calidris

Thanks! Move went well!

Thank you, I’d like to try. I’m actually going through my 1st draft and realizing “oh my word! this character is waaaay too elusive!” like, she’s orphaned, yes, but her adopted family is sort of ‘there’ and not there. Like, her cousins are mentioned, but they never come into the story! XD that annoyed me XD so I have added…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

uhhh wow!!! I love it! so good

sorry I’m late on commenting.

I really like it! The flow is fitting, in my opinion; like, how I imagine the queen from how you describe is; lost, suspicious, somewhat regretful, bitter, and mind wandering in the past, so her thoughts are short, blunt, to the point, and not too many details added…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

my favorite backstory… oooof that’s hard

XD

well, it would have to be…

Lord Rodolpho Greco from The River of Time series; he’s a traitor for most of the series, and you’re never sure if he’ll turn on the MC because he’s so elusive and never reveals what he’s thinking, but has the skills and the power, and the elusive…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

Sorry, but I got nothing, to be honest I’m probably the type of person kingdom pen was created for.

The only reason I’m here is because @devastate-lasting tagged me, and I gotta stay on top of the whole ‘staying relevant’ thing y’know?

So yeah, I’m in the same boat as you. I shall watch the upcoming posts on this topic with…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

that advice is preeetty epic, also don’t feel bad, I wasn’t feeling irrelevant. I actually think I’m the best person on the forum.After all, without me we wouldn’t have the best topic in the history of forums  ‘Cheesy jokes writer edition’.The main reason why I started this topic was because I wanted a higher post count and I…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 also, you get a substantial thank as well

@writerlexi1216
Oh you saw my existential crisis in the totw? preeetty epic.

btw I’ve been seeing a lotta people doing that vanishing in smoke trick, and to be honest I don’t think it’s real, I saw a Scooby-Doo episode about it, I can see through your lies despite the thick smoke.

Large thank

@daisy-torres

Sounds preeetty epic, not even I would pay to read my own writing.

@godlyfantasy12

I know I’m late, I’m so sorry! Life became a whirlwind of activity, and I haven’t been able to get on here until now.

One way you can have the girls meet Lyn is to have them wake up to her examining them. From there, they can panic, thinking she’s going to hurt them, and you can have a lovely scene of confusion. 😉 Or they could…[Read more]

I’m so sorry I’ve missed all these sprints! Between working, 4H, and volunteering, I haven’t had much time to be on here. 🙁 Hope they went well for you all! <333

@joy-caroline

Agh, I’m late! Life got crazy busy. 🙁

If you’d like/have the time to make another collage, you could do one for one of the books I’m co-writing! It’s titled Falling. Some of the themes are dragons, black snake/scales, forests, traitors, comas/sickness/near death, and blacksmiths. It’s in a tribal/Viking fantasy-type world. :D…[Read more]

@faith-q

Super late to this thread (life has become a whirlwind of activity…), but honestly, I do not have much experience with children’s POVs. The youngest character’s POV I’ve ever written was a… *thinks for a moment…or two* Well, a fourteen-year-old, so she’s not much of a child. I hope the others could help though! 😀 <333

@typewriter77

Oh, fun! That sounds like a very smart job. 🙂

Yes, Susan! 🙁 I think (desperately hope) that she does end up in Narnia… (Aslan did say “Once a king or queen of Narnia, always a king or queen”) I think she was just trying to be grown-up… That could just be my older sister bias coming through though… 😛

Well, I am grateful…[Read more]

@Kathleen

I personally think that Edward and Alphonse from Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood had a pretty epic backstory (it was pretty epic) one of them lost an arm and a leg, and da other lost their whooole body (it was pretty bloody and epic, if I do say so myself)

They also have blonde hair, and as a blonde hair user myself, i must say I can…[Read more]

@typewriter77

Interesting… veeery interesting.

Well, I aaam obligated to hold up my end of the bargain, well this may come as a shock to you but…

I’m actually an assassin.

(Don’t worry I haven’t killed anyone yet  ever -I’m a pacifist-)

Don’t be confused it’s normal in the assassin community.

Also, this is top secret so don’t let this get out.

@kathleenramm

Whoever was the villain of Shrek.

I haven’t watched it yet though but I’m sure he is preeetty epic.

@typewriter77

EPIC.

Now tell me your deepest darkest secret. (then I’ll tell you mine) 😉