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@keilah-h ah ok! I figured. Yeah, it’s so fun to make up peoples and species… imagination is the limit for the most part. And that would be cool to do!

this may or may not interest you…. but the Serpent People in my story are (very loosely) inspired by the description of giants given by the Native American tribes. it’s a scary thing to look…[Read more]

@lydia-s oooo gooesbumps!! Dragon!! that word…it just ‘instills terror in the hearts of men’ (to quote Smaug XD)

@akbaer sorry the forum ate my post again lol

I like peppermint too! we had a wild kind all over the place where I used to live, so I’d pick it and use it for tea.

Well, good to meet ya! see you around! 🙂

@joy-caroline

oy vey… I don’t plan character lies… umm they sorta develop with the character, but the first one in my mind would be Brianna Hakonik;

she was kidnapped as a child and raised in a very dark place and trained as an assassin and ring fighter and with it came a lot of trauma and abuse. As you can guess she’s bitter and agg…[Read more]

@zatara

Your very welcome!!😊 Enjoy!

@keilah-h

what scenes? I’m confused too now, if you meant which of yours, i liked both scenes!!

no it’s not weird to detail all the species! It’s good to know your characters inside and out so to speak 🙂 they all sound like you put a lot of thought into them!

And as for MCs all being boys I admit it’s my natural tendency to do that too so n…[Read more]

@gracie-j Correction: *BFL* lol

@joy-caroline

Thank you!!

I’m struggling with my first chapter and how it should begin! I’ve changed it a thousand times!😒 So I might be asking for some help/critiques coming up. I just feel like I’m info-dumping and telling too much in the beginning…I would appreciate any contributions when I put it out;)

@gracie-j

I really like your BLF!!…[Read more]

Great topic!!

I just realized that most of my stories have a BFL and I didn’t even try to put it in there!

I guess I’ll do my MC, Emilia Taylor, from ‘The Inventor’s Daughter.’

Emilia’s BFL is that she believes that her past defines her. She was told that her parents were responsible for the fire they were killed in, which burnt down 5 apart…[Read more]

@AKbaer

ahh I see! Well I won’t hold that against you! What about tea?  I like regular black tea with honey and milk!

Yeah new things are sometimes like Bilbo’s description of adventures; “nasty disturbing uncomfortable things! Make you late for dinner!” But they can also lead to incredible opportunities!

Haha sounds like my parents too!

An…[Read more]

@zatara

Yeah! I’m a big fan of Alfred Hitchcock! I’ve seen most his movies and episodes! The Twilight Zones are really cool…and creepy at times!

When I said ‘specialize’ I meant in movies! lol!  I actually haven’t read a ton of mystery books,(just Nancy Drew) but it would be fun to write them! Haha! Movies I would recommend if you like myst…[Read more]

@keilah-h

i read the scene you posted and it’s very cool! I like it!

@abigail-m

Sure! I’d be glad to read it!

@godlyfantasy12 I’d say go for it!!! 🙂

@zatara

THANKS!

Yes! Movie watching is a hobby!;) I specialize in mystery and suspense! Lol! I do a lot of watercoloring and sketching. And anything DIY! I also love floristry and propagating plants.

@joy-caroline

Lol!! Yeah, that would be fun! once I get some practice with that style I’ll let you know and I can do it! 😉

@nanisnook @ariel-f @daisy-torres

Hi!! I just wanted to say thank you all again for taking some of your time to read my friend’s story and leave a comment!!!! 😀 I wanted to let you know that she made it on the finalists’ list for Havok’s anthology!!! https://gohavok.com/2021/08/01/prismatic-anthology-finalists-aka-long-list/#comment-11547 I know…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Ur..umm..no..I didn’t draw it!!😂  But I like that style and want to draw stuff like it! Hehe!
I got that off of Pinterest. I think it’s a drawing of Belle, (Emma Watson) from the new Beauty and the Beast, which I haven’t seen. I just used it cuz I thought it would be ‘different’ and looked somewhat like me.😁

@zatara

Whoa!! Your “Scary Narnia” story sounds really intriguing!! And Scary! And Original!

One of my many WIP’s is called The First Tomorrow. 

It’s about a dystopian city where there is no night, no dreams, no homes, no nuclear families, no crime, no love. It’s supposed to be an ideal city/society and its people were all Chosen from our worl…[Read more]

@keilah-h

and one morphing: (they’re called Death Hawks for here explained reasons)

Atheico looked shocked, “How did you find him? And how are you not dead? His father swore he’d kill anyone who came to his castle after I—”

“I didn’t find—” Mythia twitched and tried to stay still, “ I didn’t find him. He’s my friend and Lysanna sent me to hi…

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