TheLobsterLover

@lana-blanchard

By a strong church I mean one where God can move unhindered, the people are unified as the body of Christ, and the pastor preaches the Word and the congregation backs him.

We do actively worship if that’s what you mean. We dance before the LORD in praise, but nothing such as Jewish ring dancing or stuff like that.

My favorite…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Ah yes, Wentworth’s letter. That scene (besides Louisa’s fall) is probably one of my favorite in the book. And I usually don’t enjoy romance books…

Very interesting! I’d read it. I like human/humanoid characters with animal abilities, but to be honest I usually end up making them humans with cat ears or dragon wings or whatever.

@faith-q Ha, I feel that way about some characters too. But not any of mine, yet.

@nanisnook Someday I’ll draw it, or something similar…..

And Picket could be Echo cause he lost his arm…….

@autumn-rebecca Probably why he wanted me to watch that one first.

@faith-q You’d help him up? Or were you the one who pushed him off?

@lydia-s It is great! I recognized Helmer instantly when I saw him, before his name was even mentioned, thanks to all the chatter about him on here. I think he’s cool. And i liked Ember’s End the best too! (I don’t know, I tend to like the last book in series…..)

@godlyfantasy12
A good thesaurus comes in very handy. 😉

@thelobsterlover

Hmm, well, those activity things didn’t worked for me, so I tagged you here. (Sharing images on here is troublesome for me too)

Ooo, I can’t wait to see it!

Here’s a link to my email;If this works.

Your story idea sounds great! I have one question before I begin making suggestions: what would be the “powers” the siblings have? Do they turn into those creatures? How does that work?

Tagging some more people….

@trahia-the-minstrel @elanor @writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile @daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @m…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting For number 3, just put both.

@godlyfantasy12

What I meant by “lost over an entire line” is that in stanza 1 you have 11 lines, in stanza 2 you have 12 lines, and in stanza 3 you have 11 lines, but in stanza 4 you only have 9-10 lines (It appears that I may have made a mistake on line 41. It might need to be split between “here” and “since”.) If you look at the syllable count…[Read more]

And please acquit me for being impulsively apologistic. 😳😋

And please forgive the terrible grammar. 🙄 I’m rereading through my post and . . . 😬

Here’s the poem in stanzaic form.

(Line number)

1   O’ Ring the bell! Call out the clowns! 8 (Syllables in Line/Beats) A (Rhyme Scheme)

Tis time to fly on wings of doubt, 8 A

And float upon the breeze of bliss, 8 B

forgetting all the things you’ll miss. 8 B

5   Don’t fear the things that lie ahead, 8 C

the dangers, darkness, fear and…[Read more]

@annabelle @elishavet-pidyon

I suppose Natalia is sort of that entire known world, but for some reason it seemed to me more like a kingdom in a wild, unknown land.

I wonder if there’s a thing on here for Antagonist development. Or maybe we should start a new one.

Uniqueness… That may turn out to be a struggle, especially as I’m not entirely…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, I like that last bit.

I can’t exactly see the rhyme and meter as the stanzas are written together in paragraph form, but what I could I enjoyed. Would you mind reposting it in verses (If it was written as such)?