MineralizedWritings

@mineralizedwritings Yep! My brother has the awesomest villain groups!

@mineralizedwritings

That drawing is adorable ❤😭❤

@mineralizedwritings You made up stories with stuffed animals? When I was eight I’d do the same…..

Now I do it with Legos. My brother and I have a whole timeline for our Lego universe.

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Okay, y’all! After washing a huge amount of dishes and being chased by a huge bulldog on my fourwheeler while taking some warm gloves to my dad and little brother (XD) I can finally RP!!

Matthew

Paxton glanced over at Luna, who Lyla was talking to, as if for permission to speak. She nodded.

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@mineralizedwritings

Um…yeah, CLIFFHANGER!

The absolute best cliffhanger that makes me want to yell, “WHO IS IT?”

I have a guess. But I won’t say. 😉

So, overall, really great writing!!!

I just had one question, which I meant to ask after I read this part on the second to last section you posted:

“Bobby.” A familiar voice comes from the fig…

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@booksandbeakers

I’m going to tag some other KeePers… 😀

@arien @orielle21 @starofthenorth @freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @madelyn @theloonyone @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I’m glad u kept Riker in!!!

also I’ll be RPing later been having Christmas stuff but I’ll Probably RP tonight while lying in bed!

@lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

ALSO freedom, Ara is all by herself if u want her to meet one of ur charries!!

even one of the bad ones…up to u!!

@mineralizedwritings

I post chapters of my WIP  (“Afterthoughts”, working title) here sometimes, if you are interested. I’d recommend starting at the beginning of the forum if you feel like reading. No pressure, just if you are interested! Critiques are welcome! 🙂

Will do!

@mineralizedwritings

If the stakes are low, that means there’s not much at stake.

Thanks for explaining. I probably should have used common sense but just wanted to make sure.

@arien

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@mineralizedwritings

Previous to that, my sister and I would make up stories with out stuffies and toys.
Yes, us too! So much fun, right? I would make literally anything I was doing into a story when I was younger–mostly playing outside, but also cooking, cleaning my room, doing laundry, a…

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@mineralizedwritings

Previous to that, my sister and I would make up stories with out stuffies and toys.

Yes, us too! So much fun, right? I would make literally anything I was doing into a story when I was younger–mostly playing outside, but also cooking, cleaning my room, doing laundry, anything! I told my stories out loud, too, so I bet all my…[Read more]

@arien @esther-c @lewilliams @keilah-h @felicity @mineralizedwritings @sarafini

Wow, all of y’all’s stories are so inspiring 😊😍!!
So, I’ve always loved reading. Even when I was little enough to not know how to read, I would sit in the floor with a picture book and try to read to myself and my mama.
When I was about eleven, I was on a zoom call…[Read more]

@orielle21

Fun story! I agree with @mineralizedwritings :

It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting!

Oof, the dialogue thing like @esther-c mentioned can be hard . . . I struggle with making it natural as well. (That’s what happens…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Glad you enjoyed it! 😃😃 I like Joel’s pic too. 😍 What did you mean by low stakes? Is that a term?

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn

Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]

@arien

One thing about writing style: sometimes using more descriptive words for “said” can be distracting and sound contrived.

Yeah, I use said too much. I’ve actually started having my grandma’s I-Pad next to me while I write, and the I-Pad has a list of words to use other than “Said.”

I know, it can be hard not to use “said” all the time, b…

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@mineralizedwritings

Lol! I wright better tired too, but I write slowly.

I think when I’m tired my brain blocks everything else out and just focuses on writing.

@mineralizedwritings

have you heard hills and valleys?) (And sorry to invade your start here topic, she had to hear one right?) XD

No worries….a wonderful invasion!!! Great song!! And absolutely yes, this was a good pick for @lightoverdarkness6 to listen to. I love his Joy In the Morning album, specifically the songs Fake It, Use a Friend, and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Welp… I guess posting it on Wednesday didn’t happen. 🤦🏻‍♀️ 😅 But here it is!! Sorry for making y’all wait so long. I may have forgotten about it… *hides behind pillow* *throws pillow, clears throat, and resumes poise*

Anywho, I put a little bit of the end of the previous chapter…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I have heard that one on the radio before!! I didn’t know his name though. Yes, that’s a great song. He’s got a beautiful voice 😍! Thank you for sharing!