TheLobsterLover

@eaw24 You have provoked the attention of the Black Mongoose. Though this act in all likelihood was unpremeditated (All you did was post a short introductory bio regarding oneself) and based off of the directions given regarding the proper behavior of an individual lately enlisted in the KP corps, I have come to the conclusion that it has been a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You’re fine! I’m sorry this reply is so late.

What research I’ve actually done was mostly reading /hearing testimonies, and study material for a lifeline ministry. I haven’t had anyone who’s personally delt with suicide to talk it over with, at least someone I could trust their advise, if you know what I mean.

I will remember…[Read more]

@starshiness yes…..that’s how it is for me….

His condition is largely trauma induced (his world’s version of a marine in something like WWII mixed with Iraq). The shell is actually what saves his life in the long run.

@emilysf

Mwahaha… It is supposed to be, just not exactly in the normal sense. He is dying in this scene, but *spoiler* he makes it through. Good! It has to get my readers’ attention and hopefully shake them.

This is actually pulling up some writing struggles on my side. The overarching theme of this book is hope, beyond reason, beyond the…[Read more]

@sunny421

“Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!”

She’s here! Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

*Hands you an Oreo*

I have yet to find a Jonathan Parks episode to listen to, but as soon as I do I will tell you what I think of it.

I don’t think I’ve ever asked you this question, so: Do you like jellybeans? I don’t like or dislike them.

Here’s a drawing (another traced fan art) of the character Hunter later in the story, holding two discs. (The story explains why.)

@freedomwriter76 I actually will give you this little clip of a 49-page Star Wars/Tron fanfiction I had a lot of fun writing. It also kinda has a tiny bit of Marvel in it, because I was inspired to write it somewhat in the style of the What If? series.

“This’ll take a few minutes.” said Echo, crouching down to insert his data-spike right “hand”…

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@freedomwriter76 Yes, it is weirdly fun to torture characters. (You saw what I did to Star-Lord, and that was only physical. I didn’t put a lot of emotional torment in that one.) And I agree, I haven’t seen a lot of Marvel but Steve Rogers is that sort of character in my opinion.

@freedomwriter76 Cool, cool. Yeah, sometimes a character’s best match is the one he has.

@freedomwriter76 Are you kidding me??m!! I love fanfics, and yours does an AMAZING job. Making your beloved (and technically not yours) characters have really dramatic inner turmoil is a fanfiction writer’s LIFE, practically. At least in my case. Great job. I enjoyed it, and sorta like seeing seemingly invulnerable characters with emotions.

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?

By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?

@elishavet-pidyon

Aahhhhhhh!!!!!!! Alwin, my dear lad…*sigh* That sounds awesome for a first chapter; definitely something I could get hooked on.

Honestly I’ve always envisioned your books to be more YA than middle grade, so don’t worry about that. Your themes will be more powerful to an older age group anyway.

Yes, it’s Mikkel! Thank you,…[Read more]

Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.

Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…

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@freedomwriter76 I can’t actually draw that well. I traced that drawing off a picture I took of a page in a comic….

@everybody I actually had a situation like this in a character a couple months ago. Here is this stern, fierce, typically cynical and sometimes selfish character, standing over the aftermath of a battle where the character he was sworn to protect sacrificed herself to defeat the main villain, and he literally drops his weapon, falls to his knees…[Read more]

@starshiness Those are awesome tidbits of story! Sadly, I don’t have anything which could fit in a single paragraph. I sorta think in long stories…….

@freedomwriter76 What fanfics do you typically write? I have them for everything, and I mean EVERYTHING. Star Wars, Marvel, Jurassic World, a little-known Disney sci-fi called Tron, Warrior Cats, and one that happens to be a combination of all of those.

And wow, that’s a long story!! I honestly wish I could stay on one project that long, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I don’t know any real-world person with DID, nor do I know any characters, but having SPD (sensory processing) myself, I can sorta sympathize with characters who have inner issues. While I don’t consider my condition to be hindering at all, I can see why Corvina’s really would be. I would just suggest research, like everyone else.…[Read more]