Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique

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March 10, 2021 at 8:41 pm #95252
Issabelle Perry
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@millennium

Aww, THANKS!!!!!! 🙂 Yeah, it’s hard to finish a book, but you’re doing an INCREDIBLE job with your story!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33

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March 10, 2021 at 8:59 pm #95253
RainyEmily
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@issawriter7

Thank you so much for the encouragement!

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even in a cage,
even dressed in silk.
March 10, 2021 at 9:01 pm #95254
Issabelle Perry
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You’re welcome!!! Anytime!

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March 10, 2021 at 11:46 pm #95260
Abigail.M.
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@issawriter7

I’d LOVE to read this!!! (slow reader warning XD ), this is so awesome, I cannot wait!! 😀
March 11, 2021 at 12:00 am #95262
Daisy Torres
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@issawriter7 Ohhh this sounds coolll!!! I love retellings. I’ll gladly read!!

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March 11, 2021 at 3:32 am #95265
Ribbonash
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*fails* I am so beyond excited to read this!!!!!!!!!! I really wanted to read this since the first time I’ve heard about it and now I get the chance to read some of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m so excited right now. It is such a treat!!!!!! I can’t wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!! I also will take a while to get around to read it, but I will read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
March 11, 2021 at 8:31 am #95267
Issabelle Perry
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@abigail-m

YAAAY!!!!!! I’m SO, SO, SOOO happy to hear!!!! *jumps up and down* (LOL!! That’s okay. I’m a veryyy slow reader myself. 😉 ) YES!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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March 11, 2021 at 8:32 am #95268
Issabelle Perry
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@daisy-torres

YES!!! THANK YOU!!!!! Oooh, really? Same here!! *high fives* Yaay!! That means SO much to me!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you enjoy it!! <3

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March 11, 2021 at 8:39 am #95269
Issabelle Perry
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@ribbonash

Aww, girl, that’s just made MY DAY!!!!! Wow, really? Man, if I knew that I would’ve been giving you this loooooooong before now. 😉 You are seriously allowed to read any of my stories that you like. Girl, that just means SOOO much to me!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU A THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAY!!!! I really hope you enjoy it!!! That’s TOTALLY okay, girl!!!!!!! No worries whatsoever!!! <33

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March 11, 2021 at 1:20 pm #95284
Gracie J.
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@issawriter7 Girl, I am so sorry I haven’t gotten to this sooner! I am SO stoked to read this, so I’ll get on it straightway! Thank you SO MUCH for sharing!!!!!!!!

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March 11, 2021 at 2:29 pm #95294
Gracie J.
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@issawriter7 AH! That was fantastic!!! I can’t wait to read more! And Colin was perfect!!!

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March 11, 2021 at 4:32 pm #95304
Issabelle Perry
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Oh, that’s TOTALLY okay!!!!!!!!!! I’m SO happy for how excited you were to read some of my story. Oh, you’re welcome. 🙂 And THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for taking the time to read it!!!!!!!!! Aww, you really enjoyed it? That just means SOOO MUCH!!!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!!! YAAY!!! I might not share anymore on KP, though. I was waaaaay too nervous about that. XD It’s hard for me to get myself to ask people to read my work. ~~which could explain why it’s hard for me to get beta readers~~ Okay, this comment is turning too long. Sorry ’bout my rambling. XD Aww, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Colin’s like mah boy. 😉 <333

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March 11, 2021 at 8:15 pm #95316
Gracie J.
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@issawriter7 Of course!! 🙂 And don’t be nervous, girl! Share your gift!!

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March 11, 2021 at 10:45 pm #95335
imwritehere1920
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Hey Issabelle! Long time no see! Sorry I haven’t been around much (been trying to take a break from my computer for the past week or so.) Anyway, that’s great that you’re seeking feedback for your story! Like Grace just said, don’t be nervous! Just take it one step at a time. 🙂

So, I’m not sure I’ll be able to critique your work (actually, I just realized I’m behind on your Robyn Hood story *whaaaa-?* Sorry about that *embarrassed grin*) But, if it’s okay, I’ll aim to read it on Friday/Saturday when I have more time.

By the way, how has your week been?

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March 12, 2021 at 12:17 pm #95365
Linyang Zhang
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@issawriter7 I left some comments! Great job!

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