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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Sorry y’all.
Mikkel
Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.
Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?
Where was he?
movement caught his attention. Another…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Okay, that was NOT tomorrow. But here’s my character! He’s not too much of a talker (the show described him as “not much of a conversationalist,” so to cut down on the large number of tags I’ll probably just tag whoever owns the character he happens to be talking to. That all right with you?
All right, I’ll start…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Feather and Rinzler
“Everett,” said Feather. “That’s a nice name, actually.”
“Fits him better than the Dark Player does,” Rinzler mused.
Feather’s gaze flicked to the newcomers. “Hello, Molly and Xavier. You two have great names as well. I’m Feather, and over there is my friend, Rinzler. I’ll let the other two…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Does this sound remotly interesting to anyone? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
I don’t think I’ve ever read dystopian, but that sounds interesting.
What do you mean “doesn’t end in a successful rebellion?” (If it wouldn’t spoil it)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Why don’t you go ahead? Not to sound weird and stalking, but Freedomwriter isn’t on.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
And I accidentally tagged myself… brilliant.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka
Mikkel
Weapon ready, blood hot, heart solid stone. A small weathered door stood at the end of this passage. Mikkel pressed himself to the wall as close to the door as he dared. He felt Riker and Ezra beside him.
Voices…young voices.
“Are there any female guards that you know of?” a girl. “If not…p…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years, 1 month ago
Wowsers.
What type of medic? (If you know that yet)
I am seriously thrilled with the prospect of the medical side of war. I have started research for Cecelia, my other MC for Seas of Fury, and it’s nuts how much this field has grown in the last wars.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon That’s super sad, but amazing storytelling all at the same time. I want to read your book……
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Ah, black tea almost begs for cream.
It certainly is interesting, although for me it’s a lot easier than historical fiction, the genre I started out in.
Flash fiction is basically extra-short short stories, often only a few paragraphs long, like character sketches. It’s quite amusing, besides being good for writing…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
This is getting awesome!
The Brothers
“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.
Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.
He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”
Alyona shook her head.
He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”
Ara…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello world! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Koshka, and I write historical-nonmagical-fantasy. And poetry, flash fiction, ect.
Interesting! I don’t read dystopian myself as I haven’t been able to find one that didn’t make me ill.
Now for questions:
Do you like hot tea? If so do you prefer it with cream?
What are your favorite…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
That sounds good to me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.
The brothers
“Let’s review what we know.”
Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.
“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! I love it too!
I think they need to meet each other, then learn who Ocran is, than we can have the ‘battle’. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I love how you’re writing his this way. It makes me feel right at home.
Mikkel
Face-palmed?
Mikkel slowly brought his hand to his forehead.
Face-to-palm.
“Yes. I’ve never seen an officer hit himself.” The rifle strap twisted back and forth in his hand. “I’m sorry ma’am.” He staightened his helmet. “But sir, you grew up on a farm?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Zlatan
“Good. Ve need to move.”
He turned, searching for the group.
Here was Vulkasin, gazing longingly at the stone wall. There’s Arabella, looking to the stars.
And Novembré standing stock still, wide eyed and open faced.
The brothers shared a look.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Mikkel
Ezra smacked himself full in the face. Strange. This officer hit himself, not his soldiers.
“You’re right. And, forgive me if I’m intruding, but, how do you know castles so well?”
Oh, that.
“I spent much of my childhood at my Uncle’s estate and the Squirey.”
Eyebrows rose.
“It’s a court boarding school”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Mikkel
A bed chamber?
“Sir…” Mikkel pulled off his helmet. The chin strap needed straightened. “If this were my castle, I wouldn’t be too pleased to find strangers inside the walls, much less the bed chambers.” he ran his fingers through his hair. “But we should be nearing the servants quarters by now, seeing the lack of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Any Other Fanfiction Writers Out There? 😀 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 Really? So sorry, next time I get a chance I’ll try to redo it.
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