Sorry for the tags if you’re not interested, guys.

Thanks! That is really helpful.

I guess in that case, I think my two main characters are actually antagonists to each other, maybe. They have opposite character arcs/ fatal flaws and kinda end up meeting in the middle at the end.

My other WIPs also need villains so I’ll probably be referencing this again.

 It is also my opinion that at least with my friends who are dudes we usually do more play teasing or complaining than when I am hanging out with my friends who are girls.

I’ve noticed that sort of thing. My brother and his friends trash talk each other and beat each other up a lot, whereas my friends and I talk about…[Read more]

Messed up your tag ^^

k, here’s a new part.

@calyhuge @otherworldlyhistorian @thearcaneaxiom @linus-smallprint

Apologies for tagging y’all. Hope you don’t mind. I’ve started employing the advice y’all gave me, and I wanted to see what you fella’s think before I go any farther with it. Does Aaron still seem like a guy. I mean, would…[Read more]

Oh wow, this is so helpful! Thanks so much!

(I’m curious what scene y’all read. The full battle scene, or the aftermath one? Or both?)

I will tell you it feels like it’s a real guy, and it feels like real war, and I think what you had him do so far is what a guy would do

That’s a relief! Just getting you to s…[Read more]

Do not br faint of heart, my friends! 🤣 (I am sorry about crunchyroll…) Hei is free on Tubi, you can get there through Google without any hurdles, at least on my device.

I so agree with everything you said there.

 I will also say that from my personal experience I seem to make friends less quickly than at least my sister but it also seems that my qualification and value for friendship is much deeper.

It could be a personality type difference too. I’m just like that too. I haven’t had a in…[Read more]

Awesome! This is perfect.

Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]

@calyhuge @thearcaneaxiom @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

Ellette would love some feedback on the scene above, It is about a male character in grief, and it’s mostly troubleshooting at this point.

OCD is my main drive right now for suresies XD Hope you find this a useful point of help for book 2! If you ever want opinions on story structure or anything outline, that’s exactly why I made this.

@linus-smallprint

Throw up all the ideas on a wall, and get them out of your head so that you can think a little more.

Exactly, it…[Read more]

@theducktator @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @trailblazer @loopylin @rae @highscribeofaetherium @otherworldlyhistorian @stephie @theloonyone @

And of course anyone else. 🙃

Our co-op is Classical Conversations. The seventh through twelfth grades, (Challenge A, B, 1, 2, 3, 4), do blue book, which is our end of semester assessment. The teachers and parents say it is a “Celebration of what you’ve learned”, but we all think it’s a test. Otherworldly Historian, I’m only in ninth grade, lol.

Sometimes I’m reading it tho and I’m like “This is dumb cuz ive done change this like fifty million times over XD”

Ehh…it could be going better tbh XD Wish I could say i’ve written more…

My goal is to finish reading all my old drafts and such before the end of this months but…it’s not going great… sigh… I just gotta make myself do it but I’m srsly struggling with self discipline in different areas of my life rn…[Read more]

Yea, Junior year has been pretty crazy this year. I’m not so sure six AP’s was as good an idea as I had originally thought 😬 (it is a lot of homework but I will probably be fine, just takes away time from other things). Currently my main novel has been on pause (I still do world building and keep notes of ideas but am not…

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Hey Historian and Folith! Long time no see!

@calyhuge @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian @godlyfantasy12 (yes I am still consistently tagging u) @keilah-h @jonas @rae

So I’m finally sharing my own writing, at least some of it, I doubt I will share much beyond a few chapters, but we’ll see. A lot of you know me to be a…[Read more]

Especially since you might start liking them, but then they do something and you see they’re going somewhere they shouldn’t, and you can only watch horrified as they keep going down that path, and hope for their…[Read more]

Yea. Me and a couple of friends are going to see it.

It’s kind of funny because when I heard about the barbie movie it was from one of my friends at quizbowl and he was like it looks really cool and I was like how is a Barbie movie going to be cool and so we all watched the trailer and now I am kind of excited to see it. I…

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Well, not excited for it. We never watched any and dont watch to many movies, just play video games. I just looove Barbie, (yeah yeah I know im basically 15 but I still just💗💗💗 Barbie) Its not like I still have them though… maybe im saving them for my future kids… maybe I take them out occasionally. Ummm.. cant grow up…[Read more]

I’m one of the few girls in the world who never (and I mean never) was into that…..So I found it to be kinda pointless, but I would highly suggest that anyone who wants to watch it, definitely do that and tell me if I was mistaken, because I might be.

@whalekeeper My dad said something…[Read more]

I just read through your conversation(s) about beards and guys and it just made my day 🤣 Like, I’m really tired because I was at church camp this weekend, but reading through that was just so funny. 😂😂

Haha, glad we could make your day! 😂

@whalekeeper

DUDES ACROSS THE SPIDERVERSE IS INSANE AND MY MIND IS BLOWN –

AND IM DEAD NOW…

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The art was *chef’s kiss* At one point I had to stop concentrating on it because my eyes were so overwhelmed. And the symbolism. Like, there’s this one part where this character (who lives in this streaky watercolor world) was completely losing it. It was their dark moment, and the…[Read more]

I have a brand new WIP!!

So this…[Read more]

thank you all so much for your help!! 😭 y’all have some great advice!! I’m gonna try to see what I’m gonna need to do but this advice is awesome, thank you all so much.

If it helps I can tell you what @otherworldlyHistorian does. (right now I am working on scripts for an informational podcast series so it doesn’t really have a plot)

for otherworldlyHistorian’s book Kharvia b1 (it doesn’t have an actual title yet) he is making a chapter-by-chapter plot summary and using a spreadsheet to keep…[Read more]

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I’m currently writing three stories two are fanfiction and the other one is my original novel which is a sci-fi dystopian Christian book. I also love softball exercising and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl.

anyways here are som…[Read more]

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I’m currently writing three stories two are fanfiction and the other one is my original novel which is a sci-fi dystopian Christian book. I also love softball exercising and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl.

anyways here are…[Read more]

What makes you say that? Would it not be nice to have something else do a difficult task for you instead of having to do it yourself? Or even some tasks that may even be impossible for you to do? (I don’t think practicality is the problem, but rather the opposite.)

Yeah, I’m a Senior, adult life is looking at me with hungry eyes.

That’s awesome! It’s always nice when its something you’ve just covered, especially when it comes to something like history where you have to actually know things instead of being able to math yourself out of it.

My senior project was actually more of a…[Read more]

Hi!! Oh no problem, you’re good!! 😁

That’s awesome!! I used to write with my sister, but she’s more into reading these days 😕

Oh definitely soft!! XD I am like the biggest pantser right now, so I barely worldbuild . . . Unfortunately . . . However with how my stuff has been going lately, I need a new method 🤣🤣 So yeah, I hope to…[Read more]

(Solid answers! Though ChatGPT forgot the rules of the question Forum!😅)

(Because we mentioned it…)

How close are we to general AI, and what does that mean for our future?

What about you? You did the AP history right?

Thanks, it did! I didn’t do any APs, I’ve been homeschooling with my own personalized classes, and the drawback of that is they don’t count as AP courses. I took the AP physics exam two years back, but that’s about it. If I was still in public school, I would have taken the AP calc, but I bet I’ll be fine to get into…[Read more]

So . . . I don’t really know much about your story . . . but I can give you my thoughts about character arcs!

I’m a complete beginner at writing this kind of thing, but I do read a lot. So maybe that counts for something? xD

Dogchild and Marcel both do sound very similar, but the way that they react is different. So in my opinion,…[Read more]

Nice to meet you! Welcome to KP!

I’m Solfyre! I started writing when I was… nine? I’m now fourteen, and while I’m still working on developing some characters from back then, it may have made editing a little more difficult XD.

Your books looks awesome! (Especially With Eyes of Blue. I may or may not have looked it up and…[Read more]

HEYO  world builders I have a question! Sorry to anyone I excluded XD wasn’t entirely sure who to ask??

Anyway I have another question (expect quite a from meh lol

So I have heard differing things on this online, but regarding Ha…[Read more]

AHH THANK YALL SO MUCH!!!

Whaley- I love the brain dumping and while I’ve done that I haven’t gone like that off the charts like just craziness if that makes sense…? I’ve just still kept myself boxed up and that’s some of the problem I think.

ALSO I WANNA READ UR STORY ABOJT SEBASTIAN SO BAD…IT…[Read more]

AWWW 😭 THANKS YALL!!!!

Freedom thank u so much that means a lot!!

and Min I’m so glad u like Pax’s story!!!

Thank u all for the words of encouragement and advice!!!

I actually talked with my mom about it too, and she is so helpful and after we talked…I finis…[Read more]