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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@everyone @godlyfantasy12
I think I’ll add Alwin too. 🙂
…and once more Alwin managed to fiddle with my narrative voice. XD
Alwin
Strange things have happened to people. They’ve found hidden treasures in their basements, lost heirs in disguise as traitors, and sometimes even themselves in places they hadn’t been. Some of us have even become…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Wini is going to be, but I haven’t added her yet. I’ll go ahead and do the real quick.
Winifrith
Her heart beat inside her ears, yet somehow managed to choke her as well. She pressed her back against the becurtained wall and let the fluttering folds fall over her. Hiding her away until she could think clearly.
Home was small.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic CHARRIE MEME! in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
That would be hilarious! I can see them now…
Vulka&Lynnieforever!!!! XD
Ah, just kidding.
By the way, I was told to tell you Koshka is thrilled. In fact, when you meet… somebody you might find her to be a lot like Lynn in personality. Also, it would be hilarious if Vulka married a shortie. (His father did.[which is where Z…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic CHARRIE MEME! in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
This is pretty awesome. XD
1. Oldest OC
Um…………… Actually, I was going to say Cendrick, a main character from the first novel I set out to write (and made it to the third chapter.), But I just remembered one of the few vivid memories I have from my early early childhood. I was making a picture book during service at…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Lol, yes. XD
Godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Ok, I’ll go ahead and write an introductory POV. I’m playing with a narrative voice, by the way…
YosÃ
Gentle rain tapped against the shutters like the echoes of passing dreams, shut out from wakened lands. Their far off call swelled in YosÃ’s heart till he rested his head against the s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy
Yay! That sounds good. They can meet him while getting food (maybe he has found some?) and he can come back with them to meet N and Paxton.
Also, I’m thinking that one of the kids might ask about the brand, because adults usually try to ignore such things. He wouldn’t really mind, but it would open up some details…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
And yes, I’ve read through it. It’s so much fun!
Someday we might get together and publish it as “The Wild Wanderings of Our Lost Characters” or some other such title. I’m sure it’d be a best seller. XD
Actually, it’s been quite handy when on the off chance that I can’t quite get into the feel of my characters I can get on here…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay! Yeah, I thought they might. They’re such darlings. (As for the brand… I’m not even sure what to think about it. It’s just so horrible really, but it’s just one of those things in my books that doesn’t want to lighten up.)
I love your characters and don’t mind a rant. (I rant about mine, after all. XD)
As for his name, I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Oh, and I just wanted to say, I LOVE THE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN Y’ALL’S CHARRIES! Although, poor Grimm is getting a bit of a hard time. And the kids are so cute!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
*Emerges from the shadows*
Hi….. So…..
I know I kinda fell off this, but I’ve had a much needed break and now I want to join again.
You see, I have a new character. He’s pretty awesome, or so I gather from the little bit I understand of him; like I said, he’s very new.
Would you mind if he showed up and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Wow, this looks like it could be a ton of fun. (I’m thinking this is like a mixture of camp, Bible College, and a birthday party, because… That’s what a sleepover basically is.)
Also, I’m really not comfortable with makeup etc. either, but fun hair styles and those heinous face masks would be really fun! I would love to see my…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic New name, new me! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
Oops! I accidentally sent in a draft of that post. *Facepalm* I hope it wasn’t too rough.
Anyway, Your allegory sounds interesting! The end times are a bit difficult to write an allegory for anyway, with or without doctrinal differences, but it could make for a powerful read. My last book is technically over the end time harvest,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic New name, new me! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
That is funny! Your allegory sounds interesting though, and I get what you mean about theological niches. I struggle with the balance of doctrine and relatability myself, especially since my convictions on the Bible aren’t mainstream Christain. I’m an Apostolic Pentecostal, and that means my
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oof. I also have difficulties with this. (I think every author does at some point.)
I’ll just echo @booksbyjayna and say keep writing and study the authors you want to emulate. I’ve seen it work and will definitely be personally implementing it as much as I can.
(After all, it’s another excuse to read Prince Caspian again…)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic New name, new me! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
I do too; Theology is amazing because our Savior is amazing, and that makes it impossible not to talk about, sometime.
But at least we’re still in the struggle and keep getting up.
(It isssssss!)
WE ABSOLUTELY MUST.
Really? I’d love to hear about it! I actually have another one too that I’m doing with my twin sister, but it’s just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic New name, new me! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
Hullo, I think I’ve met you before!
It’s good to have you back. XD It’s been a while since we’ve chatted about books, theology in books, theology of books, theology of life….
Anyway, I’m doing fine! A little busy and struggling with that old villain Procrastination.Â
I totally win every fight.ÂThat’s why I’m sitting next to my B…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Who wants a Marvel AU? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
XD What character? XD
Well, I am taking a momentary break from my math work. XD
She came to the orphanage a few years ago, and was put in with the “enhanced” kids even though she doesn’t seem to have any special “enhancement” or training. (she has training among other things, but does all she can to hide her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Who wants a Marvel AU? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay! She’s writing it again! Even though I know next to nothing (perhaps less than nothing?) about Marvel, this has been so much fun to read. I love the characters!
And I definitely have not created an AU of this AU. That would be preposterous! And I most definitely would not have made up a specific character either. Even if she…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hello mates! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
*The door slams open and, with a swirl of my cloak, I step in*
Greetings and salutations! I am called Elishavet around here and am known as a wannabe author of realistic medieval fantasy and poetry with a smattering of nonfiction. (I’m one of those lovers of the classics… Though not particularly the classical.) I am barging in…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Your favorites of KP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok, so I’ll keep this to articles because I LOVE the short stories and poems, but that’s not really what you seem to be asking.
I went back and looked through the articles for the ones that have really resonated with me and my pen. Sometimes they were just hilarious, sometimes encouraging, and sometimes challenging. I love the o…[Read more]
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