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-GRCR- replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 5 months ago
lol 😂 for sure
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 5 months ago
Ohh.. I see.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?
Also, is there anything I could improve on?
(Am I changing things too much?)
Chapter 1
The world is a dark…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
ALL of it is hyperbole XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
good question.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Sure!
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Kads replied to the topic hi (again) in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
ahh, set theory was actually pretty decent, i can vibe with you on that one for sure. it’s one of the easier topics out there lol
wow! your writing seems very intentional and full of meaning, just by the name alone there
i’d agree with that, info dumping is abominable and i try to avoid it at all costs 😂 there are definitely…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Woops, tags for the above post about Fenninn in the RP…
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @rae @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @hybridlore @jonas @anyone else I’m missing
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Aranel replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Awesome! That’s actually one of the few I haven’t read yet. It’s the first he’s published actually. I’ve read the Novella that takes place after the book, but it doesn’t give much context, despite being on the same planet. You’ll have to tell me how it is, unless I beat you, but I still have 4 other books from him I’m trying to…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Well, I don’t know of many of your characters, but it might be fun to see Tailen and Thing in it if they would work. The 4D sword would also be cool. Do whatever you want though. You don’t have to join.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
I’m thinking of doing something drastic.
What if I split my original book idea into three books? Like one for Sef and Lilitu, one for Marcurious, Neveah, and Ottoline, and a third one of how the three reunite?
That way, there won’t be so much jumping around in perspectives, and I’ll have a way to…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @rae @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @hybridlore @anyone else
Would anyone be interested in starting a new RP with the following description:
The characters have been transported into a dark castle by a mysterious king who seems to have power across all the realms of…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @rae @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @hybridlore @anyone else
The characters have been transported into a dark castle by a mysterious king who seems to have power across all the realms of existence. They will have to figure out what he wants with them before it’s too late.…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic hi (again) in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom nice to meet you! what’s your favourite kind of math? i’m currently studying algebra II heheh (although math is far from my favourite subject criiiii)
septrum is a really cool name! any meaning behind it?
hmmm, i feel like i tend to lean towards hard worldbuilding, but in a subtle way? like characters casually offhand mentioning…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you! That’s just what I needed, lol
You and Jonas and HighScribe have been so helpful in my writing journey! I owe you guys one, lol
(If I get it published, I’m sending you guys signed copies!)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
(I guess we just keep going until we want to stop?)
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(I know I just went, but there seem to only be three of us regularly active on here so…)
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Aranel replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
It’s really cool when a story can end that way, being able to have a lasting impact on us, in a bitter-sweet sort of way. I’ll have to look more into my Tolkien lore!
Yesyesyesyes do!
Fair enough, still a fun idea though!
Yes, and one I might implement another time. I have other developing races in need of a story, so. . . .
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