Anatra

@abigail-m Thanks so much!!! I’m so excited I did it! I don’t have a big audience, but just posting stuff for people to read has skyrocketed my confidence and I feel more relaxed than I ever have! I am no longer scared out of my skin of sharing things and even being around people in general isn’t so scary.

@abigail-m Thanks!!! So glad you enjoyed them!!!! 🙂

You’re most welcome!! I’ve decided to share sneakpeeks like these in my emails for subscribers, hehehehe

@kathleenramm I have improved most in writing what I am wanting to portray.

What I mean is I actually complete the scenes for people to read. I sometimes forget readers are book readers, not mind readers! XD

I’ve definitely improved in fleshing charries out, or so people have told me.

wow lol i just realized i need to work on a blurb for my book XDDDD

i love all of you guys’s

@elishavet-pidyon well i think i like the squirrels best

@maryg3 Same!!!! we had a hobby farm and tons of woods to explore. At least I had a sister to be my comrade in crime lol

and same with writing, I love rewriting sad things that have happened to process them, its a tool i often turn to

@abigail-m

Привет! I am commenting on here as it wouldn’t let me reply to you on the activity-feed-thing.

My brother’s writing is amazing (Don’t Tell him I said that)!

Thank you! I love my wolves and themes too. (Otherwise why would I like talking about them so much?)

My favorite theme to write? Ooo, I suppose that ‘ matter what you’ve done,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome ;). I usually forget my character’s misbelief, so…

@elishavet-pidyon

It is amazing! I think the best thing for me is being able to like nerd about Bible characters, especially Jesus! And the relationships between the disciples, especially brother-brother relationships like Simon and Andrew, James and John, are really great!

@koshka

I get where you’re coming from. The Chosen does try to be h…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

I have never seen it, and (is this bad?) I honestly don’t want to. I have heard it is amazing, again from a trusted source. I just don’t watch much of anything (a bit too much of a book person with a vivid imagination and  accidental history snob/nerd).

Thank you so much! Yeah, I see. In my mind’s eye I see him standing there a moment perplexed while all the other Novak warriors chase the kids… But I didn’t make that very clear did I? 😉 I’ll work on that!
Thank you again!(and yeah, a lot of my ideas center around emotion)
@anatra23

I haven’t seen it, but I’ve heard of it from a very trusted source that is was fantabulous.

@trahia-the-minstrel

@e-k-seaver

I have no idea what Sprint means… We have a kids thing at our church tonight that I’m working, but I may be able to participate.

@joy-caroline

Have you seen The Chosen? It’s quite good biblical fiction and does what you were saying with making the characters believable and have flaws and all that. It’s a great series about Christ’s disciples and the struggles they might have faced following him during the years of his ministry. It’s really cool, and they have two whole s…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

How did you publish your book? Was it traditional, hybrid, self-published? I don’t suppose you could explain your process? I’m really interested cause my first book is nearly ready for publication😁.

@koshka

Ok, yeah! Thanks, that probably works better, and might help limit the reader to the protagonist’s view point. Anything else? 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon

*Smiles at the names*
I love the ending! I may change ‘Milla was curled up on the ground,’ to ‘I could just see Milla curled up on the ground,’ or something like that. But then again, I don’t know.

Feel free to tag as you like! Sorry, I have a habit of forgetting half I meant to say till after I’v posted something!

@koshka, @anatra23, @power, @anyone

Because you might like to read it and help revise.