[Zemira]

@highscribeofaetherium @power @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello Thanks everyone.

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@everyone! @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

*trigger warning* ⚠️

So, I’ve had this idea for a long time now, and I think it’d make a pretty good story. So, it’s a realism fiction about a girl named Melody; I’ll post some brainstorming pics I’ve come up with; and the gist of the plot is that Melody went through a series of catastrophic events since she was five and she struggles with her faith immensely, till she finds this dog who she befriends and names Miracle.  The first catastrophic event was when her parents and her drove into a lake by accident; her parents drowned but by miracle (or in Melody’s eyes, a curse) she was saved and managed to get onshore. They live in the suburb like area, so on the way to the highway to get help, Melody happens across the stray dog (thinking Aussie) and gets attached. When the police try and take the dog away, Melody pleas with them and they allow it one condition: the dog undergoes training proceeders to be a service dog to help with the trauma. Miracle passes with some difficulty, but barely makes it in; becoming Melody’s service companion.

The second event happens when she is 9; she was transferred into several different foster homes until she arrives at a place that wants to adopt her. They put her in public school for the first time, which up to this point she was homeschooled, and something at school triggers her into a fight with one of the bullies, and she accidentally ruins her vocal chords; causing her to be mute.
This strings a long series of re-learning a lifestyle, and during this, she trains Miracle to put her chin underneath Melody’s throat so the gurgle sounds can become a sort-of connection.

And the third event would be a house fire that happened across her street when she was 13; a little girl that lived in the house was missing. Miracle found the scent of the person and found her buried underneath rubble and carried her with the help of Melody to the cops. Resulting in Melody’s search and rescue training with Miracle.

So, that is the first half of the book; the second half of the book would be Melody and Miracle working side by side on cases throughout her trials, with things triggering her trauma and faith but her staying strong throughout the end. The final ending would be that the dog dies on a case…but when walking away, Melody finds another puppy in the woods, and names it Blessing.

So, what do y’all think? I’m thinking a YA age range would be appropriate.

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@freedomwriter76 Thanks!

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@whalekeeper I don’t even know how to talk about it; I guess I’ve just hit a hard spot in my life. Let’s just say, people weren’t the nicest growing up…so, I can honestly really relate to some of the stuff y’all write. I know God holds me, it just hurts that’s all. I know He’s holding my hand though.

@esther-c Thankyou for the prayers!

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

Hey everyone; sorry I kind of just disappeared. Things lately haven’t been easy, to be honest and I just haven’t found the courage to write, so…yeah. I’ve caught up with y’all’s writings; they are all FANTASTIC!! I love them all!

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

Okay, lets see if this works: 

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

Shoot, you weren’t commenting me…I’m so sorry…it doesn’t look like my pics went through at all, now that I’m looking back…does anyone see my pictures?

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@esther-c Thanks! Yours look fantastic!!!! 😉

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@godlyfantasy12 I’m gonna guess 3 as well; I’ve read up a bit on your characters and that seems right.

@whalekeeper I’m gonna guess 2.

And yes, y’all were right! 2 was the lie! He did nearly die by a fork though XD

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

Seren

1. Nearly died by a fork
2. He accidentally locked himself in a dryer
3. His favorite pastime is chilling on a roof staring at the stars eating fruit snacks

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@mineralizedwritings Alrighty then, thankyou for letting me know!

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Zemira]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @the other person in our group…I forgot whoops.

Seren: 

Seren rubbed his throbbing forehead with his right hand, trying to sooth the steady thrum in his mind. Everything was…hazy? Dizzy. Swirling. Where was he? Seren pushed up on his elbows, sitting criss-cross on stone floors. Wait…stone…what? 
A familiar groan beside him brightened his conscience a bit.
“Neviam?”
A moan was the only response he got.
Seren shook his head, clearing the darkness from his mind, “Are you okay? You look…hurt…” Seren’s eyes widened at the sight of blood pooling on the ground. A gash on Neviam’s skull was the source of the unsightly, red liquid.
“Okay…its going to be okay…here,” Seren slipped his pocket knife from his pant pockets and tore a piece of his shirt off. Dabbing Neviam’s wound, the white cloth quickly soaked with blood. Neviam jerked with the touch, eyes closed tightly. “It’s okay. Squeeze my hand. It’s okay.”
“Wherrrree….where are we?”
“Shhh. I don’t know. We kinda just dropped in.”
“How is that possible?”
Seren shrugged, “I have no idea. But more importantly, we need help. Can you stand? I can support you…”
Neviam nodded, “I think, yeah…I think I can. What if no-one is here, Seren? What if…” her words slurred as more blood trickled down her face and to her chin.
Seren’s heartbeat quickened, “Don’t worry about anything. Let me do the worrying. God knows I do enough for the both of us! Here, arm around shoulder, and…then here, lean on me. Now, let’s try and find help.”
And hopefully answers too. 

hurt people, hurt others
healed people, heal others
get saved, save someone else...you never know

[Author]

Posts