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Hello, I’m Shadow, nice to meet you, welcome back to KP! Congrats on finishing your first draft! How has high school been?
If you want, I’d be happy to look at your new draft.
“He sure is a frog-walker, he heaves a big sigh
He only lacks wings for to be on the fly.”
Hello! So nice to meet you, and thanks!
It’s been great, definitely better this last school year. I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!
I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.
I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!
So relatable lol, and it goes by too quick.
I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.
Cool, I’ll check it out soon.
“He sure is a frog-walker, he heaves a big sigh
He only lacks wings for to be on the fly.”