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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤ It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love! And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy. Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….) Thanks for sha…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!!! 😊
@writerlexi1216 Thank you! I’d love to see you do some manga, definitely try it!! 😀
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Kads replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 6 months ago
@abigail-m Thank you! ^^ I’ll probably post some art of Faye later in case anybody’s interested lol
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Okay, I know I’m late and obviously behind. XD but I wanted to say THAT’S SOOOOO AWESOME ABOUT ALL OF THE ACCOMPLISHMENTS YOU’VE MADE WITH YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m just sooooo proud of you, girl!!!! WOOOHOO!!!!!! You’re on a roll!!!!!! Keep up you’re I N C R E D I B L E work!!!!!! Still cheering you on all the waaaaaaaay!!…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting Seriously? I didn’t think it was very good XD I try though, I try. Ahaha I’m happy to hear you liked it though!!
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting WHOA!!! That is SO GOOD!!!!! :DDD I’ve always wanted to do realism but never got very good at it XD
On that note, I finished the manga paneling.. it’s only one page and not very good, but still. It’s left to right, too. Sorry if it doesn’t feel authentic or the format is weird or if you can’t read it XD

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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting Aww, sorry to hear you had to stop drawing!! What kind of stuff did you draw?
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Kads replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 6 months ago
Wow, this is a hard question… I have so many interesting characters imo! I’d probably pick, if I had to choose, either Faye or Kadotake. They’re both from diff stories, but I’ll describe them. 🙂
Faye, as her name suggests, is a fairy (!!!). A pixie, to be more precise. (And yes she has a pixie cut.) She’s one of my MC’s bodyguards!…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 6 months ago
Ooo, fun idea!! Let’s see… None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow. I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude. And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting XD I really only got to where I am today with a tonnnnnn of practice!!! I draw nearly every day and it improves my skills and style by a lot!!!
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting XD they really don’t look good at a l l . If you want I can show you how my art has progressed over the years..
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
LOL I JUST FOUND THIS REALLY OLD DRAWING AND I THOUGHT I’D POST IT XDDDD

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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
Lol, character art struggle: I was in the middle of this AWESOME drawing of one of my lil beans (lol I call my charries beans) and then one of the lines smudged…. I had to throw it out ;v;
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Kads replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I caught your post, thankfully XD
Well, my writing is getting better. Unfortunately I’m having way too many ideas and this is how one book became eight. XD I’m developing one of my charries further, her name is Faye and I’ll probably make a few posts about her somewhere… but yeah.. I have currently 15, 052  words in my novel…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Congrats!!
Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh. My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!! I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
I love this sooo much!!! Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉 To answer your questions,
1)Â I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!
2) Yes, I would!!! I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?
3)Â I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! 💛
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey Lexi!! I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!! Super excited!!!! Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉
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ella replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey Em!! I loved your story!! Sooo good!! I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words. And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait? I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character. I say this…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Yesss!! You should do a persona!!! Aww, thank you, I’m really glad to hear that I inspired you!!! 😊
XD thank you I enjoyed making it
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Kads replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 6 months ago
@e-k-seaver Yep! That’s basically what a persona is. Most of my personas are for putting myself into franchises XD, but I have a few that are kinda like alternate forms of myself if that makes sense.
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