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Alexa Autorski started the topic Fortitude, Ch. ~ 4 and 5 Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
*takes deep breath*
Okay, so I wanted to share two more chapters of Fortitude with y’all to see your critiques/feedback and overall general thoughts! I’m really nervous about posting this, and just note that it isn’t the final draft, but that’s what improvement is all about, I suppose 🙂
I’m going to have my very helpful friend @gracie-j post th…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Fantasy Landscape/Character Design!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
OOoh, this sounds really cool!!!! What is the program?
Type: character
Description: Uhh… soo this dude here in my mock cover makes me think a lot of my character, Colin, minus the mustache that is. 😉
Name: Colin James Carlson
Genre: well, Colin lives in Delbert, Florida (not a real place XD It’s complicated) but…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, yeah, that totally makes sense. I’m honestly the SAME way!!!!!!! Of course, girl!!!!!!! You’re sooo AWESOME, I don’t think I could not want to. XD
YESSS!!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!! I’m SOOOO EXCITED!!!! I just sent it to you!!! *endless exclamation marks* *jumps up and down*
YAAY!!! I’m SOOO HAPPY!!!! Haha, you’re TOTALLY right!!!!! YES!!!…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
YESSSSS!!!! I’m honestly just SOO happy at how happy you are!!!! WOOHOOO!!! *jumps up and down* (Aww, girl, I honestly wouldn’t have thought it as rude at all!!! I’ve been actually really wanting you to read some of my stuff but was too nervous to laugh!!!!!! WOOHOOO!!!! YES!!!! I will be bringing ’em!!!) Aww, of course, girl!!!!!…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
YESSS YOU CAN!!!!!!! *also jumps up and down* *gasp* REALLY??!!! Aww, girl, that means SO MUCH!!! (Hehehe…but you probably shouldn’t have told me that because there are waaaay too many stories I’d be willing to share if I knew anyone would want to read it. XD) YES, YES, YESSSS!!!!!!! I saw you had already left a few comments and I…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Aww, girl, that’s just made MY DAY!!!!! Wow, really? Man, if I knew that I would’ve been giving you this loooooooong before now. 😉 You are seriously allowed to read any of my stories that you like. Girl, that just means SOOO much to me!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU A THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAY!!!! I really hope you enjoy…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, and some tagges:
@mkfairygirl @scripter-of-kingdoms @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @nova21 @abigail-m @imwritehere1920 @ribbonash @kayleigh-idea @godlyfantasy12 @millennium @daisy-torres @e-k-seaver @anyone-who-likes-fantasy @anyone-who-is-reading-this @colin-carlson…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Thank you so much for the feedback!!! The comments you gave were immensely helpful, and thank you for taking the time to read through my, er, lengthy chapters 🙂 Yay, I’m glad Caira was interesting, and I’m even more glad you were hooked!!!! *wipes sweat off forehead* And I’m also glad you thought the pacing was good. Thank you!!!
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E. K. Seaver started the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey everyone, so Wings is a story I’m working on (and am probably going to end up having as another serial story on my blog), but I’m struggling with the first little bit. Is it engaging? What do you think of it? Where do you anticipate the story going? How do you feel about the characters?
Critique as brutally (*cough* Dark chocolate *cough*) a…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Aww, thank you for offering to read it! It’s my first novel (and first chapters) so I still have a long way to go, but I’d love any feedback you have! Here’s my first chapter 🙂 Thank you so much!!
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @e-k-seaver, @daisy-torres, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @writerlexi1216, @jenwriter17, @godlyfantasy12, @hallie-jean, @ribbonash, @wyn-rose
Hey everyone!! I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…
@jenwriter17 @kayleigh-idea @ribbonash @wyn-rose @daisy-torres @mkfairygirl @godlyfantasy12
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Kads replied to the topic Inspirational Images & Quotes ❤️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@ribbonash That is cool!! What’s your WIP about?
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ella started the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey people!!! I finished my first chapter of Lioness (YA, futuristic speculative fiction), and I’d LOVE it if y’all could read and critique it for me!!! It’s about 2000 words long. And please please please don’t hold back on critiquing–I’m trying to become a better writer so I absolutely need to know what has to change. (
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Katherine replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@ribbonash Ahhhh, I think this notification got lost in my email.😬 I am just now seeing this. I am soooo sorry.
My fingers are crossed that I will get extra lucky! XD Cool!!!!! My character has a name and it’s very well known (not in a good way). He has to keep his identity a secret b/c if anyone finds out it’s who he really is they will most…[Read more]
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Kads started the topic Inspirational Images & Quotes ❤️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey everybody!
This is basically the topic where when you see a cool image or quote, you put it here. I’d prefer primarily images here, but if you see a cool quote don’t be afraid to post it! 😀 The images can be anything, (just be sure to follow KP posting rules, of course) from fan art of something you like to a book cover you thought looked…[Read more]
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Kads posted a new activity comment 3 years, 9 months ago
@ribbonash Tell your friend that they did a GREAT JOB!!! <3 It's REALLY good. (Hehe, yes it is why I love it.)
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Kads posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
@ribbonash Did you draw your profile picture? I love it!! It looks so good!!! (Btw, I’m a fairy and elven type lover lol) If you drew that, AMAZING JOB!!!!
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I didn’t, a friend did it for me (I requested it for inspiration for one of my stories because I can’t draw that well). Thanks!! I know. (Oh, that’s awesome! ^_^ Is this why you love the picture?)
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@ribbonash Tell your friend that they did a GREAT JOB!!! <3 It's REALLY good. (Hehe, yes it is why I love it.)
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I will! ^_^
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Kads replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@ribbonash That’s pretty much how I feel…
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Memes/Inspiration/Community (Writer Edition) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
LOL!!!! That last one has been my all time favorite meme since like FOREVER! *searching for Smoke to save him* XD
Hahaha, IKR!!!! 🤣 SAME!!!
LOL!!!! *also puts on smolder* Hi!!!!!! I also read!!!! XD
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I will! ^_^