@abigail-m
Active 5 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Annabelle replied to the topic Some questions about characters in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
I hope you don’t mind if I pop in here!
1. Yes, I felt that way about Imogen from the Ascendance Series by Jennifer A. Nielson. She was nice, I guess, but I didn’t really connect with her. I think part of the problem was that she had like zero personality.
2. I’m going to go with Orion from my WIP. I would pick 2 or 4 for him. I absolutely hate…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
I hope that wasn’t confusing.
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
By a strong church I mean one where God can move unhindered, the people are unified as the body of Christ, and the pastor preaches the Word and the congregation backs him.
We do actively worship if that’s what you mean. We dance before the LORD in praise, but nothing such as Jewish ring dancing or stuff like that.
My favorite…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Ah yes, Wentworth’s letter. That scene (besides Louisa’s fall) is probably one of my favorite in the book. And I usually don’t enjoy romance books…
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
Wow that was so good, like how?! I’m not good a poetry, so I don’t have any suggestions for you but just yeah…
No words. That was amazing!
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! You’re so sweet!! Eep thanks! 😊 <3
Aw thank you for the encouragement that means a lot!!! Me too! YES! It’s been super fun to write! 😄
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
OOoooh your story idea sounds so cool!!! I love how you’re going to do the POVs! That’s super cool, especially with the middle brother being the main POV. That’s an awesome opportunity for some internal (and external conflict)! Love it!
Some questions…
1. Is there magic in your story, or are the boy’s powers more like…[Read more]
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Morgan replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I guess since I did Jem last time, I’ll do his sister Jewel this time.
“Ouch!” she cried, “what did I hit?”
Jewel rolled her eyes and muttered something about it still being snooping as he opened the bag and pulled out a metal box.
“Now that is definitely snooping,” said Jewel, “what if someone comes in and asks us what we are doing?”
“How…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Can we get this up and running again with brand new lines from characters? I still don’t really have many….but maybe we can expand this to be lines of not just dialogue but just very short bits of our books?
@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h@elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms @morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q@power [Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
That’s cool! Yeah, I’ve liked the style for a long time cause my older brothers are really into it, and one of them got me into it. I don’t watch all anime, though, cause a lot of them are quite dark and/or haves weird/adult content.
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
I just updated my site so that the first snippet of my op is there. It’s not perfect, I still need to do some tweaks, but I still get a thrill out of seeing it there.😁
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
Yup😂 I’m trying to make an anime op for my book.😁 I got this urge to work on it again yesterday, after giving up for about a year or two. I might post clips of it on my website as I make it. We’ll see how I go.
Thank you!
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Morgan replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
Great job on your website! I can tell that you have put a lot of work into it.
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Morgan replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I think that it’s a great, workable idea, and I encourage you to work on it while you are still really excited about it. I am a total panster, so I understand how that works.
I have some questions that may help you develop the story more. What happened to the dad (is he still alive)? Is the only driving theme the sibling…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
Lovely poem!!! It looks like @thelobsterlover and @power did a phenomenal job explaining everything, so there’s not much for me to say, other than great job! 😀
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Natalie C. replied to the topic I finally read Green Ember!! in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I totally want to see that drawing!
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
@anatra
Thank you! And thanks for commenting, it means a lot to me!❤️😊
Thank you! And no, I still haven’t completed my privacy policy … I kinda got side-tracked today by doing some art for an animated clip for my book …😅
Thank you!
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Lydia S. replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
Agh, congrats!!! It looks amazing. 😀
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
So, I’m not the only one who does that!!! XD I very rarely read the ending of a book at the end of the book… Usually I spoil it for myself somewhere during the first chapter or maybe even before starting the first chapter… *facepalm* Honestly, I blame it on my writing style. I always know how my stories end and begin, so I guess…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, ofc!!!
Aww, thank you!!!! I know; I LOVE redemption scenes… I’ll probably end up writing way too many for this series, and only a few will make it into the novels, but I’ll enjoy every minute of it. XD
Yes, I love being able to connect with Bible characters like this!!! It’s fascinating to get into their heads and persona…[Read more]
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