Enid

@whalekeeper Could Ellie meet Marcel if he’s in the lunchroom?

@whalekeeper

I did write an rp, twice. But the first time wi-fi must have gone out briefly, and the second they signed me out. Just my luck.

Alpha

“I’m not asking you to be a suicidal maniac, or to bear the weight of protecting a trillion people on your shoulders just because of some debt when you were a child like me, all I am asking is that…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Enemies to lovers is my favorite romance trope! I don’t have a ton of experience, but here are my suggestions. The villain could save her life at the risk of his own. They could be having a normal conversation in which she says she likes something, and he remembers and gives it to her. They could both be nerds about the same obscure…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*ominous voice* I’m always watching

Ooo gummies! Yayy

@whalekeeper

To be honest, I was having doubts about this fight, but now…you struck the point of excitement in me, and the emotional point in Alpha. Well done.

Jr

Jr didn’t avoid the knife, letting the blade stab him in the torso. Nar screamed. After looking down, Alpha Grath stared at his attacker.

“Hugo Angelo, this fight isn’t only about…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I understand why you did, but you have made a large error. In a spar, against Hugo, Jr would never use knives. He would rely upon his speed, mobility, and strength to toy with Hugo. I’ll work with what you started with, though.

Jr

The boy thought going behind him would matter. Jr laughed on the inside. But he suddenly…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks for that! I especially like your idea of giving them common ground 😀

Thanks, hope writing your book goes well for you!

@whalekeeper I have no idea how to write romance, but good luck! I know it will be an awesome story if you’re writing it

@whalekeeper Yay! Congrats on your first day of summer break!

@whalekeeper

I guess I have dug myself into a hole here. Now, by telling you the name of the series, you will receive major spoilers for it unless you happen to have already read it. Oh well…

This is the Five Kingdoms series by Brandon Mull. It is a fantasy series written for 9-12-year-olds about a boy named Cole who dives into a fantasy world…[Read more]

@whalekeeper sorry, if there are an inaccuracies in this.

Nar and Jr.

“I’m officially bored.”

Nar looked at her brother, and smiled as they walked down the halls. “You can watch me in my ‘physical education’ thingy they have, if you want. It’s the closest thing this place seems to have to combat training.”

“So you’re finally getting back into…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s fine. I’m gonna enjoy the attitude of Alpha if nothing else. I think a draw would stay true to his character if Alpha saw the spar as a game. Oh, will Sebster Gangster be there? Alpha would love to see him.

@whalekeeper

I’m honestly really worried about this spar. I don’t want to downplay your character, but at the same, don’t want to do injustice to mine.

…and I’m also really bad at fight scenes…

@whalekeeper

Hello!!

Ok, I’m not the best at romance, but here’s a few tips I can think of right now:

1.  Establish why the two dislike or hate each other so much. This will add more tension for when the two are forced to work together.
2. Build up to the friendship first, because that might take at least few chapters depending on how much they…

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@whalekeeper

It’s past noon, but good luck anyway!

@whalekeeper @theducktator

It might already be past noon your time, but I’m wishing you both luck anyway! Hope you guys do well with what work you have left and enjoy your summer break! <3

@whalekeeper,

Nice to meet you!

I will say, romance is not my area of interest and I have tried to avoid any romance in my books. (However, there are still two characters that I am suspicious would end up falling in love anyway.) However, that does not mean I have nothing to say to help you.

In the series I am currently reading, there is a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hmm…Alpha is at the 20-22 mark in combat. I mean, he was literally created to fight, and get him motivated past the usual amount of “It’s a fight!” And you’re dead. In a spar, he tones it down…so things should be fine…

@loopylin

That is correct.

Chase

Chase breathed a sigh, relaxing his muscles. His eyes turned more pale…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I really like what Ducky said (can I use that nickname @ducktator ? XD) about having a cultist influence the king within his closer circles. Another idea – since you want to preserve the concept of the land being rich and probably settled and populated – is to create a special communications system, then cut it off somehow before the…

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