OrangeArmadillo

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeess, this season is so bad 🙄 I hope y’all get better too! (And I won’t rush it lol)

@everyone

S’up.

I will not have the next part out soon, because I have caught two terrible-horrible-no-good-very-bad viruses back to back 😖

Am on the mend, but I was on fire for three days and it felt like I was growing laser eyes the hard way.

Will probably update next week instead, as I now need to catch up on school and hurriedly prepare f…[Read more]

@keilah-h

but did anyone fall to Mundy’s venomous teeth or tail barb?

I can’t tell you!! 🤣 You gonna make me spoil everything!

not trying to be greedy or demanding (sorry if I sound that way) but do u have the next chapter ready yet? I (and probably everyone else) really want to see what happens next.

I really appreciate the enthusiasm ☺️ U are…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, ofc, to everything you said 😂

I don’t personally relate to Riker’s abuse, or Leon’s anger against God, but I do understand them.

I second Koshka’s point! That’s how I would summarize my opinion.

@freed_and_redeemed

I honestly don’t think I can answer that, lol.

For me, the two have very similarly structured POVs and voices – which is totally a stylistic thing since they are supposed to parallel each other. But that makes it harder for me to choose XD

The main difference is their internal struggles. I also can’t say I enjoy one con…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I like Elishavet’s tea idea 😂

You know you’re a writer when you scroll through a huge list of baby names, and not one name is new to you

@loopylin
Oh no, Liko! Poor dude… now I feel bad. We must return the keys right after and tell him how cool he is.

You know you’re a writer when your sibling physically blocks your mouth from commenting on a new movie

You know you’re a writer when it takes you 1.2 seconds to create a lengthy theory in your head as to why the new Avatar: Last Airbender show is shooting itself in foot and somehow pulling a character’s turmoil inside out, per the constant refer…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh wow, you’re using the Save the Cat method. I’ve never used that outline XD

I can also volunteer with @koshka as a rambler if you need one.

Oh oh oh, maybe you need more setting-type things to spur on some scenes. I don’t know much about A’Grend, but it would be great if the setting, and the objects or people who natural…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

No comment 😂

@godlyfantasy12

I’m so glad!! I hope it turns out well!!

@everyone

I gotta say, it is an absolute drama of an outline and some of the parts are super crazy 😝 Some deaths make no sense at all, while others make a little too much sense.

@godlyfantasy12

Eeeyyy you distracted me in class, and I never get distracted by a phone in class 😂 Now I can say I’ve had a universal teenager experience.

Hugo

Bullies – any kind of bully – sent a shiver down Hugo’s spine, spiking the hair along his neck like a dog.

But he, like this boy, wasn’t aggressive. He would rather smooth himse…[Read more]

@rae

What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?

Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story, whether big or small.

Alpha’s purpose is shown through his theme, his drive in life, his passion, or his response to something that changed his perspective forever. What is Alpha’s pur…[Read more]

Y’all may theorize all you want… hehe

@esther-c

Sure!! 😊 Scenes and motives are great!

@lightoverdarkness6

You’re good! Dylan’s family situation reminds me of Rapunzel, not going to lie. Sounds like an interesting dynamic to play with.

I can’t memorize this Shakespeare section for school 😓 Creative break to wind down…

@godlyfantasy12 @rae @freed_and_redeemed

You’re good, Godly!! You can totally take a break whenever you want to 😊

Hugo

“Nice to meet you, bud. But you should get something for that eye…”

The crowd, overflowing from the next free period, was no place for a…[Read more]

@loopylin

I have not forgotten about Ellie&Seb. I am just going to wait a little longer for @godlyfantasy12 in hopes that a couple subplots are not buried :]

@rae

Do you want help pinning down his traits? I’ve just noticed you mention how hard it is to write Alpha quite often.

Oh phew, thank you for the positive feedback XD I was so worried someone was going to be devastated.

Oh, and I also like Jonas’ point about one-note motivations. It’s probably one of the hardest things to hide from the reader’s notice. I personally believe it is okay, even great, for a character to have one point to them. One deep-set motive. But if you never show that motive, and instead make up a few secondary motives that demonstrate how the…[Read more]