TheArcaneAxiom

@theshadow

This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.

Thank you!
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The soundtrack is epic.

I just watched The Blues Brothers for my brother’s birthday and it was hilarious. I want to watch it again. XD ‘

@esther-c

I’m so annoyed with Hallie right now. I get where she’s coming from, but still. 😒 So Katrina’s parents died with Antonio’s…I did not expect that. It explains why she’s so opposed to God. I love that scene at the end with Easton and Ruby. It’s adorable.🥰

How could they sit here, eating Tyler’s favorite meal, without him eating with t…

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@rae

Praying for him.

@hybridlore @ruth @elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! Mom and I went to Ohio to visit this week. Grandma is still in the hospital, but she’s eating solid food now and the hope is that she will be moved to a rehab center this week. Her movement is limited, but she was able to sit in a chair and she is now off of oxygen. We’re…[Read more]

@theshadow

Hello! So nice to meet you, and thanks!

It’s been great, definitely better this last school year. I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!

I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.

Oh my goodness.

It has been far too long! So much has been happening in my life. But most importantly…

I finished my book!

At least, the first draft. Still, that was a mountain I was so happy to climb. I transferred it all to Reedsy after Grammerly abandoned my google doc, and finished all 115k words of the manuscript from there. It still has…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Wow, I just watched a video of someone playing one and that is so cool.

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@ellette-giselle

Of course! XD

Also, you hit 4,000 posts!!

@hybridlore

Oh, thanks! I do have some people already signed up for feedback, but I won’t say no to more.

@theshadow

Access granted. There’s nothing there quite yet, but I’ll tag you when I get something posted.

@the_lost-journal

😂😂😂 I wouldn’t edit like that. I can’t draw. XD Other reasons too of course. XD

@rae

I’m impressed that you managed that. I could maybe do eight hours, but not 12.

My grandma was in a bad car accident today. It was a front collision at 50-60 mph, but other than that, we don’t really know anything about the crash itself. My grandma is in the emergency room with a fractured elbow and some broken ribs. She should recover without needing surgery, but prayers would be appreciated.

@ellette-giselle

I’m going to be in Chicago from Wednesday till Sunday, and we aren’t bringing the laptops, so I’m going to disappear for a few days. I’ll catch up when I return.

@keilah-h

I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.

@ellette-giselle

The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.

If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely  see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.