is a YA fantasy. If you&#8217;re up for helping me brainstorm, either (or both!) need work, so anyone who can, pretty much? I&#8217;ll give the tags here, and then put&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109359"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/yall-help-me-storm-my-brain/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Madelyn replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-i-am-a-jesus-follower/page/3/#post-110448</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 04 May 2022 23:27:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/unsung/' rel="nofollow ugc">@unsung</a></p>
<p>Goodness, the forum has been blowing up lately!! Just now getting around to replying to you XD</p>
<p>Ooh, I love Honey Vanilla Chamomile!! Such a soothing flavor.</p>
<p>Hm, never hear of Matthew West before!! But I know Peter Hollens, I listened to a few of his songs. He&#8217;s got some serious talent; it&#8217;s hard to believe that his songs are ALL voice&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109076"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-i-am-a-jesus-follower/page/3/#post-110448" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 04 May 2022 21:32:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SO AS THE TITLE STATES- this is pretty much where we post anything and everything about or CHARRIES!!! FROM AESTHETIC BOARDS TO MEMES ABOUT OUR BOOKS AND CHARRIES TO INSPIRATIONAL MUSIC RELATING TO THEM TO LYRICS THAT RELATE TO POEMS TO YEA WHATEVER.</p>
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<p>I put this on here cuz I’ve made a TON of memes….</p>
<p>and I’ve made some aesthetics I wante&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109063"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Unsung replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Apr 2022 23:04:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
<p>My favorite kinds of tea are as follows:</p>
<p>Bangel Spice, Earl Grey, English breakfast, Honey Vanilla Chamomile, and we&#8217;ll finish off with Lemon Ginger!</p>
<p>Favorite music artists&#8230; I haven&#8217;t found many songs that Matthew West does that I don&#8217;t like! I would say, if I had to choose one, it would be him. But I also love a cappella music, so&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108711"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-i-am-a-jesus-follower/page/2/#post-110050" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic Has a song ever inspired a story, scene, or character? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 Apr 2022 18:59:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> Same, I have over a thousand songs in my playlist. Mostly whole soundtracks with Christian music scattered throughout.</p>
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				<title>Unsung replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 Apr 2022 17:11:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&#8217;t get them too excited, <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a>! I do my best but have nothing spectacular! But I am super grateful to have you as a writing buddy! 🙂 May we conquer for this Kingdom together!</p>
<p>RAK CHAZAK AMATS!</p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page....Woohoo in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 25 Apr 2022 16:48:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>(WARNING SUPER LONG, RAMBLING, CHAOTIC POST. ALSO BIG SPOILER FOR WINGFEATHER SAGA IN ONE SECTION. IT IS WARNED AND CAN BE SKIPPED JUST WATCH FOR IT.)</p>
<p>Tags!!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/gracie-j/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gracie-j</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/abigail-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@abigail-m</a> @keilah-h@elishavet-pidyon <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jodi-maile/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jodi-maile</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a>  <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/libby/' rel="nofollow ugc">@libby</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/issawriter7/' rel="nofollow ugc">@issaw&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108653"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-beloved-character-death-discussion-page-woohoo/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Mary G replied to the topic Themes! and Messages! and Plots!? OH, MY!! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/themes-and-messages-and-plots-oh-my/#post-109986</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Apr 2022 21:21:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some tags:<br />
<a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> @gracie-j@scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon@jodi-maile <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/libby/' rel="nofollow ugc">@libby</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/issawriter7/' rel="nofollow ugc">@issawriter7</a> @mkfairygirl@seekerofthetruth@kathleenramm @jenwriter17@nanisnook <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> @seekjustice@sparrowhawke <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/maryg3/' rel="nofollow ugc">@maryg3</a> @relia@writerlexi1216&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108642"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/themes-and-messages-and-plots-oh-my/#post-109986" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Madelyn started the topic How Do You Turn a Spark Into a Blaze? in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Apr 2022 01:45:00 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If you clicked on this topic because of the interesting title, I feel obliged to tell you first off that this is not about the practice of fire starting &#x1f525;</p>
<p>Sorry to disappoint you, but, please, stick around!! &#x1f609;</p>
<p>Today I have a simple question for y’all:<br />
How do you go from an semi-fleshed-out idea to a real plot? How do you build a bridge from a s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108608"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-turn-a-spark-into-a-blaze/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Faith Q. started the topic Me idea in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Apr 2022 02:56:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, so last night I got this amazing idea. At least I think it sounds amazing. But my problem is, it also sounds a bit cliche.</p>
<p>The problem is, I don&#8217;t get out much. Honestly, I&#8217;m pretty picky about what I read, so modern secular works are very rarely added to the list, and I am pretty clueless about what&#8217;s actually on the shelves. I know I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108590"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/me-idea/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Mary G replied to the topic Teary Scenes in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2022 03:08:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a>,</p>
<p>Here are my two cents. When I write emotional scenes I try to think about where the character’s hands are and what they&#8217;re doing, as well as other facial cues. Like others have mentioned, you don&#8217;t necessarily  need to show tears to show someone is sad. For example, the character scratches the bridge of their nose, avert’s thei&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108563"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/teary-scenes/page/3/#post-109896" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Calling all bloggers! in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 27 Mar 2022 21:04:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/writerlexi1216/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writerlexi1216</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lewilliams/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lewilliams</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a></p>
<p>Its not letting me edit my posts for some reason …&#x1f636;</p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pitch-critique/#post-109569</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Mar 2022 01:58:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/gracie-j/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gracie-j</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/abigail-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@abigail-m</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jodi-maile/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jodi-maile</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a>  <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/libby/' rel="nofollow ugc">@libby</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/e-k-seaver/' rel="nofollow ugc">@e-k-seaver</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/issawriter7/' rel="nofollow ugc">@issawriter7</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mkfairygirl/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mkfairygirl</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/seekerofthetruth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekerofthetruth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/nanisnook/' rel="nofollow ugc">@nanisnook</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sparrowhawke/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sparrowhawke</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/maryg3/' rel="nofollow ugc">@maryg3</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/relia/' rel="nofollow ugc">@relia</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/writerlexi1216/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writerlexi1216</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/nova21/' rel="nofollow ugc">@nova21</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/hallie-jean/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hallie-&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108424"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pitch-critique/#post-109569" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic How do you draft/write the &#034;first&#034; document? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 15 Mar 2022 04:24:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO MY KEEEEEPERS!!! SO! I am currently drafting Project Garden as you know, and I have discovered that I am seriously Pantsing it. Like&#8230;legit. I&#8217;ve got ideas and obviously some plot and storyline but it&#8217;s just like&#8230;writing whatever comes which is honestly hard most of the time and easy sometimes. SO WEIRD!</p>
<p>ANYWAY!! I&#8217;m wondering how&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108408"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-draft-write-the-first-document/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Faith Q. started the topic Calling all storytellers... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Feb 2022 05:48:32 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, y&#8217;all, so I recently finished my YA fantasy novel.</p>
<p>*cues the high-pitched screams*</p>
<p>But my next project is a middle-grade novel featuring a 12-year-old MC who gets herself into all sorts of scrapes.</p>
<p>The problem is, I&#8217;m not naturally a humorous writer. It&#8217;s something I&#8217;m trying to work on in this story, true, but a very not funny writer&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108260"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/calling-all-storytellers/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Lin started the topic Writer&#039;s Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 21 Feb 2022 20:47:47 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, one and all! For those of you who are newer, we used to have some topics called &#8220;Writer&#8217;s Corner&#8221; or something like that, but I&#8217;m far too lazy to search for the previous ones or consult how many of these we have been through, so we can just start a new one.</p>
<p>This thread is just a place for off-topic chats, where we can talk about our day or&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108196"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-505/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/characteristic-lines/page/9/#post-109122</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 17 Feb 2022 05:34:41 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can we get this up and running again with brand new lines from characters? I still don’t really have many….but maybe we can expand this to be lines of not just dialogue but just very short bits of our books?</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> @keilah-h@elanor <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/jodi-maile/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jodi-maile</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/morgan/' rel="nofollow ugc">@morgan</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> @faith-q@power <a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108133"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/characteristic-lines/page/9/#post-109122" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/developing-a-new-story-idea-help-xd/#post-109046</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 12 Feb 2022 22:38:33 -0500</pubDate>

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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Feb 2022 21:12:21 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK SO! I know where I&#8217;m posting this might be A BIT WEIRD BUT HEAR ME OUT!!!!</p>
<p>So as of rn my second book in fantasy series, (the second book is Project DM) has a looong poem in it. I have just gone back and revised the poem and when I finished I was kinda blown away ngl, and I really like it so I wanted to share it with y&#8217;all! So this is kinda a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108055"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/poem-for-my-book-draft/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Trahia the Minstrel started the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-website-is-up-and-functional/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Feb 2022 08:07:08 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Eeek! I’m so excited! After ages, and my website being put up on the 31st of January, it’s finally fully functional (except for the privacy policy, I’m still working on that cause I’m bad at formal language&#x1f605;) .</p>
<p>I’m so thrilled to share this with you guys!</p>
<p>My website URL is Hadassah.nz !</p>
<p>I hope you’ll enjoy the content on it! If any of you want&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-108051"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-website-is-up-and-functional/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Lydia S. replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 30 Jan 2022 23:48:45 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>CONGRATS ON YOUR NOVEL!!!! I&#8217;m so happy for you! XD That is so exciting.</p>
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<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a></p>
<p>Hi! Welcome to the KP forum! I&#8217;m Lydia. 🙂 You&#8217;re writing about mermaids?? How fun! I&#8217;ve dabbled in writing mermaid stories myself! I ended up dropping that project, but it was a retelling of Ariel called <em>Rebel</em>. (Now that I&#8217;m thinking about it,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107879"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/6/#post-108720" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Lydia S. replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 30 Jan 2022 23:35:45 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Agh, WFR sounds FANTASTIC!!! I&#8217;m already rooting for Russel and Eliza. XD</p>
<p>Well, my WIPs are progressing minimally at the moment. However, my brain is still cooking up and mulling over scenes for my Biblical fiction series (And side books). And Simon (the Zealot). AH, I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. XD (Joining <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> in evil author&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107877"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/5/#post-108718" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daisy Torres replied to the topic What&#039;s the most recent piece of writing advice you’ve been given? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 29 Jan 2022 20:37:15 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ohhh that&#8217;s a great piece of advice!! I&#8217;ll have to try that!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure this is really counted as &#8216;advice&#8217; or not, but once I was talking to my dear friend Elfwing. Now, she&#8217;s great at sticking with her world and exploring it in different books, kind of like Tolkien does. I, however, am the exact opposite. For me, there are just so many worlds&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107866"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-the-most-recent-piece-of-writing-advice-youve-been-given/#post-108697" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jan 2022 02:39:11 -0500</pubDate>

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				<title>Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Teary Scenes in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jan 2022 11:23:11 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Whoa, lots of awesome responses &#8211; one thing I&#8217;ll add is that it can be nice to focus on more than just one sense. If you usually describe the way the tears burn in the back of your character&#8217;s eyes, then mention the way the tears glint in the moonlight. If your habit is to describe how hoarse your character&#8217;s voice is, then show their&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107801"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/teary-scenes/page/2/#post-108593" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>TheLobsterLover replied to the topic Teary Scenes in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jan 2022 07:28:06 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>I just got here and I&#8217;m probably quite late, but with describing characters crying, you can use less common bodily responses to strong emotion then just tears. Things like a lump in your throat, trails of watery snot coming out the nose, dry heaving. This could just be a me thing, but sometimes I hear a soft popping noise in my ears when&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107799"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/teary-scenes/page/2/#post-108591" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>R.M. Archer replied to the topic Have you ever considered writing under a pseudonym, and why or why not? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Jan 2022 04:22:05 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>WAIT. YOU&#8217;RE— OH! I totally hadn&#8217;t connected you to this username! Hi! XD 😀</p>
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				<title>Annabelle replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Jan 2022 01:37:59 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Your WIP sounds so good! And don&#8217;t be too afraid that you don&#8217;t write. My first/second drafts of my novels always turn out horrible, but it&#8217;s a learning process and I&#8217;m able to correct them later.</p>
<p>Okay, so starting a blog isn&#8217;t exactly easy. I would recommend using either Wix for fast setup, or Wordpress.com (but not&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107709"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/3/#post-108500" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jan 2022 22:58:22 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Do you guys mind if I jump in? Sorry I haven’t been super active on the forum recently, and may not have replied to anything you said. I’ve been taking a huge break from things over the Christmas/New Years holidays.</p>
<p>As well as binging Keeper of the Lost Cities. The who&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107706"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/3/#post-108497" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jan 2022 22:55:45 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a></p>
<p>Do you guys mind if I jump in? Sorry I haven’t been super active on the forum recently, and may not have replied to anything you said. I’ve been taking a huge break from things over the Christmas/New Years holidays.</p>
<p>As well as binging Keeper of the Lost Cities. The who&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107705"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/3/#post-108495" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Annabelle replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jan 2022 22:24:41 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>LOL that would be a great meme!</p>
<p>How many characters do you kill?! The way you&#8217;re talking it sounds like all your characters end up dead by the end of the story.</p>
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				<title>Daisy Torres replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jan 2022 02:33:28 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> Haha relatablee. That&#8217;s pretty much what happens with most my historical-fic stuff too haha. But if you ever finish it, that sounds really unique and interesting!! I&#8217;d love to read it!!!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> I absolutely will!!! I&#8217;d love to have you read it XD</p>
<p>Aghh struggles XD There are sooo many books I want to write and so little timeee&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107679"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/2/#post-108469" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Annabelle replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Jan 2022 23:46:11 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Fantasy is so cool, and I&#8217;ve always wanted to write it. I&#8217;ve started several fantasy novels, but never finished them.</p>
<p>Yasss, killing is so satisfying! (Though the way I just said that sounded really evil LOL). I like love stories too, but only when there&#8217;s some sort of conflict between two characters falling in love with one character.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107675"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/#post-108465" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daisy Torres replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Jan 2022 23:30:04 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> Ahhh I loveee that idea for your WIP!! I&#8217;m plotting a story set in the 70s myself. I feel like there aren&#8217;t enough young adult novels set in the not-to-far-away past XD</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> hehe you would be absolutely right to tag me XD</p>
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				<title>Annabelle replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Jan 2022 22:52:29 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Ooh, your WIP is so cool! I can relate to the evil writer mentality. I&#8217;m killing off my main character&#8217;s twin sister in the second book in my series, and I&#8217;m considering killing her boyfriend. (oops, sorry, that was a spoiler).</p>
<p>*gasps* So I&#8217;m not the only teen mermaid lover!!! <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/daisy-torres/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daisy-torres</a>, WE NEED TO TALK!!!</p>
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				<title>GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My Series Keeps Growing! in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jan 2022 06:25:58 -0500</pubDate>

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