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@keilah-h

Thanks! i have the Serpent Children, then the Peluvaro, who morph into owls, and the Bardans, who morph into griffons. Peluvaro and Bardan blood mixed makes an odd combination; their descendants are Pelubalar, literally owl-griffon and have wings, slight scaling on the face, severe scaling on the hands, and claws on their hands. The…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks! 🙂 yeah, mine are born with both abilities, but in certain events they can lose their ability to chose. For example, they can give up their gift (aka powers) to save someone, or, in extreme circumstances, can die to save someone. As you might assume, this happens very seldom.

Ahhh makes sense, especially if you do more sci fi…[Read more]

@zatara

Welcome and double high five, because I’m a pineapple on pizza person too!

I also like LoTR way better than Narnia, but Voyage of the Dawn Treader I enjoy now and again (mainly because Eustace is just a really great character, and the Duffepuds are totally hopeless and funny. Especially when they’re coming up for a name for…[Read more]

@keilah-h coolio!! I like the variety of your people!!

haha poor Flame. alas; every character must have a weakness!

yeah, Evyrett was stuck in an iron castle for the first 18 years his life with only his friend/servant/cook named Coldon, a loyal boy, but he is rather odd and Evyrett is his master, so it’s not a normal friendship. Especially…[Read more]

Hey Tristan! Welcome to KP!

I think your mission is great!! I too aim to glorify God through my writings and produce wholesome stories that leave the reader wanting to aspire to be more, to do more, and live for more!

I am a big fan of Tolkien and CS Lewis too! And also Dickens. I agree…The Magicians Nephew is pretty Awesome!

Have you read…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yes I do but in this particular scene it’s a metaphor, but I do have lots of dragons and some dragon people in my stories.

heres one; Evyrett Knayaz

prince of the serpent people. He’s a liiittle nervous around anything bigger than him it bring around any other living beings in general

Heres the story scene that goes with it;
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Hi Annika!

Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! My name is Mary; I joined 10 days ago so I am fairly new here!

I’d love to hear about your work in progress!

I like the Hobbit too! Who is your fav character in the book?

I love reading/writing dystopian and historical fiction, but also realistic fiction.

Are you a mystery movie person?

@keilah-h ooo here is another dramatic scene I just remembered

Dorok smiled stiffly at the prince as Ayerna introduced him, but he wasn’t happy. He felt a nagging in his mind and a pit of apprehension in his gut; he didn’t like this man, and he wasn’t sure if it was because the spoiled snob seemed to be paying special attention to Ayerna, or if th…

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@AKbaer

Well hello hello! Good to meet you! I like writing fantasy in medieval-ish setting too! *high fives

a very important question: Do you like anchovies on pizza? if you’ve never tried that, do you like olives on pizza? or do you even like pizza? hehe

I shall introduce myself: I’m a Christian, and love taking care of and interacting with…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

well… I don’t think I have fallen out of love of writing… granted, I’ve only been seriously dedicating time to writing the last two years and before that, I hated anything that required a keyboard or a pencil, but now my keyboard has grooves worn in the keys from me using them so much! XD

I get bored with my stories sometimes,…[Read more]

Ooo!! This is a cool idea! Let me see…

Ok, I got mine! But I skipped her internal dialogue, and chose the lines she says out loud. Also, she lives in 1870 London. In TID, Emilia is shy but resilient. independent (only because she has no choice) curious, sensitive, and kind. And a little defensive at times. She is great at problem-solving…[Read more]

@keilah-h ahhh i see, well the scenes are both cool! keep up the good work! 😉

@godlyfantasy12 ooo whoa lots of suspense!! I’m curious. and hey, mine was long too, more suspense i suppose! XD

@devastate-lasting that scene made me so sad…

@keliah-h AHHH does this character die??? after all, wounds like that… oof

@issawriter7 @gracie-j @abigail-m @keilah-h @anyone-reading

Well, I think this one ought to be… interesting XD

Then he blinked in shock as Violet’s fist shot out like a viper and hit the man square in the throat; he let out a cry of pain, and released his grip on her neck. She fought and bit and kicked, but they still wouldn’t let her go; the…

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@keilah-h

oooo cool! I’ll share one if that’s okay! It’s my favorite dramatic scene still, even though I’ve written others… and I admit it makes me shiver, likely because I see everything I read in pictures, but it’s still… well decide for yourself. XD (Death Rams are my fantasy version of Raptors with extra-good senses and really nasty…[Read more]

@faith-q

well, those days are good too… and then filling in the backstory. I love the daydreaming days as much as planning tbh.

probably because my story sorta requires mysterious countries and unknown peoples, because the biggest country (empire, really) has driven out all other people, so the trade routes are very small and selective and not…[Read more]

@faith-q

Sorry, I didn’t copy my reply so I forgot some of it, but this is more or less what I was saying:

I only do maps on paper, and I enjoy it, even if they’re cringy and look like a 7 yr old drew them.

I look at maps from stories I like, or even real life, and try to see how the position of the country affects the others. Questions I ask…[Read more]