Beth

@whalekeeper

To be honest, I was having doubts about this fight, but now…you struck the point of excitement in me, and the emotional point in Alpha. Well done.

Jr

Jr didn’t avoid the knife, letting the blade stab him in the torso. Nar screamed. After looking down, Alpha Grath stared at his attacker.

“Hugo Angelo, this fight isn’t only about…[Read more]

I kinda see Jr using a type of mixed Marshall arts style, almost. Idk what to call it.

@whalekeeper

I understand why you did, but you have made a large error. In a spar, against Hugo, Jr would never use knives. He would rely upon his speed, mobility, and strength to toy with Hugo. I’ll work with what you started with, though.

Jr

The boy thought going behind him would matter. Jr laughed on the inside. But he suddenly…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Hey! I’ve been good!

Slowly I’ve been getting closer to people at school, and closer to God too!

And I’ve recently made a breakthrough in my writing as well!

How have you been?

“Exuberance isn’t that bad.”

-Certerlern The Wise

@loopylin Yeah, I get the friend feeling too.

Chase

“Y-yeah and, and n-no.” If he’s asking if I know sign, does that mean he can’t stand hearing me stumble over my words? Chase’s face fell. He closed his eyes against his throbbing headache and set his mug down. “I’ve n-never sp,sp-oh-ken well. Used to sp-ee-kh w-worse.” Chase opened his eyes, t…[Read more]

My brother: “I can’t read this, the main character told me to close the book.”

Me: “You’re not a Half-blood, Half-Bloods don’t exist!”

@linus-smallprint

I can’t really help because I just store everything inside of my head and I haven’t reached the point where I needed an external tool.

@highscribeofaetherium

Aww thank you so much!!!!!

I knowwwww! Idk why I always write sad stuff…..it’s a problem XD

@linus-smallprint

Hey there!

I have a platform for writing called Reedsy, and you can organize everything about your characters! It’s completely free, just go to reedsy.com and you can make an account! It’s super nice because you can share as little or as much of your novel as you want with anybody through a link.

However, I normally just write…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey, it’s good to see you on again!

Also,

😭😭😭😭 why does it have to be so saaaaaaaad???????? 😖 (It was a great snippet though)

@linus-smallprint

Last-paging is the malicious act of flipping to the final pages of a story and reading them before you have read the rest of the book. Those who have attempted it have been reported to lose sleep and video game skills. It also is a major cause of cancer in fruit bats. Don’t do it (although I cannot say I am innocent of the act…

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@esther-c

Thank you so much for understanding!!!!

And it’s okay, life’s gotten super busy for me too!

You can use the same link as before to read my old stuff, just know that you’re gonna have to use the chapter titles to find your way around my book, cuz the book now “starts” on chapter 7 since I added chapters in the beginning.

If you want…[Read more]

@whalekeeper sorry, if there are an inaccuracies in this.

Nar and Jr.

“I’m officially bored.”

Nar looked at her brother, and smiled as they walked down the halls. “You can watch me in my ‘physical education’ thingy they have, if you want. It’s the closest thing this place seems to have to combat training.”

“So you’re finally getting back into…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s fine. I’m gonna enjoy the attitude of Alpha if nothing else. I think a draw would stay true to his character if Alpha saw the spar as a game. Oh, will Sebster Gangster be there? Alpha would love to see him.

@whalekeeper

I’m honestly really worried about this spar. I don’t want to downplay your character, but at the same, don’t want to do injustice to mine.

…and I’m also really bad at fight scenes…