Starshiness

Whooooooops this is what happens when I’m three days late to respond 🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️ Sorry to back up the conversation y’all 😂

@queen_of_alvastia (seriously ADORING the username rn) It’s great to meet you too!! Ahhh yes Raven, my pride and joy 😌. Yesss I’ve always loved allegories but I sometimes wonder what the nuggets have I gotten myself into……[Read more]

@sgl-forev Hey there! I’m Starshiness, and welcome to Kingdom Pen!!

… Yeah I won’t bog you down with too many more questions either, my fellow greeters here seem to have covered that area quite well XD I’ll just ask, what genre do you write?

@microphage6032 Oh coolio! Hey if it works, it works 😀 Sounds intriguing for sure 😉

@queen_of_alvastia Hello! I don’t believe we’ve met before; my name is Eliana (or, on here, Starshiness). I have a Pinterest account with a “Character Inspo” board if you’re interested in checking it out. So far it only features two of my characters: Elsie from a Revolutionary War era short story, and Raven from my main WIP an allegorical novel…[Read more]

Oh wow that’s such a cool idea! I hope you get the experience and advice you need 🙂

I write a good bit of flash fiction, short stories, I have one allegorical novel-in-progress that I’ve been working on for a while and when it is finished it will be my “masterpiece”….. now if I can just get around to finishing it…. 😂

Thank you!! Haha yesss there will be a lot of playful banter between Raven and Keston in upcoming chapters 😌

@loopylin Hello there! I’m Starshiness, it’s great to have you here!! Ooo fantasy, one of my favorite genres! Do you write mainly short stories or are you working on any novels, poetry, fanfic, flash fic, or any other genre?!

YASSS GREAT IDEA FOR A FORUM!!! Imma go scan through my main WIP, Raven’s Quest, and pick out all the best scenes now 😀

1.

“How did you do that?”

Keston swiftly sheathed his sword and retrieved the two blades, winking roguishly at Raven.

“They say the best weapon is the one not expected.” 

2.

Raven grinned impishly at her companion. “Comes i…

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AHHHHH GREEN EMBER FANFICS?!!!! @elishavet-pidyon GREAT IDEA!!!! Imma read all this right away I’M SO EXCITED, I hardly know anyone who has read Green Ember 😭😭😭. I read all four books and loved them, which is something considering that I usually can’t stand books where my FAVORITE CHARACTER DIES AT THE END (won’t say who that is for the sake of…[Read more]

@microphage6032 Hellooooo there!! Nice to meet ya, I’m Eliana 🙂 @freedomwriter76 is your sister?? Coolio!! That’s awesome that you write comics and fanfics; that’s one genre I never really tried my hand at… what kind of fanfics do you write??

@pen_for_christ205 ANOTHER ONE WHO LIKES CHUCK BLACKKKKK!!!!! Can we please start a fanclub for Kingdom and Knights of Arrethtrae?? It looks like there are enough of us to begin one… 😂 Do you have a favorite book or character from the Kingdom or Knights of Arrethtrae series?

Anyway, welcome to Kingdom Pen!! It’s great to have you here!

@sunny421 Oooh, if it includes a medievalish fantasy theme with kings and queens, princes, and princesses… it’s an automatic thumbs up from me!! And this sounds like a great storyline! Since you have two main characters, are you going to have like a chapter from Luke’s perspective, then the next chapter from Princess Dorothy’s, and so on until…[Read more]

(Oh, and Guilty is an a w e s o me song, great choice of background 😉)

@freedomwriter76 😊

XDXD

Haha see with me it’s just the opposite. I can write some pretty good action scenes but my emotional scenes… ehhh they need work 😂. I did!! Actually was just writing out a response to that haha. Girl, that scene is DEEP! And so meaningful! I love getting a peek at Adrian’s inner turmoil, his questioning to see if the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 I pity the person who would dare hate on Riker XD

Ahhhhhh girl you are melting my heart with these scenes they are so beautiful and full of EMOTION my goodness I absolutely love that last scene sm 😭

@ampeterson03 Haha thanks! And I think I will! 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon AHHH yes, I definitely agree with you there! I love the artistic tidbits found in the Bible, and how it has some of the best imagery and patterns for writing. I mean take the book of Psalms, how much more BEAUTIFUL poetry can you get than that?!

Sweet!

Oh I love that! The paragraph is very short and concise so the use of the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Hmm I do see what you mean there. Since I finished this piece, I kept getting the feeling that there was *something* not quite right; maybe this is it! Tysm for the feedback!!