TheArcaneAxiom

@everyone

As I was saying before my post was rudely deleted…

I haven’t had worked on this at all in a while, but I’ve been thinking about it in the back of my head. I realized that I have very little attachment to the vague plot ideas I have so far, or most of the characters, which leaves the setting as basically the only thing I do care ab…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m painfully aware. I’ll rewrite it later. *sigh*

@jonas

Wyoh ate your post.

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve read some more of your book! I think I stopped at chapter 16.

The only big thing I’ve noticed so far is that Sef’s expression of her grief feels a little unrealistic. Of course anyone would be devastated if their only family they had left was taken away, that part makes sense. I just felt that her hurting herself reall…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I’ll pray for you!

Wyoh, may your crush never like you back. Don’t eat this.

Wyoh, may your cheese always be warm and soft and squishy and weird.

Oh good.

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for you guys!

(Wyoh, you’d better not eat this, too)

Wyoh, seriously??

Or at least stop bugging us or we will report you to the authorities…

die wyoh

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

@whalekeeper

Don’t die, Whaley! *runs in circles panicking* whatdowedowhatdowedowhatdowedo?

@keilah-h

NO! I. WILL. NOT. YIELD! *swings sword wildly at air* WYOH. MUST. DIE! *spins around, still swinging sword* DEATH TO TECH GHOSTS! *falls over*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

🤣

I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@keilah-h

*sheathes sword and hops off of giant fire-breathing duck* Well, we may just have to torture the hosts of the site then. Maybe by playing Baby Shark 3,000,000 times in a row.

@theducktator

Alas indeed! Something must be done. Wyoh is out there somewhere. We must find her… and destroy her. Draw your swords, KPers, we ride! *charges off in random direction*