Beth

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

anyone. I’m not exactly sure how to start.

Oh good.

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for you guys!

(Wyoh, you’d better not eat this, too)

Wyoh, seriously??

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

@whalekeeper

Don’t die, Whaley! *runs in circles panicking* whatdowedowhatdowedowhatdowedo?

@keilah-h

NO! I. WILL. NOT. YIELD! *swings sword wildly at air* WYOH. MUST. DIE! *spins around, still swinging sword* DEATH TO TECH GHOSTS! *falls over*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

🤣

I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@theducktator

Alas indeed! Something must be done. Wyoh is out there somewhere. We must find her… and destroy her. Draw your swords, KPers, we ride! *charges off in random direction*

Is it just me or are all the pfps gone (again)??

😒

@whalekeeper

Still not seeing your post, but it says at the top of the page thingy that you posted, and I got a notif.

Wyoh, leave Whaley alone!

@whalekeeper

your posts didn’t post cuz guess who ate it?

@rae

oh my gosh XD lol

I love Buck Wild…he’s the best!!

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! I’m not sure if I’ll be able to join (I’m already so behind in my other rps! 😭) but I might eventually. I’ll probably stick around and see what happens first. It looks really fun.

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)