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Esther replied to the topic Project Elites in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I love the way the story’s changed! And the characters are awesome!! (Plus, it’s funny because Skylar and Austin have the same faceclaims as my charries, Callista and Everton. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ok! I haven’t really been RPing much lately anyway. XD I might pull my characters and put them back into the character castle. Idk yet.
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Esther replied to the topic Welp… I’m writing a script… in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alright, thanks!!
I love the example. XD 😉
Thanks for the tips!!
Those plays sound like so much fun! 😊
Thanks!!
That would be a really fun skit to see. XD
Um… I don’t think so. At least not right now. (I’ve only sort of started…. Ok, I’ve written half a line. 😂)
It’s probably mo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oooh, sounds like fun!! I haven’t been doing a ton of RPing lately, so maybe I’ll hope in and do this one. 🙂
I’ll post my character description this afternoon.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@hybridlore @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @whalekeeper @acancello @grcr @anyone-else
You…and your favorite character…are invited to a party! Similar to a character castle, we’ll introduce our characters and they can interact with each other to help with character building. Also, because why not?
A side…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I love it! I have the same thoughts as Cloaked Mystery. Also it might help if you spread out the chapter a little more. The events seem to happen really fast, and the reader barely has time to process before the next event happens. Sorry if that doesn’t make sense, I’m not good at explaining what I mean, haha! Maybe go more into…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Fantasy Universe: Celestiar in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
i like your idea for your universe and books on each of the planets. I had an idea for that once, but it kind of fell apart. Good luck with yours!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
oh yeah I remember reading that, I just didn’t put two and two together haha! Like you said, I just took it as that’s how long she lived there, not how old she was.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
It’s really good! I like it! One question:How old is Libbie? Or does it say, sorry if I missed it, I kind of skimmed it.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I love the name Lilitu as well! Another one of my favorites in my story is Sef, and I absolutely love Ottoline’s name!!! And Marcurious. I guess I might be a little biased, haha!
But thank you! I’ll pass on the message to Lilitu…haha! Right now he and Sef are running through the woods to evade the Pythonos. He’s a little busy, but…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent. So it’s totally fine if lots of people recognize them! I guess it doesn’t matter, however I want to make the Bible/Bible stories interesting and exciting for those who…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
wait sorry I just realized there’s like 417 pages never mind! so i’m guessing that’s a no.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Is there room for one more?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
I hope you like it! It can get a little graphic in violence at times, but it’s nothing too bad and it’s really well written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @acancello @jonas @hybridlore
Guys don’t you find it weird that there’s 907 members on KP (it says at the bottom of the screen when you click on “community”) and there’s only a few that are on here a lot? WHERE ARE ALL THE OTHERS? haha! I’m kind of hyper, I had a double shot espresso right before my volleyball game…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
You are so lucky to have a mom who you can go to for advice on writing! I love my mom and she’s basically my best friend, but when it comes to writing, I’m on my own. She doesn’t like the kind of writing I write because she gets really sad and depressed when the scenes are sad. Same with my dad.
I had to teach myself how to write up until…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
@lydia-s if you want to read more I’ll tag you when i post this chapter!
Thanks! It’s one of my favorites!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
And of course don’t feel bad if you don’t have time to read it, I get it, and glad you’re working on your WIP so much! And great work, 54 pages is a lot! I remember how happy I was when I hit 50 pages 🙂 Idk how many pages mine is since I’m using a platform called Reedsy and it doesn’t have pages (kind of weird, i know), but I have…[Read more]
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My hands were shaking so bad!
Yeah. I’m guessing there are people who joined and basically just “left” but didn’t delete their accounts.
@jonas
yeah it’s kind of sad 🙁 I love KP
A lot of people joined a long time ago and are adults now, so don’t really have time for KP I guess. Other ppl join and then NEVER come on. But 907 does seem pretty high.
Also there’s an age limit, so once you turn 25 or something like that, you can’t use it anymore. I’m not sure if your account is deleted after that, but yeah, basically what @highscribeofaetherium said.
lol, yeah… I think about that often…. 🙃 Cloaked Mystery is probably right.
By the way, if at all possible, do not drink double shot espresso before a game. (totally not speaking from experience)
lol
I saw this post called “character castle” and I really think it’d be fun, but there’s already too many characters, so should I make another one, and if I did would you guys join?
If you don’t know what a character castle is, there’s one in the section “general writing discussions” I believe.
Oh, sorry this is late! If you make another, I would definitely join!
okay! I’ll tag you when I do!
Yeah, like Highscribe said, they might be adults and not have time, or just super busy people 🙂
I think there is a Character castle 2.0, but its not as popular as #1, I think @freedomwriter76 and @whalekeeper and @godlyfantasy12 know most about it 😀
@acancello
I was also thinking…what if I made a “character castle” without a castle, in a different place, like “character treehouse” (okay that sounds lame, but you know what I mean) or “character birthday party” or something like that?