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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
Eeek! I’m so excited! After ages, and my website being put up on the 31st of January, it’s finally fully functional (except for the privacy policy, I’m still working on that cause I’m bad at formal language😅) .
I’m so thrilled to share this with you guys!
My website URL is Hadassah.nz !
I hope you’ll enjoy the content on it! If any of you want…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Who has impacted your writing the most? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
That’s really cool!
Of course, putting you into the world to pretty cool, but letting you naturally fall into stories in your own way instead of forcing you is also really cool.
Was there a particular audiobook that you found that made you interested in listening to more?
All of your inspirations from friends to…[Read more]
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TheLobsterLover posted an update 4 years, 7 months ago
@power Hi! I actually finished your request a few days ago but I can’t send it for the life of me! Everytime I click submit my comment simply doesn’t show up. This might be a problem…
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Anatra replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 7 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Brilliant first chapter(and second, I suppose). Riveting. Fast-paced, easily retainable, and entertaining(but plz don’t let it get to your head).
Sheesh, nine-year-olds those days, very desensitized.
I wanna agree with @power on the running sentences, though I think the chapters flowed pretty well together. Not…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 7 months ago
Hi everyone!
I’m considering joining the Author Conservatory, and I was interested to know if any of you are in it? If so, what are you thoughts on the program? Things I should know? Pros and Cons? Is there anything you wished you’d known before you joined, but didn’t?
For me, one of the things I’m struggling with is that I have already written…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic The Great Trip Tragedy in the forum Poetry 4 years, 7 months ago
I love this poem!
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien @gretald @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anatra23 @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @elfwing @elanor @e-k-seaver @trahia-the-minstrel @william-starkey @abigail-m @thelobsterlover @gracie-j @r-m-archer @power @kathleenramm @morgan @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-who-wants-to-bash-my-writing…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Help. I Just Don't Get the Appeal of the Wingfeather Saga in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for helping me understand a bit better!
Also, sorry if I sounded a bit “un-gracious” there, but I guess what I meant wasn’t anything against the author, but the story. (I’m also a terrible writer, and it would indeed be bad news for me if the notion of improvement didn’t exist). So to rephrase: If the characters, world, an…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Just imagine. . . in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
Yep! It’s very exciting! And that sounds awesome – have you written any series before?
Aw, thank you. The different reasons. . . hm. Evren has so much of me in her – the dreams, the love of stories, the things she’s drawn to. . . it’s been really interesting to explore that part of my personality through her. And L (who refuses…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Any Questions About Weapons or Battle in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I definitely wasn’t bored! I love hearing about that kind of thing. If it helps, my fight scene is in a wedding hall with lots of pillars and rather in the roof. It’s single combat. The girl is agile, fit, and well-trained in knife fighting; and the boy is also fit, but can’t move as fast because he’s not as good at acrobatics and athleti…[Read more]
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Any Questions About Weapons or Battle in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Huh, I didn’t know that. Well now I’m sad about Star Wars. Thanks for the answer though.
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Any Questions About Weapons or Battle in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Since you’re offering …😁😉
How could a teenage girl with an abundance of knives beat a teenage boy with a sword and shield? This is important for a climax of mine, but I want it to be realistic.
Also, do you watch Shadiversity? The comment about the lightsabers made me wonder …
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Any Questions About Weapons or Battle in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
And yeah, you’re definitely keeping your priorities straight. Books are most important.
(p.s. I don’t scare my friends by threatening them with weapons or anything. I just find them so cool that it freaks my friends out a little)
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Any Questions About Weapons or Battle in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Totally not just a guy thing. I’m a girl, and I love weapons, like to the point that it scares my friends, and my boyfriend gave me a knife that he made as a gift. I have questions about this all the time, so I will definitely be back here.
First question. Why is a lightsaber a terrible weapon?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@power Ooh! Sounds cool!
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Jaybird replied to the topic 4 Characters In the Land Called Miska in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
This is great! I really love these characters, by the by.
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Morgan replied to the topic Calling everyone but particularly twins, triplets, and brothers (or sisters)! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Thanks for the info! Rest assured, I have no intention of making one of the twins evil. I didn’t realize that that was a common question twins are asked.
You sound a lot like my brother, except I didn’t do many strenuous physical things with him because he was so much older. He used to swordfight with my oldest sister all the…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Calling everyone but particularly twins, triplets, and brothers (or sisters)! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
That’s amazing. You sound like both my older brothers😂 My closest brother always used to play sword fights with me, and I even got him to help me mock out a fight scene for my book a few weeks ago …
I’ve never been a twin or a brother, but I’ve had two older brothers, an older sister, and a younger sister. However, my brother…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My Series Keeps Growing! in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 8 months ago
@jodi-maile @kathleenramm @keilah-h @issawriter7 @writerlexi1218 @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @power @annabelle @elfwing @lydia-s @joycaroline @daisytorres @elanor @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @seeker-of-the-truth @e-k-seaver @anyone-I-missed
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Heaven Franklin replied to the topic Introduction in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
@power Your comment made me laugh! I didn’t stop reading it. 😂 It’s so nice to “meet” you!
It’s neat that you are a Bible quizzer! What a great way to spend some of your time when you’re not writing. xD
Ooo, a Bible question. I believe the answer is wealth, possessions and honor.
Haha! I’m actually not wearing any shoes at the moment. Just…[Read more]
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@thelobsterlover No problem. You can sent it to me through my writing email account if you want to.
powerofthemongoose@gmail.com