WalkByFaith

@grcr @acancello @trailblazer

Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!

@grcr

Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!

I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]

@s-tastet

Or any other of Ted Dekker’s books?

@s-tastet

Oh, okay! Yeah, I think I preferred AD30, but 33 was still good. It was really sad though – I won’t spoil XD

Have you read the Chosen series by Jerry B. Jenkins? It’s basically the show, but written as a book, and it’s SO good!! I liked all the insight into the characters. I’ve only seen a few episodes of the show, so I might be…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello

Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.

I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂

@esther-c

Sounds fun!! Min and Allison gave pretty good examples. I don’t really have that much experience writing scripts, but I wish you luck!

@acancello

Lolol 😂

@lydia-s

Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!

@savannah_grace2009

I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂

@power

like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!

Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…

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Okay guys, here’s the most romantic thing I’ve written so far:

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should answer, she knew that hiding would only make him worse, but she was paralyzed with the cold hands of fea…

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@grcr

I hope so!

@grcr  @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁

@grcr

I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((

@grcr

I can’t add a pfp either ever since i joined!!

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you so much💗 That made my day!

Oh, and since you have the characters and plot figured out (How did I not see that??🤣) Just make sure Its to to elaborate and complicated and you add lots of details and description!

@esther-c

How fun! I have written a ton of plays when I lived in a neighborhood with a lot of kids even one about the board game “Clue.” I still write some now to preform when I see them all again, my longest being around 17 pages. I can try to help you out, 🙂 I think some good tips would to have everyone have around equal lines, if they want.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀

@trailblazer @light-warrior-pen @hybridlore @freedomwriter76

Here it is!

Before I could think any further, I collapsed on a bed, and fell asleep. I had a dream, one that filled me with pure happiness. It was the story of how my parents met. The story was told many times and each time, mom could not ever stop laughing and dad still felt a little…[Read more]