Otherworldly Historian

Looks like a cool story but I do have a few questions…

1. what are the ages of your MCs
2. what are the other bunkers besides east and west like
3. what are some daily problems experienced by your characters
4. what are the cultures of the two bunkers like
5. what happened to the Dad it seemed like he was exiled so where is he now

It might be i…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

(sorry I forgot to tag you in the previous post)

Thanks for the suggestion I will have to check it out!

If you need something else to read I would Highly recommend checking out the Stormlight Archive by Brandon Sanderson. The first one has some problems mostly do to spending a bit to much time on world-building but it’s still good. The other books afterward fix most of these and are amazing.

@whalekeeper

I don’t really like the Keeper of the lost cities series. I read it 1-2 years ago and thought the first few were great (this could be because I hadn’t really read anything or fun in the last 3 months due to overfilling my schedule with schoolwork and after-school activities) after around book 5 they started fitting into a formula and…[Read more]

Because the seven are heavily intertwined I plot out 7 at a time I am currently 50% through plotting the first seven. My plotting of things is really detailed.

@microphage6032

I write a Grimdark Fantasy however it does have some sci-fi elements such as a big tech corporation and battery powered reactors that push back against a dark force along with electric guns and blimps however the people create energy by extracting it from magi’s souls so I classify it as a fantasy also they are not really that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Totally understand my series started out as a 4 book series and then became a 28 book series because I realized that I would need to be telling 7 different stories for the whole thing to work properly.

That sounds like another seris I know of *ahem* wheel of time *ahem

If you’re plateauing then just keep rolling with it you’ll most likely iron out repetitions in editing most likely. I think that in most cases authors just find something that works and therefore fall into the trap? of unconsciously (or maybe consciously) creating and following a formula for creating works. An example of this can be seen in…[Read more]

A couple thoughts about your wip…

It seems very intriguing and I would love to read it (my favorite genres are High Fantasy/Scifi Dark Fantasy/scifi and Grimdark Fantasy/Scifi)

Since I’m assuming that you like history I would recommend looking at the totalitarian regimes of Mussolini Stalin and Hitler because they are the closest thing to a…[Read more]

Sorry it took so long to get back to this I was planning on just doing my math homework and then coming back but well lets just say homework didn’t go as planned and then I had to do school so…

to answer “a couple of random questions”

1.  So my current favorite character to write is named Tieren. It might just be because he is currently who I…[Read more]

The explanation of my wip which will lead to an explanation of Folith…

As mentioned before the story started out small probably a trilogy of a hexology to tell all of it. But as it grew it became clear that would not be the case. we sifted through a couple of ideas on how to tell the series and landed on this kind of weird model…

the series…[Read more]

Sorry I was away from my computer so long…

Its so cool to meet another Identical twin 🙂

I use a compound bow and only do target shooting.

To answer the aforementioned questions:

@freedomwriter76

1. I will make a second reply to explain the answer to this…

2. Tea! I don’t drink coffee at all but I do probably drink 1-2 cups of tea a…[Read more]

I’m new, like got my account today new, so here goes nothing…

Allow me to introduce you to Rigate and Gilgan Cerff but before I can do that I must explain some background…

They are both from Carpenta a country in the fictional land Khavaria. In Carpenta last names function as titles not last names as we think of them. The last name Cerff…[Read more]