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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!
thanks @jonas for helping me!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@cloakedmystery
really???? i’m gonna try it…
‘The process I described would also give you green lines.’
i hope it works lol
*me casually making a fool out of myself on KP but oh well its ok 😂*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I should have done that but I saw other KP users quoting people with “green lines”, I know I sound like a little kid, haha but idk how else to explain it! So I clicked ‘quote’ and you can see what happened 🤦♀️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
um apparently i did something wrong, hope this still makes sense? sorry, this was my first time quoting someone…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
okay i’m gonna attempt to quote, something I’ve never done before so bear with me if this doesn’t make sense at all:
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Those are good, I cant choose either. Probably 2 and 4 and 7. But then I also like 1, 3, 5 , 6 also 🙂
Wait you like to work out???🤯 I looove working out🤣 My brother thinks I’m crazy, but I think its fun, 😀
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Hi there! I’m Julia, or GRCR! I’m a fiction writer and artist (and a journalist for my fictional newspaper lol)
Welcome to KP! 😁
As is the tradition, here are some “ask the newbie” questions:
If you have any characters, how many do you have?
Which perspective do you enjoy most: first person (I walked), second person (You walked)…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Oooh! I loooove Harry Potter! Which book is your favorite? I absolutely can not skateboard at all but can roller skate.🤣 I’m not a big fan of fishing, my brother loves it so he makes me do it with him, but I also love to go shooting with my dad, we have a big property and a shooting range in the woods! 😀 Nice to meet you!
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Allison replied to the topic Howdy! New here in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Welcome! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m also homeschooled and I’m in 10th grade. I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Hi! I haven’t seen/talked with you in a while, how are you doing?💗
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Allison replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years ago
I don’t know how I missed this, but want to say that I love this poem! The lines…
“And what dreams do I
Hold close in my heart?
Is the sailing of my boat a start?”
and
“But I am not a bird nor a wife, and my dreams
Are shining, a full moon tonight:
The darker my night, the
Brighter my dreams,”
Those are perfect, beautiful…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Thank you!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Oh boy… what is gonna happen… 😃
Once again, I have one question: Is Willow in the house with Kydon in the first paragraph?
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Thank you guys! I’m glad you like it!😂
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
@whalekeeper @hybridlore @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76
Here is a short description on how my main characters parents met, do you like it? Does it seem real?
Susanna (Anna) and Blake Smith are the parents to all the Smith children. They met at the grocery store in High school when Blake, who was stocking the shelves at the time, was high up…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Rose in Wonderland: A Novel Idea I’ve Been Developing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years ago
@crocheter12 I love this idea! I would totally read this!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Exactly! My siblings are 7 (my little brother, Ethan) and 11 (my little sister, Hallie). Hallie does my chicken chores in the morning cuz I’m at school hehe
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